deification of the virgin nymph
within my palms
the flesh of violet sunsets flips like fish on land
my eyes, inheritors of light
singular sinkholes punctuating a low sky
your love…
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@Gabriela Marie Milton
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“The danger of me”. A very interesting line.
Thank you 🙂
Nice piece…and published.
Well Done
Thank you so much. I am very grateful for your comment.
L’épreuve s’allume
la flamme se roule au vent
une langue de pluie remonte de l’entrejambe au sourire innocent….
N-L
Quels beaux mots. Merci beaucoup.
Merci Gabriela…
Je t’en prie 🙂
Awesome. Every line is beautiful.Love the line: ….like the fish flips on land. 👍😍
Thank you so much. I am thrilled you enjoyed that line.
xoxo
Always a pleasure. 😊💕
xoxo
Congrats!
Thank you, Matt.
Congrats!
Hey, Andrew, thank you so much.
You’re welcome.
😉
Wonderful news!
Thank you kindly.
My pleasure.
🙂
Can’t help it, Gabriela – I keep reading ‘fish and chips’!
Haha. Eric, why do you have to be so English? 🙂
The quarter Scot is even worse!
I though it was more romantic 🙂
Going deeper and deeper. Brian loves your style. Way to go, Gab.
Thank you Bo. I really hope he does. How is your book coming?
xoxo
Good, I guess. I already have material for a chapbook, but I wanna try with sth longer. See what comes out of it.
This will, of course, take longer but I’m willing to take that risk.
I am keeping my fingers crossed. Can’t wait to read it.
xoxo
One fine day…when we’re old and grey. 🙂
Are you talking about us? Never.
Old but resilient.
What about forever young and resilient?
That goes without saying. The nature’s relentless, though.
The spirit shall remain, regardless.
😊
This is a amazing G. “Flipping like a fish out of water”
Thank you, Jude. Kind as always 🙂
You have an amazing way with words🤩
So do you 🙂
😊☺️thank you
My pleasure.
More accolades – and much deserved – for your wonderful work. Congratulations!
Thank you Rob. It means a lot to me 😊🤗
This is a gorgeous classical romantic poem G, I am glad it is getting the recognition it deserves, the art is amazing as well! Congratulations!!
Thank you so much, my dearest Rene. Your beautiful words made me really happy.
Have a wonderful rest of the day.
You deserve so much recognition dear G. You have a lovely evening as well!
Thank you so much, Rene.
🙏🤗💕
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Stunning!! Love 💕 Joni
Thank you so much, my dear. Your kindness always makes my days warmer.
xox0
Congratulations!!!!
Thank you Valerie. 💕🌸💝
Such evocative imagery!
Thank you so much
xoxo
My pleasure, dear and congratulations! 💐❤️
xoxo
So beautifully you put pen to paper. Your words are stunning your phrases remarkable. Love 💕 Joni. Hope you are having an inspiring and blessed day my friend.
Thank you so much, my dearest Joni. I am so humbled by your words. I am on a break after 12 hours of work and I may have to work late in the night. So I am touched by your wishes.
Blessings and love right back to you my dear 💕
I mean it sincerely, you are welcome my friend. Hope you get some rest soon. Hugs and love my friend. 💕 Joni
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Have an amazingly beautiful and blessed day today my friend. Love 💕 Joni
My most sincere thanks, Joni. Well, Its another day and your lovely words and your blessings will be with me.
💕🌸🌺🙏
Flesh of violet sunsets… Oh my that was vividly stunning
My most sincere thanks. I am thrilled you enjoyed that line.
❤️💙😘
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Lovely.
Thank you Mark.
Last for lines are most amazing,dear G!! And most congratulations for publishing your poem.Weldon,my dear!!
Kind thanks, dear.
Nice and unique piece among all poem ,admirable poem by you.congratulation,dear!!
Thanks a lot, my dear. You are very kind.
Most welcome,my amazing poet!!
This is a most beautiful poem! It has the most rhythmic visuals and the grace and tenderness you rarely find and lovely verses, meaningful and emotional. Love it! Fantastic work Gabriela. ¡Enhorabuena!
All the best,
Francesc