poems wrote in other lives line up like soldiers ready for the battle against the Hellenistic decadence creeping in my laughter ….. there are no stars to help the moon dwells in your silence coolness of gray walls in summer nights
….. you think you’ve ever loved? i’m coming after you
Gabriela Marie Milton #1 Amazon Best-Selling Author, 2019 Author of the Year at Spillwords Press NYC; internationally published poet; poetry collections Woman: Splendor and Sorrow (Vita Brevis Pres, July 27, 2021); Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings (Vita Brevis Press, April, 2020)
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Wow G, you give such power to this love in your beautiful words
“you think you’ve ever loved? i’m coming after you”
But there is more to this too…
It’s beautiful
Xoxo
My Dearest R,
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.
“But there is more to this too…” There are more lines, but honestly there is not more to it.
Sending you hugs, hugs, hugs
G.
Trying to gather my thoughts to find the right words. This has a totally different feel to it when compared to your other works. And you’re finale, hmmm, it provo0kes so many
thoughts.
This was totally leather jeans, motorcycle, bad girl all rolled up in one little poem. One of the coolest things I have read in a long time. Wonderful seeing another side of you (your writing). Really enjopyed this. The poems lining up like soldier. Brilliant.
“One of the coolest things I have read in a long time” Thank you so much for the praise. It means a lot to me, Drew.
“Wonderful seeing another side of you (your writing)” I have to admit there are many sides to my writings 🙂
“leather jeans, motorcycle” Haha! You know I may go for a Harley-Davidson 🙂 This place is so much Harley-Davidson.
Take care, Drew.
G
This is a beautiful poem❤️
Thank you so much 🌸
So cool!
Thank you, Nico 🙂
😊
“Love it! 👍
Thank you so much, my dear.
Wonderful. I’ve few other words to say.
My most sincere thanks, Scott.
This snippet leaves one wanting more!
Aw.. I am glad you think so. Thank you very much.
My pleasure!
😊
Oooh please come after me.I love this totally!
Haha! Thank you 🙂
Anytime Short prose.Quite a brilliant mind that is.
You made me smile. Thank you for the compliment.
”you think you’ve ever loved? i’m coming after you” I Iove it, dear G! 😊❤️🌺
Thank you so much, sweetheart.
Hugs, love, and flowers to you.
My pleasure, dear G! 🤗❤️🌺
🙂
Chills G.
You still sick?
I back at work today, coming slowly out of the fog if you know what I mean. 🙂 Thanks for checking on me.
My pleasure, Ash. Glad you are better. Yes, I know what you mean.
Take care.
Well, that made me feel better so I am almost there. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Same here, Ash. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
That last line sure sounds very promising!
Thank you 😊
My pleasure, dearest! 🤗
🙂
“the moon dwells in your silence” This line sings, then resonates! Very nice.
My most sincere thanks, Ryan.
Excellent fragment! Can’t wait to read the entire poem.
Thank you so much, Daniela. So thrilled by your comment.
Wow G, you give such power to this love in your beautiful words
“you think you’ve ever loved? i’m coming after you”
But there is more to this too…
It’s beautiful
Xoxo
My Dearest R,
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.
“But there is more to this too…” There are more lines, but honestly there is not more to it.
Sending you hugs, hugs, hugs
G.
Good afternoon G,
Trying to gather my thoughts to find the right words. This has a totally different feel to it when compared to your other works. And you’re finale, hmmm, it provo0kes so many
thoughts.
This was totally leather jeans, motorcycle, bad girl all rolled up in one little poem. One of the coolest things I have read in a long time. Wonderful seeing another side of you (your writing). Really enjopyed this. The poems lining up like soldier. Brilliant.
You always leave me in awe.
“One of the coolest things I have read in a long time” Thank you so much for the praise. It means a lot to me, Drew.
“Wonderful seeing another side of you (your writing)” I have to admit there are many sides to my writings 🙂
“leather jeans, motorcycle” Haha! You know I may go for a Harley-Davidson 🙂 This place is so much Harley-Davidson.
Take care, Drew.
G
This is incredibly good. I’ve always loved the honesty in your work. The ending is perfect. 🙂
Thank you so much, Charlie. I always love to hear the interpretations of my poems.
Lots of blessings to you my friend 🙂
You are welcome my friend.
All interpretations take us the readers to the writers mind and journey into their beautiful and creative world. 🙂
Bless you so much my friend. 🙂
Thank you, Charlie 🙂
Wow ♥️
🙏💕🌸
Wonderfully done, G, and I’m sure the whole is just as great as the fragment.
Thank you so much, David. As usually your support brightens my days. 🙂
You’re welcome! Happy to hear it
🙂
Wow.an sweet poem like dancing in heart,dear G!!❤
Thank you so much, my dear.
You are always welcome,dearG!!