In the mood for you – poem by Gabriela Marie Milton
The richness of the butterscotch sunsets, heated bodies, eyes pregnant with desires, incandescent spaces between the skin & white shirts stiffed with starch, heads turned toward the sea, a rose between your teeth, doors undone, amor, the judgement day is not here, letβs die on the petals of the wind.
featured painting: In the mood for love – MM Ciciovan
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Gabriela Marie Milton
Books:
Hidden in Childhood: A Poetry Anthology (ed.), Literary Revelations, 2023
Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women (ed.), Experiments in Fiction, 2022.
Woman: Splendor and Sorrow :I Love Poems and Poetic Prose, Vita Brevis Press, 2021.
Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings, Vita Brevis Press, 2020
Superb π
Thank you Vasiliki.
Genial Gabriela. Un abrazo πΉ
Muchas gracias. Dos abrazos π
Beautiful β€οΈ poetry, dear Gabriela πβ¨
Aw… Phil, thank you so much!
Gorgeous and succinct a poem! <3
Thank you so much dearest Layla.
Stunning ink βοΈπβοΈ
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
xoxo
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So beautiful poem..!
Thank you so much. I am so glad you like it.
Its my pleasure, kindly follow my blog..!
Gorgeous and so evocative with a subtle sensuality (that you do so well:) “Butterscotch sunsets” with “a rose between your teeth” I see it all and the open door behind you invites. I adore how you write dear Gabriela. Even in a few short lines, the movie rolls out…πΉ
Thank you so much my dearest Karima. Your beautiful words made my day. Sending you huge hugs and love. I hope you are ok.
xoxoxo..
Iβm doing well thank you π and I finished my Umahmad story when you have time to visit. Big Hugss Gabriela
I was reading through hon and I have tears in my eyes. I did not finish yet… you will be in my heart forever Karima dearest.
and you must certainly are in mine β€οΈ
Thank you so much hon.
Wonderful poem, Gabriela.
Thank you so much Timothy.
Gorgeous poem!!! xoxo β€οΈπΉβ€οΈπΉβ€οΈ
Thank you so much Ely dear πΉπΊπΈβ€οΈ
You are most welcome dearest Gabriela! β€οΈπΉπΊπΉβ€οΈπΉβ€οΈπΊβ€οΈ
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Beautiful imagery
Thank you Joseph. I hope you are well πΈ
I’m fine. Going through strong spiritual movements on my spiritual journey. I’ve been writing a lot lately and I’m going to take up painting. How are you?
Glad to hear Joseph. Taking up painting is wonderful. I am fine too. Thank you for asking. Tired but fine.
Rest! You don’t want to burn out. Reenergize your battery. Sometimes pulling away is Ok.
I plan to do that very soon Joseph. Take care.
So visuallllll
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Lovely.
Thank you so much Heather. Sending a big hug.
You’re welcome.
xoxo
Too hot for me π
Sending a bunch of ice your way Jorge π
Descriptive and sensual writing, Gabriela! Love the phrase, “butterscotch sunsets” ~ beautiful! π
Thank you so much Michele. I am so grateful for your kind words and support.
xoxo
My pleasure! πΉ
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That line stood out to me as well! π
Thank you so much!
Wonderful! π
Thank you so much dearest Michele πΉ
You’re welcome! π»
Lovely imagery. Passions vividly expressed, Gabriella! <3
Thank you my dearest Cheryl. It means so much to me you like it β€οΈ
Wonderful poem, I love βeyes pregnant with desire,β I felt and imagined that!
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Thank you so much. I am glad you like that ππΊπΉ
Lovely β€οΈ
Thank you ππΊπΉ
Wonderful
Thank you so much ππΊπΉ
Gorgeous, Gabriela! Always a delight to read your glorious words! π€
Thank you so much hon. Have a wonderful weekend.
xoxo
Always my pleasure. xoxo
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Eyes pregnant with desires
Love the use of pregnant here it’s powerful and intensifies the desire immensely.
Evocative and visceral as always, Gabriela.
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What a beautiful comment. I am so glad you liked that phrase Vanessa. Thank you from the bottom of my heart ππΊπΊβ€οΈβ€οΈ
You never fail to evoke the senses in delight Gabriela. Those last lines stole the show. You are a show stopper! Wait that is one line.. hahahaha love it Gππππ
Thank you dearest Cindy πππ
Always Gabriela! π
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Beautiful!
Thank you so much Nora.
Amazing poem π
Thank you dearest Jade ππΊπΈπΉ
Stunning! <3
Thank you so much.
So very beautiful!
Thank you so much Jeff. I truly appreciate the support.
Letβs die on the petals of the wind… wow!
Thank you so much dearest B. I hope you are well hon. Sending lots of love β€οΈ
Very well, just came back from an Easter break! How are you? Love, as always
I hope you had a wonderful Easter break, I am fine hon, thank you for asking.. Getting reading to close the semester and take off to Europe, I am ready for a vacation!
xoxo
How exciting to be travelling! I hope you’ll have a wonderful time and lots of inspired moments! Big hugs!
Thank you so much hon. I am really looking forward to this trip πΈπΊπΉ
I can understand that! π»π·πΊ
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Romantic and beautiful β€οΈ
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I am glad you enjoyed it πΊπΈπΊβ€οΈ
Your words gave me the chills. ‘let’s die on the petals of the wind’ this is wonderful. Its superbly crafted. You are fabulous as always Gab. I love reading your work.
Oh, sweet Kritika, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind words. I hope you are well hon. Sending lots of love your way.
xoxo
I am doing great, kindly. How are you? So excited to read your words and others.
I am glad you are well. I am fine hon. Just very busy. Very excited to read your words too.
Great that you are well and busy. Happy for you. π Thank you (hearts)
Thank you too hon β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you so much hon. lots of love.
xoxo
This is amazing and reading this is really rewarding
Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it ππΉπΊ
A gorgeous piece, Gabriela. I love the paradox of death and aliveness. Have a beautiful Sunday. xoxo
Thank you so much Jeff. Have a beautiful Sunday too.