The Miracle of You – A Poem from Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings and a Review by Fabian Bats

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Below is the opening poem from one of my #1 Amazon bestsellers, Passions: Love Poems and Other Writing, and a review by Fabian Bats that, in the beginning, refers to The Miracle of You. Fabian got it!


The Miracle of You

the moonโ€™s right-hand
pours soul into my flesh
pigeonsโ€™ wings bring scents of lilac blooms
the air gets drunk with poetry
statuary women of the water
flaunt their hair

within the loneliness of you
my heart
rotates five equinoxes on a wooden spindle
your eyes pour flesh into my soul
my body germinates the sounds of growing leaves
I wash my hands into the waters of Guadalquivir
in the scented night of those who never sleep
I say
I love you
and in one single breath
our wedding is transformed
in an enraptured death


Review by FABIAN_BATS — Passions: Love Poems and Other …

Post by FABIAN_BATS ยป 05 May 2020, 19:05

[Following is a volunteer review of “Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings” by Gabriela Marie Milton.]

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4 out of 4 stars


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Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings by Gabriela Marie Milton is a book of 126 poems; 84 love poems, 6 Italian, and 36 others. In the foreword, the author was praised for her ability to pour out passion, from within her creative mind, into her poetry, and this raised my expectations for deep and insightful poems significantly. The author makes good use of the acknowledgments section, by communicating with the reader, which I liked. There is also a responsive table of contents at the start of the book that allows the reader to resume reading with ease.

As the title indicates, love is an overriding theme in this collection of poems, and the book is opened with one of such. The first poem is my favorite in the book; it took a few re-reads to grasp, but when I did, I instantly thought to myself โ€œGenius!โ€.

After my first read, I had no clue what I had just read, โ€œwhat is the link between the title and the poem?โ€, I thought, racking my head and moving on to the next poem, hoping for less murky waters to swim in -at the start of the book, it is humorous, I know. However, when I came back to read it again, and started seeing links, I felt butterflies, I marveled at the beauty of the words chosen and how a particular figure of speech was used here or there, and when the stars aligned in my mind, I saw clearly that the author was referring to the night of a honeymoon (it could mean a host of other things to other readers, simply because poetry is art). From this point onward, it was difficult to put the book down.

Geographical locations are referred to in metaphors and other figures of speech. Landmarks in Spain are mentioned several times in the book, and Spanish history is also referenced. A few other landmarks are also referenced; hence prior knowledge of Geography would make the poems all the more enjoyable.

The Italian translations section also has the English text placed by the side. The poems in Italian were very similar to the poems in the previous chapters, that were centered on love, however, one of the best poems in the book, in my opinion, was in that section, โ€œLanguor of love/Languoreโ€. The final section in the book, โ€œProse poems and flash fictionโ€, had more understandable content, and two of my favorites from it were โ€œArtโ€ and โ€œThoughtsโ€. They were written simply and beautifully.

I liked the wordplay very much, the figurative expressions were so well fused, that a wandering mind would be unable to grasp. This book is an advanced work of poetry, with complex rhyming schemes that change per chapter. It must be read with maximum concentration. This is a book of poems so I would recommend this book to those who like poetry, especially the romantic genre, and have at least beginner-level experience in poetry (like myself), also those who want to delve into poetry for the first time, can give it an attempt at their own risk.

The book has no profane language and mild sensual content, which could easily grow within oneโ€™s mind whilst reading. I rate this book 4 out of 4 stars, for being professionally edited, conveying a series of beautiful messages powerfully, and being a one of a kind book in its genre.

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โ€œWith lush language and lavish imagery, Gabriela Marie Milton. evokes a fantastic world ripe with emotion.โ€
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13 thoughts on “The Miracle of You – A Poem from Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings and a Review by Fabian Bats

    1. Thank you so much sweetheart. I love you with all my heart. So sorry for my late reply. Wishing you a wonderful week โค๏ธ๐ŸŒนโค๏ธ๐ŸŒน

    1. Thank you from the bottom of my heart my dearest Lauren. Sending love ๐ŸŒท๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿค—

  1. It really is a splendid poem! “Your eyes pour flesh into my soul” is such a strong delightful image… and the subtle rhyme at the very end, breath and death… sound like a gorgeous miraculous rebirth to me. A metamorphosis.

    1. Thank you so much, my dearest Nicole, for your beautiful comment. I am humbled by your words, hon. Love.

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