I am thrilled my poem “Adam’s sin” was published by Spillwords Press.
Thank you so much for your support. Good wishes and hugs to everyone.
a canary sings
your flesh pays its tribute to some other lovers
come and go like seasons
noisy V-shaped flocks
then i listen to a monk who reads
from a book of psalms
rings sleep on my fingers
arabesque designs shiver on my skin
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119 thoughts on “My poem “Adam’s sin” published by Spillwords Press”
Thank you kindly!
Congratulations G! Is that you? You’re beautiful. 😍
Thank you so much, my dear! No, that is not me. It’s a painting that I use on my Facebook page. The attribution is clear there. Spillwords picked it.
You’re welcome! Nevertheless, you are beautiful, dear.
Thank you my dear, Winnie. Kind and generous as always. Love and blessings to you!
Love and blessings too! Have a great day!
Thank you, Winnie. Have a wonderful week!
You’re welcome! ❤️
Very nice poem – very interesting and enticing – just like the apple =D
Joey, thank you so much for your kind words. Very grateful to you for reading. You made me smile 🙂
Thank you, dear 🙂
My pleasure 😇
Congrats, friend 🙂
Thank you kindly 🙂
Congratulation,dear!!wonderful n amazing lines-why Adam was keen to sin…..marvellous dear!!🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Thank you so much, Aruna, You are a dear friend!
Most welcome,dear friend!! I am lucky having so much wise n blessed soul in your friendship.🌹🌹🌹🌹
I feel the same dear!
Aww.so much thank you,my dear friend.i love your every lines❤
Thank you so much, Andrew. That is very kind of you!
I love your poem, but I am curious about why you gave it that name, as it appears to have nothing to do with the sin of disobedience in consuming the forbidden fruit from the tree of the knowledge of good and evil.
Thank you for your kind words and for your question. If you read carefully “he” is given a change to go away – i.e. not to sin – and he does not take. Revisionist interpretation 🙂
Thank you so much, my dear Rebecca. I am thrilled that you liked the poem.
G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS MY DEAR!!!!!!! Truly, one of your exemplary pieces and I’m so thrilled for you!!!! ✨💙🌸
Thank you to my dear and talented friend. I am glad you think so. May your day be marvelous as you are!
This is such a beautiful poem. So many emotions wrapped in the mystical clad you drew. A splendor. Congratulations. And btw is that your picture
Thank you for such a beautiful comment, my dear friend. It warms my heart.
It’s not my picture. Spillwords picked it up from my FB poetry page. It’s a painting and it has the right attribution there.
Thank you again for your kind support, Shantanu! It means a lot to me.
Have a wonderful day!
My absolute pleasure. I know your soul is beautiful. Picture is immaterial. Stay blessed 🌸🌸
Thank you 🙂 🙂
I changed my mind. I am playing by the rules 😊🌸 lol
Congratulations, G! What a lovely and haunting poem.
Thank you, David. I am so glad you liked the poem. Your opinion means a lot to me.
You’re welcome 🙂
wow, congrats ❤😃😃
Thank you dear 🌸💕
Wonderful poem, and congrats on the publication. Well-deserved. 🙂
Thank you so much. It means a lot coming from you.
Dear G, this was a magnificent piece of writing full of so many wonderful images and inspiration. It made me smile,
sigh, and filled me with a deep desire to write.
Congrats. Adam’s Sin and the poetess who created it deserve all of the accolades and praise. I couldn’t think of a poet more deserving of having her work displayed like a priceless museum piece. Can’t begin to describe how happy I am for you. I am so lucky and proud to be your friend,
Again, congratulations. Have a glorious day.
Thank you so much for the high praise and the accolades. Your comment is magnificent. I hope you know how much your appreciation means to me 🙂
I am also lucky and proud to be your friend. So, there, you are not the only one 🙂
“sigh, and filled me with a deep desire to write.” That makes me really happy. I can’t wait to read your future posts and your novel. I am waiting, Drew…
May you have a day filled with love and beauty.
What a beautiful reply G.
You not only inspire, you motivate. I could almost picture you with a sword prodding me to write on.
Have a sweet day.
I am glad to hear that I motivate you, Drew! A sword? Not for you. Maybe for others if I can motivate myself 🙂 Kidding.
Same wishes to you too!
Thank you kindly 🙂
You are welcome.😊
Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Congratulations,the poem is wonderful!🌸
Best wishes for the future.
I am humbled by your comment. Thank you! Best wishes to you too 🙂
Bravo…way to go!
Thank you so much! Your kind words mean a lot to me.
Awesome! And congrats 🎈🎉🎊
Thank you 🌺😊💕
Congratulations 🎊 and 🎉 celebrations. You have a great knack for beautiful words.. U deserve this
Thank you so much, dear. Your beautiful comment means a lot to me 🌺💕🧚♂️🌸
I just came to know about you by reading ur short desc in the spilled words. So glad to know you and indeed in awe of your talent..
Thank you again, dear. I am in awe of your talent too and very happy we met 😊
Thank you Gabby(hope u don’t mind me calling you)
You are welcome! Not at all 😊
Teach me poetry. I mean your poetry. hhaha
Heeyyy, glad to hear from you my dear friend. I hope everything is fine. Teach me how to play guitar 🎸😊
Im good very good, how about you? Oh, you even have the guitar emoji. That is cute. Yes of course I can teach you the basic and some more but the rest is up to you. Haha I think I’ll get the same reply. Hahaha.
I am fine, Ankit. I do not need to teach you how to write poetry. You know that 😊
Take care, my friend.
Hmmmm, I want to write like you lol. Now what?
Your poems are beautiful. Why would you want to write like me ? 😊
Aha tricky. Im just complementing your style of poetry. Btw I wanted to talk to you about our collaboration. I want to be productive
And thank you for complimenting my poetry! I am glad you like it
As for our collaboration write me.
I wrote you this morning. See you there.
Congratulations my dear! Beautifully done. ❤️
Thank you so much 🌺
My pleasure dear! ❤️🌺
Congratulations!!!!! Off to finish reading Your beautiful poem….Cheers!!! 💖🤗🥂
Thank you for your kindness and your generosity. It means a lot to me 🙂
My complete pleasure! Your humility is amazing. Seriously. It’s as huge as Your gifts….❤️🤗☀️
Thank you so much! Hugs 🙂
Thank you so much, my dear 🌺🌸💕
Congrats, it’s such a beautiful poem.
Thank you so much, Ash. Your appreciation means a lot to me.
Sorry to disappoint 🙂 but it’s not my picture. Spillwords took that picture from my FB poetry page. However, there it has proper attribution. Spillwords omitted the attribution. I am sure they did not intent to do so. It was an honest mistake. Here is the link to the picture https://www.shutterstock.com/image-illustration/colorful-watercolor-painting-young-beautiful-girl-385895377?src=library
I’m not disappointed, just have never seen you and thought that was my chance. 😀
Oh, no, don’t be disappointed. It may happened one day 🙂 No hockey this Saturday?
I shall wait impatiently…for now, I have your words 😉
Thank you kindly! I am touched that you liked my poem.
My sincere pleasure. Very much so.
Incredible poem! Congratulations to you!!
Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Thank you kindly, Daniela! Wishing you the best 🙂
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