my poem “Initiation” up to Vita Brevis Poetry Magazine #poem #published

deification of the virgin nymph
within my palms
the flesh of violet sunsets flips like fish on land
my eyes, inheritors of light
singular sinkholes punctuating a low sky
your love…
continue reading with WP here
or
on Vita Brevis Press here.

@short-prose-fiction (Gabriela M.)

image: Everett – Art; Shutterstock; [link]

 

75 thoughts on “my poem “Initiation” up to Vita Brevis Poetry Magazine #poem #published

      1. Good, I guess. I already have material for a chapbook, but I wanna try with sth longer. See what comes out of it.
        This will, of course, take longer but I’m willing to take that risk.

         
    1. Thank you so much, my dearest Rene. Your beautiful words made me really happy.
      Have a wonderful rest of the day.

       
  1. So beautifully you put pen to paper. Your words are stunning your phrases remarkable. Love πŸ’• Joni. Hope you are having an inspiring and blessed day my friend.

     
    1. Thank you so much, my dearest Joni. I am so humbled by your words. I am on a break after 12 hours of work and I may have to work late in the night. So I am touched by your wishes.
      Blessings and love right back to you my dear πŸ’•

       
      1. My most sincere thanks, Joni. Well, Its another day and your lovely words and your blessings will be with me.
        πŸ’•πŸŒΈπŸŒΊπŸ™

         
  2. This is a most beautiful poem! It has the most rhythmic visuals and the grace and tenderness you rarely find and lovely verses, meaningful and emotional. Love it! Fantastic work Gabriela. Β‘Enhorabuena!
    All the best,
    Francesc

     

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