amour
your secret hides inside my name
inside the splendor of the night in which you didn’t say a word
feathers of macaw birds trace music sheets
the rays of sun stretch on the pebble beach
a fragrant song delights itself on my red lips
i rest my head on your left shoulder
into the lands of spices waiting to be born
we fall
some carnal dreams howl on the corridor
who cares?
i locked the door!
this morning we can die
we won’t tell a soul
and never ask for more
amour
@short-prose-fiction
image: Liliya Kulianionak; Shutterstock [link]
This is simply brilliant. You can find words to weave love in things I can’t even think of
Aw,,, thank you so much, for your wonderful comment, my dear friend. You made me forget that tomorrow is Monday 😉
You are so welcome. Let us start a change.org petition for 3 day weekend 😊
I’m in 🙂 Anybody else? 🙂
I am sure the world will be 😊
If you say so Shantanu… 🙂
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Oh my gosh…..”feathers of macaw birds trace music ” Absolutely beautiful ❤️
Thank you so much, my dearest Christine! I am so glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Good Sunday morning G. Hope your day has started off with birds singing outside your window and the sun warming your face.
This is so beautiful. LIke Christine, I adore the line about the “feathers of macaws.” Absolutely gorgeous.
This was a wonderful Sunday treat pulsating with the greatest gift of all – amour.
Loved it!
Good morning, Drew. Thank you for your beautiful comment. It makes my heart beat faster.
I am glad you liked the line about “feather of macaw birds” I like it too 🙂
Thank you once again. I wish you a fabulous Sunday full of wonderful treats, love, and inspiration!
Smiling. Same to you G.
Have a fantabulous day.
Thank you,. You too, Drew!
I love the feel of this; so gentle, like those macaw feathers on the music sheets, immersed in love!
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I am so glad you enjoyed it 🙂
My pleasure.
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You play with beautiful words. Lovely!!!!
Thank you, my dear. I am delighted by your comment 🌸
Ah, this is amazingly beautiful. Warm and gentle.
Thank you kindly. I am humbled and delighted by your comment.
My pleasure.
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This is a poem I would press like for a hundred times if I could. I love the words, the rhythm, the meaning, and the magical result of all this put together. 💛
Your words touched my soul profoundly. Thank you! I do not know what else to say.
Consider both our souls touched. Lovely poem!
Thank you again! May you have a beautiful rest of the day 🙂
You too!
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G, this is beautifully done…to die for kind of love! ❤️
Thank you so much! I am thrilled you liked it. So grateful to you for kind words.
My absolute pleasure, dear.
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L’amour toujours inspire les poètes
Ici tissage des vers sur des mots sensuels
J’essaie ma chère Béatrice. Merci pour votre soutien. Bisous
This is gorgeous. What rich and sensuous imagery and so filled with passion and reckless abandon. I love the image you chose to go with it too. Beautiful.
Thank you so much for your beautiful and insightful comment. ! I am so thrilled you liked the poem!
Very beautiful indeed!
Thank you so much 😊
heart-stopping beauty, your words evoke a passion that consumes – so beautiful
Aw.. thank you so much for such a beautiful comment, Gina! It melted my soul.
as you capture mine!
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A triumphant of the most beautiful poem I’ve ever read. You’ve captured the essence of love. 🙂
Thank you so much! I am so humbled by your words. If I did, may all of us do the same 🙂
Hey,
I’m working on my debut poetry book and preparing a mailing list. Would you like me to add your e-mail address please? If so, can you share it with me?
I don’t plan to do it like hard core promotion, I will be e-mailing you privately not through any software.
I will just inform you when it’s available and when there is some huge fluctuation in price (sale etc.), as on WordPress reader, posts get lost in stampede.
I won’t be mailing you more than 4 to 5 times a year, and that’s max. Promise!
And if you want it to share it privately you can do that through contact form on my blog.
Thank you 🙂
Of course, sweetheart. I am looking very much forward to reading your book. Here is my email: poetryandprose18@gmail.com
thank you. you guys are amazing😊
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Wow. Okay and YES please!!! Transportive. I felt I was in a harem or something….so beautiful!!! Thank You, G. You Cheers! 💖
Aw..thank you so much! Your comments make my day 🌸🤗🙏
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What a beautiful poem of a love that transcends all and where two people can really almost be one soul and heart. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you so much for reading. I am beyond grateful for your kind words.
You write beautifully and those words are well deserved!
Thank you again 🙏
Most lovely lines for amour,dear G.it has some deep meaning.🌹🌹🌹🌹
Thank you so much, my dear. I am glad you enjoyed it 💕
I love the word AMOUR,my dear friend.it is my life.💑💑💑❤❤❤❤
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Lost for words G. Love this
Thank you so much, Ash!
absolutely gorgeous, so beautifully penned and the accompanying image!
I am humbled by your words, my dear. Thank you so much!
My pleasure!
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This is so beautiful. If you’d like, check out my blog 🙂 yours is FABULOUS!
Hello, my dear. I am humbled by your words. Thank you! On to your blog 🙂
Very seductive. The perfect imagery here with a smooth transitioning of sensual words. Very captivating. ❤
My sincere thanks for your beautiful comment. I am delighted you enjoyed the poem!
Ahh… Beautiful words and art go hand in hand. You are welcome. ❤❤❤❤❤
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Love poem by Rabindranath Tagore
Thank you dear.
This is a stunner , check out mine which I wrote while unpacking my husband’s suitcase.
Wonderful!
Thank you, Luisa!
Very well done! Love the carnal dreams howling in the hallway!!
Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed that line 🙂
speechless…………
Aw.. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
you are so very welcome. it was just that good, i didn’t know what to write.
You are really sweet 😊
bless you!
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