45 thoughts on “My poem “illusions” published by Literary Yard #poetry

  1. “a crow gets strangled in a myth
    a morbid verse hangs on a cross”

    Like a gothic horror film, washed in dread. Amazing stuff, Gabriela.

     
    1. Hi Rob,
      Thank you! Did I manage to write something like a Gothic horror film? I’ve never thought I could do it. Apparently I did it.
      Have a fabulous day.

       
      1. Rob, all I am saying is that I did not think I was capable to create such atmosphere. I’m still discovering things about myself. Your comment was really helpful. And, of course, you are always very nice to me πŸ™‚

         
  2. G, this had darker feeling than your usual poetry, but peeking out in this gorgeous piece is a melancholy finale that echoes. To doubt/question one’s love, then say we are someone else’s dream. That is haunting and sad. I can’t tell you how this one resonated. But you know me well enough, to know I would adore this one.

    Congrats on the publication of this piece. It deserved to be recognized.

     
    1. Hola Drew
      Thank you so much for the congrats and the praise. I hope the praise is deserved πŸ™‚
      I agree it’s haunting and it’s sad. I am moving from warm to cold. From the rose period to the blue one (like Picasso) LOL
      Thank you for your kindness. Always sweet to me.
      Enjoy the beautiful Florida.
      G.

       
    1. Hi Eric, I am thrilled you found the poem thought provoking.

      Yes, G became Gabriela, and will stay so.

      Thank you for reading and commenting.
      Wising you a wonderful evening

      Gabriela πŸ™‚

       
    1. Thank you for your comment, Charlie. I am glad you enjoyed those lines.
      Perhaps I should start making horror movies πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

       
    1. Aw…you are a wonderful poet. I think I said this today.
      Thank you so much for the comment and for the congratulations πŸ™πŸŒΈ

       
      1. You are too kind. Let’s not make any comparison. You deserve accolades too 😊🌸

         

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