Attic Melancholy – poetic prose/poem by Gabriela Marie Milton

In this attic, there is no light anymore. Nothing penetrates the small windows from which we used to watch the moonโ€™s rays playing on the chestnut leaves during our first autumn.
In darkness, I sit down and wrap a piece of a burned candle around loves which are born out of pity. How pathetic.
I hear a whisper: perhaps my old toys locked inside the old Spanish chest.  They still talk among themselves, donโ€™t they?
You were right. Iโ€™ve never been what I appeared to be: an ordinary girl walking in the streets and drinking mocktails in bars.

I used to laugh. Yet you did not drown in my laughter. You vanished inside my melancholy; inside the dead world to which Iโ€™ve always aspired. Youโ€™ve remained there forbidding my laughter for fear of not forgetting me.
Oh, that loyalty of yours amid all temptations.  

The night is blessed with darkness, which makes way for light in the morning.

I am the night.

Nobody escapes me.

You knew it. 



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33 thoughts on “Attic Melancholy – poetic prose/poem by Gabriela Marie Milton

  1. Okay… I truly love these lines:

    “I used to laugh. Yet you did not drown in my laughter. You vanished inside my melancholy; inside the dead world to which Iโ€™ve always aspired. Youโ€™ve remained there forbidding my laughter for fear of not forgetting me.”

    And the ending 3 lines as well. The visuals throughout this poetic prose piece are vividly poignant. You drummed up a nice storyline, too. Lovely writing, indeed.

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