My Poem Dark Love up at Vita Brevis #poem #poetry #published

My poem Dark Love is now up at Vita Brevis Poetry Magazine.

green, you smell with your tongue
your thoughts pollinate mine
your fingers endanger the sailors
a water which opens its lips and drinks them
ah, hour of man
when did you become the hour of horrors?
a book cover reads: Dictionary of Superstitions
I see the girl who tears out…

continue reading with WP here.
or
at Vita Brevis Press here.

Thank you.
Love.
Gabriela

@short-prose-fiction (Gabriela Marie Milton)

featured image: Dmytro Vietrov; Shutterstock; [link]

108 thoughts on “My Poem Dark Love up at Vita Brevis #poem #poetry #published

  1. Absolutely gorgeous poem!!! ๐Ÿ˜โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ I love it!!! ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ’–
    I send you a very big hug full of affection!!! ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

    1. Thank you so much my dearest Ely. You are a sweetheart โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

  2. Congratulations, my dear. I re-read the poem because itโ€™s just that amazing to absorb it all with its impact and imagery. Very dark and intriguing imagery evocative to longing, want and poignancy. Itโ€™s such a beautiful, mesmerizing pieceโ€”you always blow me away with your heartfelt poetry and prose.

    So marvelous and intriguing, this piece, that I will give it more reads in the future too. It is very inspiring and moving. I enjoyed reading it very much!

    1. My dearest Lucy.
      You are such a sweetheart. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your beautiful comment and for your support. I am touched by every word you wrote. I do not know what else to say. Sending you plenty of love and hugs. May your rest of the day be marvelous.
      Love
      G.

  3. Congratulations sweetheartโ™ฅ๏ธ
    I remember, this poem is absolutely amazing, gorgeous and sublime. One cannot forget your beautiful words.

    “love
    dark love
    with pins in his heart the pigeon still flies”
    Lovely๐Ÿ’ž

    Love and hugs dear๐Ÿ˜˜โฃ
    Ishita

    1. Thank you so much Ishita. You are a gem ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒธโค๏ธ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒธ๐ŸŒธ

  4. I remember this poem which reduced my husbandโ€™s excellent and considerable vocabulary to โ€œWowโ€ when I read it out loud to him after reading it several times myself. I enjoy your poems myself first, I am a bit selfish that way.

    It takes us through such an amazing adventure with so many exquisite visuals that one,is,left speechless.

    The introduction of the book she sees brings a dark and mysterious world to this piece. I loved that gorgeous turn.

    The ending is superbly done. Just an incredible piece beautiful Button. Congratulations on the publication as well dear friend. With much love ๐Ÿ’• and appreciation for your gift, Honeybun.

    1. What a beautiful comment Joni. You are really a blessed soul. You spread love and kindness. We all need that now. We all need to thank you for your fantastic words of support.
      May you have the most wonderful weekend ever sweetheart.
      Love
      G (Button)

      1. Oh thank you dearest Button. Your words are so special to me. It is so true we all need kindness and love right now. You have an amazing weekend as well my dear friend. Love you Button. โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒบ๐Ÿงš๐Ÿป๐Ÿงš๐Ÿป๐Ÿงš๐Ÿปhoneybun

      2. My pleasure ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐ŸŒท๐ŸŒฟ

    1. Oh, my, thank you so much my dearest friend. You know you are the star today. I am a simple afterthought. I owe you an email. I will write to you in the evening.
      Thank you again. Take care.
      xoxo

    1. Navin, thank you so much for your kind words and for the nomination. I left a comment on your site. I hope you got it.
      Wow, what can I say? I can read your posts again. That’s a real treat.
      Lots of love and hugs
      G

    1. Good morning Rene. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kindness and your support.
      I hope everything is well and you are staying safe.

      1. My pleasure hon. I am ok. Make your day fabulous and inspiring.
        xoxo

    1. Thank you so much for your wonderful words Punam. I am humbled by them. Wishing you a beautiful weekend sweetheart ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒนโค๏ธ๐ŸŒธ

      1. ๐Ÿ™๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ€๐ŸŒบ

    1. Oh, Amy, thank you so much for your beautiful words. I am humbled by your praise. You made my afternoon. I am running to find fresh flowers for you. I will send them as soon as I can. Much love ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒธ

      1. I can just about smell those flowers, thank you. Really, thank you. I’ve had a tough couple of weeks. Aiming high and getting there ….. much love to you! xo

      2. I am sorry to hear that Amy. Stay high where is light and love. The flowers are coming ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒธโค๏ธ

      3. Amy, you are love. I know that. You can shine. Please do not leave anyone to steal your happiness. Nobody has the right to do that ๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’•

      4. You’re right nobody has the right to steal my happiness. I’ve been getting some very hard unexpected cruel verbal punches from those I deemed friends. No longer are they on my friends list. Their energy has changed and not for the better. I’m getting brighter and just am so so sensitive right now. I’m being very careful who crosses paths with me right now. (((HUGS))) xo

      5. I am glad you decided to remove negative people from your friends list. It could be hard but most of us go through this. As least those of us who donโ€™t want to be hurt for nothing. Be well Amy. You are loved. ๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒน

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