my eyes are water wells
mirroring your body
into a time which shrinks
my lips shine on stained glass
windows to the sea
a virgin violin
faints into your lap
sick with jealousy
the summer hangs in trees
seduction
fantasy
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Gabriela Marie Milton
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BEAUTIFUL words, Gabriela. ๐๐๐น๐นโโ
Thank you Patrick. I hope you got a great start of the day!
Beautiful ๐คโฅ๏ธ
Thank you so much!
A beautifully poem rich with vivid imagery โฆ.
The “virgin violin” fainting into a lap, sick with jealousy, evokes a powerful sense of vulnerability and longing โฆ
Truly a mesmerizing and evocative piece โฆ
Aw… Dearest Roksana, thank you from the bottom of my heart. Your words made my morning. Sending love.
xoxo
My absolute pleasure to be here and read your poetic piece! โค๏ธ
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Beautiful, Gabriela.
Thank you so much Tim. I am glad you like the piece. Lots of hugs to everyone.
Wow !
Love this poem ๐
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I feel so honored.
xoxo
Aww you are so very welcome ๐
My pleasure to read your beautiful lines xox
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I got chills
Aw,,, thank you so much! Big hugs.
Le beautiful.
Merci ๐
Vous accueillez trรจs gracieusement votre Gabrielaness
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Love this, Gabriella
Thank you so much my dearest Beth ๐โค๏ธ๐น
Just beautiful!
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So beautiful, Gabriella!! Love it!
Thank you dearest Ana ๐๐น
Alluring. It brings seduction to the reader, too. Thank you, Gabriela.
Thank you so much dear Gerald. I am glad you enjoyed the piece ๐๐น
Your image is captivating, Gabriela and your words a stunning complement. ๐
Thank you so much sweet Michele. You are fabulous ๐โค๏ธ๐น๐ธ
You’re welcome, kind and generous you! Thank you. ๐ฉท๐
My pleasure hon. Enjoy the rest of your day ๐๐นโค๏ธ
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xoxo
Stunningly sensuous.
Thank you so much Dawn ๐๐นโค๏ธ
wow! ๐
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What a beautiful and sultry composition, Gabriela. Thank you so much for sharing.
Oh, Blanca, my dear, thank you so much for your kind words. You made me happy ๐โค๏ธ๐นโค๏ธ
Very romantic.
Thank you so much dearest Mary ๐โค๏ธ๐น
Wow! This is what I was missing! Truly mesmerizing like the old times! Gab, this is so beautiful.๐๐
Thank you so much sweetheart. I am so humbled by your words. Yes, things have changed. Anyway, I hope you are ok. Sending you lots of love๐๐นโค๏ธ
My pleasure, dear. Your verse took me back in time. I am ok. Hope you are fine. Much live to you too. ๐๐
*love
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Same to you hon. Much Love.
xoxo
Have you ever put this beautiful writing into
Beyond gorgeous, Gabriela๐
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It is so beautiful like a sweet soft romantic music. Love the poetry.
Thank you so much hon. Itโs been long. I hope you are ok. Sending love โค๏ธ
Doing good. How are you?
(hearts)
I am fine hon. Glad you are ok.
The love you described, is so deep and, passinate, it’s something we all, long to, behold, but, not everybody is, entitled to it.
Thank you so much for your beautiful words. I am really humbled ๐โค๏ธ๐น
Thank you for painting such a vivid and emotional picture with your words!
Thank you for your kind words ๐๐น
This is beautiful โ๏ธ
Thank you so much ๐๐น
Your welcome ๐
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The imagery in your words paint beauty and wonderful. ๐
Thank you so much. So glad to hear from you ๐น
You are welcome, Gabriela. ๐
I am officially back. If you’re interested I posted 3 poems. Hope you enjoy them. ๐
Glad to have you back. I am traveling but I will get to you soon ๐น
Beautiful!
Thank you so much Kerri ๐๐นโค๏ธ
You are so talented! Iโve been reading your blog for years, and I am looking forward to your writing ๐ ๐ ๐