my newest poem “bewitched” published by the Indian Periodical #poetry

My Dear Readers,
My newest poem “bewitched” published by the Indian Periodical.

perhaps I was bewitched by the North Star
or by a ballad as dateless as my blood
geography of feelings populates unwanted interludes
my eyes, the nests of dewy grass and leaves
emerald eyelashes flaunt
please continue reading here 

Love and hugs to everyone!
G.

image: May_Lana; Shutterstock; [link]

 

67 thoughts on “my newest poem “bewitched” published by the Indian Periodical #poetry

  1. Oh how beautiful and romantic. Apologies for me abrupt reaction.

    Good morning G. Hope you week is starting off well. What an inspiring write. It is distinct from style. Reading it was like discovering a pirate’s treasure in the sand. What a gem.

    The opening lines were enchanting. So perfect to carry us off in a journey of your thoughts. Cut my soul between a stanza and a strife. WOW.

    Whatever you did on the day that you wrote this piece. Do it again. This was an inspiring and totally bewitching read.

     
    1. Good Morning Drew.

      I am humbled by your beautiful words. You made me blush:)
      So delighted you liked the poem.

      “Whatever you did on the day that you wrote this piece. Do it again.” I will certainly try 🙂
      But what are you doing reading poems? (I am happy you read mine :)) Immerse yourself in that magical ocean and let the paradise bewitch you!

      Thank you again, Drew!

       
      1. I am blogging from a hammock (causing a gazillion typos). LOL . Sipping passion fruit and enjoying the shade. Is there a better way to blog?

        Stay bewithcing and inspiring. Hope to hear about your beach vacation one day.
        All work, no play…….

        My pleasure.
        Be happy. Be well. Be loved.

         
    1. Thank you so much, my dear! I am so grateful for your time and comments. You warm my heart!

       
  2. Congratulations yet again! I love the dreaminess of this one, and the line “and cut my soul between a stanza and a strife” is quite possibly my favorite line that I’ve read by you thus far. Not only is that a haunting image, but the word play of associating “strife” and “knife” is fun as well. Hope you’re having a nice morning!

     
    1. Hello David, and thank you very much for your wonderful comment. Always happy to have you read and comment on my work. I am thrilled you enjoyed that line. I like it too 🙂
      Wishing you a fabulous day! Thank you again 🙂
      G

       
      1. Thank you! I will get back to your new post tonight and comment. First read: beautiful 😊

         
    1. Thank you from the bottom of my heart Ash. I really appreciate your comment.
      When you have time please let me know how your poetry reading went 😊

       
      1. Pleasure is all mine. The ready is actually this upcoming Sunday..stay tuned. Trying to choose what to read is the challenge, lol.

         
      2. It’s a challenge because all poems you write are great. I’m am staying tuned 🙂
        Enjoy your day!

         
    1. Thank you so much, Shantanu! I am so pleased you like the poem and the picture.

      I apologize for my late reply. You were right. Today was and still is Monday 🙂

       
      1. I am so humbled by your words. May you have a wonderful blessed week!

         
  3. You bewitch your readers with the grandeur of your words. Your poetry stirs emotions making for a fulfilling read.
    Congrads my dearest G. You are the best things that has happened around here. And I am amazed how humble and down to heart you are. This success has certainly not gone to your head and for that my respect for you has grown.

     
    1. My dearest Y, I am thankful for your kind words. I am grateful for the love that I’ve received until now. I will always be. Glory means nothing to me.
      Be blessed and loved Y! 🌸💕❤️💝
      Gabriela

       
      1. Gabriela, stay strong, stay the way you are. You are special and unique . I am honored to be your friend and soul sister.

         
      2. Love you Y. I am honored to be your friend and your soul sister too. One day maybe we can write something together
        🌸

         
      3. Oh! My! Writin with you would be like travelling to the centre of the cosmos. The thought gives me great happiness. Thank you for thinking so kindly of me.

         
      4. I feel the same my dear. Let’s think about. I’ll be in touch. ❤️

         

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