I want to burn inside the rhythms of the flamenco,
flame in the dancers’ passion in the streets of old Córdoba
I want to entertain rich masters for a piece of bread
inside the silent cries of those who are misunderstood
I want the desperation of the dancers dressed in red.
My goodness What intensity! Thank you, Gabriela.
Thank you so much Gerald. I am deeply grateful for your support!
Such a beautiful poem! Bravo!
Beautiful poem with such a great finale!!! ❤️
Thank you so much dearest Ana. I M glad you enjoyed it 🌹❤️
My absolute pleasure!! I loved it ❤️
xoxo
Dramatic imagery.
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Impressive… This is a masterpiece… Brilliantly pieced together
Thank you from the bottom of my heart Benjamin. I am humbled by your words. You comment took my breath away!
You’re welcome, Gabriela♥️
Oh, yes. And flamenco does have a desperate sense about it. Beautiful!
Thank you so much dearest Mary. That’s absolutely true. It does for many reasons that link back to what some people consider its beginning.
I am thrilled you enjoyed the poems. Thank you again 🙏🌹🌹🌹
Excellent poem, Gabriela. I believe you know that we studied flamenco in Spain.
Thank you so much dear Tim. I know. I remember that very well. You guys are pros when it comes to many things 🌹🌹🌹
How are you and your kitties doing?
They are doing very well Tim. Thank you for asking. How are yours?
They are peeved because we have a dog now.
You have a dog !!! What’s his name?
Jake.
Very power full words, Gabriela! ❤️
Thank you John. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a beautiful evening 🙏✨🌹
You’re welcome, thank you! 😊
My pleasure 🥀✨
Very powerful words, Gabriela! ❤️
I like this poem very much, particularly the last line.
Thank you so much dearest Liz. You are a gem 🙏🌹
You’re welcome, Gabriela.
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I’d want more than a piece of bread for all this effort.
You made me smile today. Thank you so much dear Carl 🙏😊😊😊
A stunningly beautiful poem, Gabriela! ♥️🌹I absolutely love it!
Aw… thank you so much hon. I love you with all my heart ❤️
It’s always a pleasure to read your poems, Gabriela!
I love you too with all my heart ♥️
Thank you so much hon!
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Love the dancers, love the dance, love the poem!!❤❤❤
Thank you so much my dearest Liz. Sending you lots of love ❤️
Both brilliant and caliente. Well done!
Thank you so much. I am trilled you enjoyed it 🙏🌹
this piece is lit 🔥🔥🔥
Aw…. Thank you love much. Lots of hugs 🤗
Such an evocative poem Gabriela 🫶🏼
I am glad you think so. Thank you from the bottom of my heart 🙏🌹🍂❤️
Most welcome 🙏🏼
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Stunning !
Thank you hon. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Have a beautiful weekend 🙏❤️❤️😊
My pleasure Gabriela.
Thank you ❤️
I wish you the same 🥰🙏🤗
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Una autentica belleza! 🌹
Gracias Francisco 🌹🌹
Un placer Gabriela.
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The inherent passion of the Flamenco comes through in your words. Wonderful poem.
Aw, hon, so great to hear from you. Thank you from the bottom of my heart 🙏🌹 Have a beautiful weekend 🌹❤️
My pleasure, you have a wonderful weekend, also.
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Gorgeous and dramatic, Gabriela! ❤️
Thank you so much sweet Lauren. Have a beautiful weekend 🙏🌹❤️✨
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Sorry for my late reply Tim. Thank you so much for asking. They are doing very well. How are yours?
Some duende spirit for us! Just read The Return ny Victoria Hislop and think she did write well about one of the characters passion for Flamenco.
a lovely write
Thank you my dear Annette 🙏🌹❤️
Love your sensual.
Thank you dear Bo.
I feel so connected to this poem. A portion of love from me. ❤️
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment 🙏🌹
Don’t we all want to feel something? Some are willing to go to great lengths to feel anything, even pain. Such a relatable poem, Gabriella. What a gorgeous photo and the poem is a fitting tribute to a colorful, passionate dance!
Thank you from the bottom of my heat for your kind comment. Enjoy the rest of the week dearest Cheryl.
xoxo
Greetings Gabriela!
Thank you so much dear Flavio. I hope you are well. Greetings from the US 🙏💫
Very passionate!
Thank you Dawn 🙏❤️🌹
Wonderful poem Gabriela,
I review poetry past and present on my own page. I hope you don’t mind, but I did that for this poem. I’ve shared the link below. If you have any issues, I’ll immediately take it down.
Congrats on your success to date, Pushkin nomination is something for us all to strive for. I’m looking forward to seeing more great work from you.
Thank you Adam.
Nice post 🌺🌺
Such a beautiful and intricately described poem!!!! I love the sense of desperation and urgency it creates, and how it makes me wanna learn flamenco…!!!! I wish I could write like that ( I mean I do write, but I’m only 13.)
And oh, would you be kind enough of reviewing my post? And comment with suggestions and feedback! Thank you so much! ☺️
I loved the pace and the energy in the poem.
Beautiful!
Thank you Jeff 🙏🌹
Very lively and Intense.
Thank you so much 🙏🌹
It’s fantastic writing. So rich in imagery and a sense of song.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart ❤️
This is excellent!
Thank you very much 🙏🌹