cemeteries
open tombs scream flesh and bone
yellow…
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My poem “illusions” published by Literary Yard #poetry
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Poetry and Prose by Gabriela Marie Milton #1 Amazon Bestselling Poet & Editor, Award Winning Author, Pushcart Prize Nominee
“a crow gets strangled in a myth
a morbid verse hangs on a cross”
Like a gothic horror film, washed in dread. Amazing stuff, Gabriela.
Hi Rob,
Thank you! Did I manage to write something like a Gothic horror film? I’ve never thought I could do it. Apparently I did it.
Have a fabulous day.
There is a distinct and possibility/probability that I completed whiffed on the interpretation. 😀
Rob, all I am saying is that I did not think I was capable to create such atmosphere. I’m still discovering things about myself. Your comment was really helpful. And, of course, you are always very nice to me 🙂
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G, this had darker feeling than your usual poetry, but peeking out in this gorgeous piece is a melancholy finale that echoes. To doubt/question one’s love, then say we are someone else’s dream. That is haunting and sad. I can’t tell you how this one resonated. But you know me well enough, to know I would adore this one.
Congrats on the publication of this piece. It deserved to be recognized.
Hola Drew
Thank you so much for the congrats and the praise. I hope the praise is deserved 🙂
I agree it’s haunting and it’s sad. I am moving from warm to cold. From the rose period to the blue one (like Picasso) LOL
Thank you for your kindness. Always sweet to me.
Enjoy the beautiful Florida.
G.
Warn me before you start the Cubism poetry.
Adore the rainbows and every sunset.
You will be the first to know 🙂
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I can’t even draw a straight line 🙂
Straight lines. Thankfully, after two mojitos I can still walk them.
What can I say? You are the best 🙂
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You’re killing me
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That’s awesome! Congratulations!
Thank you so much, Kayla. I am glad you liked it.
Congrats!
Thank you so much, Andrew. I will get back to you tonight. I did not forget.
You’re welcome!
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G become Gabriela … each line revealing yet not all showing – a thought provoking read!
Hi Eric, I am thrilled you found the poem thought provoking.
Yes, G became Gabriela, and will stay so.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Wising you a wonderful evening
Gabriela 🙂
This is different from your usual style and is beautifully haunting. Congratulations, dear.
Thank you so much, my dear ❤️💕🤗
My pleasure! 💞🤗
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My favorite lines:
“a crow gets strangled in a myth
a morbid verse hangs on a cross”
Straight out of a horror movie and captures everything in its essence.
Thank you for your comment, Charlie. I am glad you enjoyed those lines.
Perhaps I should start making horror movies 🙂 🙂 🙂
You may be someone else’s dream but my Zephyr only sooth your listless heart – congratulations you write gold
Aw…you are a wonderful poet. I think I said this today.
Thank you so much for the comment and for the congratulations 🙏🌸
You are more wonderful than me. You deserve all accolades dear
You are too kind. Let’s not make any comparison. You deserve accolades too 😊🌸
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Haha. Can I will. Never 🌸
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Win*
That’s awesome! Congratulations!❤️
Thank you so much, sweetheart.
Congratulations for publishing your poem🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Thank you from the bottom of my heart, dear.