My poem “love letters” published by Vita Brevis

Very grateful to Brian Geiger – the editor of Vita Brevis Poetry Magazine – for publishing my poem “love letters” in his magazine.

i am looking over your love letters
my hands are shaking
winds are trying
to take them away from me
bury them
into the depths of the roiling ocean
i am fighting the winds…
continue reading here.

@short-prose-fiction (Gabriela M)

image: 3355m; Shutterstock; [link]

74 thoughts on “My poem “love letters” published by Vita Brevis

  1. Good morning G. This was a most beautiful poem, hard to say one of your best since I have fallen in love with so many of your poems. Worthy of the reblog and so much more. You are a wonderful poet deserving of much praise.

    Happy for your triumph. I hope this is just the start of a wonderful day for you.

    1. Good morning, Drew!
      Thank you so much for the praise. I am trilled you liked the poem, and very grateful for your support!
      What happened? I do not need to dig for your comments in the dashboard! Did you work your magic on WP?

      1. Ah, it only took a few weeks for them to fix that. Now, I am told my like button doesn’t always work. Life is never perfect.

        But your poetry always is!

        Congrats Amiga. So lucky and inspired to have met you.

      2. Your readers love your work “like button” or not. There!
        I know because I am one of them. I love and I cherish your work.
        Thank you again for your support, my friend!
        May you have the most beautiful day ever!

  2. Congratulations!! on your publication. A beautiful poem with vivid imagery. Loved and left comment on the Vita Brevis site. Nice to know about you a little bit more Gabriela.

    1. Thank you for your praise and for your generosity, Megha! I am lucky to have your support, my dear! May you have a wonderful day and thank you again!

    1. My dear Eric… one of my best friends, and a terrific writer. Thank you for being with me during this journey.

    1. Thank you so much, my dear! I am so glad you enjoyed it. You have nothing to apologize about. You were always supportive and kind. I am very grateful to you.

  3. Oh ! Gabriela , what a beautiful name. Congrads on your publication. I am thrilled so thrilled. What an honor for us to be reading your work.

    1. Thank you my dear! As always my Queen of Poetry is so kind to me. Please, know that is a pleasure and an honor to read your work too🌺💕💐

      1. Gabriela, it’s so nice to finally say your name. Sending you warm hugs and smiles. You take care, My High Priestess of Poetry. You are in a league of your own.

      1. Haha! And you learn where I live. So if it’s Monday and I wish you a good Sunday you know I need course correction 🙂
        Enjoy the rest of your day, my friend!

    1. Aw… I am humbled by your comment, Ash! However, you know how much I appreciate your writings. I am waiting to read your novel.

      1. And I am so flattered you do. The more I learn about you, the more blown away I am that you’re a fan. Novel…eesh, lol, feel free to keep poking me on that.

    1. You do not need to apologize, my dear. Thank you form the bottom of my heart for your support and your kindness. Have a beautiful weekend!

  4. The first time I read this poem I was moved to tears. So many emotions in this gorgeous piece dearest Button.

    “i am laughing
    follies of love
    your teeth leave painful marks
    on my shoulder”

    A painful reminder of passion shared. Perhaps it is because you captured what it feels like, the waiting and longing. Beautiful Button have an amazing week. Sending your love always and flowers. Love, honeybun

      1. Honeybun I saw your new post. I cannot like or comment from my phone. I do not know why. I will be on my computer in the afternoon and visit with you. Beautiful poem 🤗🥰❤️🌹

      2. Thank you so much for reading and your sweet words. I am glad you enjoyed the poem that means a lot to me Button. I look forward to visiting. Love you, Joni ❤️🤗🥰😘💝🦋

      3. My pleasure. I look forward to visiting with you too 🤗🥰❤️🌹🌹❤️🥰

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