My poem “the hour of sunsets” featured in Heretics, Lovers, and Madmen #poem #poetry

My poem “the hour of sunsets” featured in Heretics, Lovers, and Madmen

frontiers of my being
the hour of sunsets has come
with bare hands I drown you in the coldest seas
red lilies burn…

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54 thoughts on “My poem “the hour of sunsets” featured in Heretics, Lovers, and Madmen #poem #poetry

  1. Beautiful, Gabriela.

    ‘I step into the land of fantasies that are not mine’
    ‘destinies melt in the taste of coffee and mistrust’

    The first such a poetic truth, and the second, such a reality of that sunset hour! 🙂

     
  2. Gabriela, your poetry never ceases to amaze me with the inspiration of of your well-crafted prose. Hmm, the hour of sunsets sends each of us into another night of dreams.

     
  3. And please G, do tell me you have a poetry prose collection for sale or in the process of coming to the market. I would love to have it on my small bookshelf collection of treasures.

     
    1. Oh, your beautiful words really brought tears in my eyes. Tears of joy. Thank you.
      Yes I am working on a book of poetry. 🤗💕🌸

       
  4. Good afternoon G,

    Congratulations. This piece deserves to be displayed to the world.

    It was epic. So many great, vivid lines here.

    “the hour of sunsets has come
    with bare hands I drown you in the coldest seas”

    I am always in awe of your poetry and prose. Who could write something like this? Only you.

    I step into the land of fantasies that are not mine
    I play with dreams like children play with kites”

    I dream to be able to write half as well as you do. Your imagination and ability to paint
    pictures is amazing.

    “was that a ray of light?
    skyscrapers yawn
    destinies melt in the taste of coffee and mistrust”

    Don’t know what else to say. BRAVO.
    You will always be my favorite poet.

     
    1. Good morning, Drew
      Your comment took my breath away. I do not know if I deserve the praise. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
      May you have a fabulous day filled with love and sunshine.
      G.

       
  5. Amazing metaphor”fire is taller than sky to burst my pragnant heart….”gorgeous.you are wonderful poet,dear G!! If you allow me then i can ask you -from where do you take so much pain in your mostly poems.plz if you mind my question then forgive me .

     
    1. My dearest Aruna, thank you so much for your kind words and for being here for me most of the time. As for the question… the answer is I really do not know.
      Be well, my friend.
      xoxo

       
      1. I think -all poet is imaginative by nature and blessed by God,my dear.be well and feel relax🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘

         
    1. Thank you so much, Charlie. I am thrilled you enjoyed the poem. I am sorry for my late reply. I was out of the country for a while. Hope everything is well with you my friend.

       
  6. I was so into it, couldn’t get enough of it. That is why it felt like it ended too fast for me. No wonder your poems always get featured on such sites. And I missed them so much.

     

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