amour
your secret hides inside my name
inside the splendor of the night in which you didnβt say a word
feathers of macaw birds trace music sheets
the rays of sun stretch on the pebble beach
a fragrant song delights itself on my red lips
i rest my head on your left shoulder
into the lands of spices waiting to be born
we fall
some carnal dreams howl on the corridor
who cares?
i locked the door!
this morning we can die
we wonβt tell a soul
and never ask for more
amour
@short-prose-fiction
image: Liliya Kulianionak; Shutterstock [link]
This is simply brilliant. You can find words to weave love in things I canβt even think of
Aw,,, thank you so much, for your wonderful comment, my dear friend. You made me forget that tomorrow is Monday π
You are so welcome. Let us start a change.org petition for 3 day weekend π
I’m in π Anybody else? π
I am sure the world will be π
If you say so Shantanu… π
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Oh my gosh…..”feathers of macaw birds trace music ” Absolutely beautiful β€οΈ
Thank you so much, my dearest Christine! I am so glad you enjoyed it π
Good Sunday morning G. Hope your day has started off with birds singing outside your window and the sun warming your face.
This is so beautiful. LIke Christine, I adore the line about the “feathers of macaws.” Absolutely gorgeous.
This was a wonderful Sunday treat pulsating with the greatest gift of all – amour.
Loved it!
Good morning, Drew. Thank you for your beautiful comment. It makes my heart beat faster.
I am glad you liked the line about “feather of macaw birds” I like it too π
Thank you once again. I wish you a fabulous Sunday full of wonderful treats, love, and inspiration!
Smiling. Same to you G.
Have a fantabulous day.
Thank you,. You too, Drew!
I love the feel of this; so gentle, like those macaw feathers on the music sheets, immersed in love!
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it π
My pleasure.
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You play with beautiful words. Lovely!!!!
Thank you, my dear. I am delighted by your comment πΈ
Ah, this is amazingly beautiful. Warm and gentle.
Thank you kindly. I am humbled and delighted by your comment.
My pleasure.
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This is a poem I would press like for a hundred times if I could. I love the words, the rhythm, the meaning, and the magical result of all this put together. π
Your words touched my soul profoundly. Thank you! I do not know what else to say.
Consider both our souls touched. Lovely poem!
Thank you again! May you have a beautiful rest of the day π
You too!
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G, this is beautifully done…to die for kind of love! β€οΈ
Thank you so much! I am thrilled you liked it. So grateful to you for kind words.
My absolute pleasure, dear.
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L’amour toujours inspire les poΓ¨tes
Ici tissage des vers sur des mots sensuels
J’essaie ma chΓ¨re BΓ©atrice. Merci pour votre soutien. Bisous
This is gorgeous. What rich and sensuous imagery and so filled with passion and reckless abandon. I love the image you chose to go with it too. Beautiful.
Thank you so much for your beautiful and insightful comment. ! I am so thrilled you liked the poem!
Very beautiful indeed!
Thank you so much π
heart-stopping beauty, your words evoke a passion that consumes – so beautiful
Aw.. thank you so much for such a beautiful comment, Gina! It melted my soul.
as you capture mine!
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A triumphant of the most beautiful poem I’ve ever read. You’ve captured the essence of love. π
Thank you so much! I am so humbled by your words. If I did, may all of us do the same π
Hey,
Iβm working on my debut poetry book and preparing a mailing list. Would you like me to add your e-mail address please? If so, can you share it with me?
I donβt plan to do it like hard core promotion, I will be e-mailing you privately not through any software.
I will just inform you when itβs available and when there is some huge fluctuation in price (sale etc.), as on WordPress reader, posts get lost in stampede.
I wonβt be mailing you more than 4 to 5 times a year, and thatβs max. Promise!
And if you want it to share it privately you can do that through contact form on my blog.
Thank you π
Of course, sweetheart. I am looking very much forward to reading your book. Here is my email: poetryandprose18@gmail.com
thank you. you guys are amazingπ
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Wow. Okay and YES please!!! Transportive. I felt I was in a harem or something….so beautiful!!! Thank You, G. You Cheers! π
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What a beautiful poem of a love that transcends all and where two people can really almost be one soul and heart. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you so much for reading. I am beyond grateful for your kind words.
You write beautifully and those words are well deserved!
Thank you again π
Most lovely lines for amour,dear G.it has some deep meaning.πΉπΉπΉπΉ
Thank you so much, my dear. I am glad you enjoyed it π
I love the word AMOUR,my dear friend.it is my life.πππβ€β€β€β€
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Lost for words G. Love this
Thank you so much, Ash!
absolutely gorgeous, so beautifully penned and the accompanying image!
I am humbled by your words, my dear. Thank you so much!
My pleasure!
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This is so beautiful. If you’d like, check out my blog π yours is FABULOUS!
Hello, my dear. I am humbled by your words. Thank you! On to your blog π
Very seductive. The perfect imagery here with a smooth transitioning of sensual words. Very captivating. β€
My sincere thanks for your beautiful comment. I am delighted you enjoyed the poem!
Ahh… Beautiful words and art go hand in hand. You are welcome. β€β€β€β€β€
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Love poem by Rabindranath Tagore
Thank you dear.
This is a stunner , check out mine which I wrote while unpacking my husbandβs suitcase.
Wonderful!
Thank you, Luisa!
Very well done! Love the carnal dreams howling in the hallway!!
Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed that line π
speechless…………
Aw.. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
you are so very welcome. it was just that good, i didn’t know what to write.
You are really sweet π
bless you!
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