I am looking over your love letters
my hands are shaking
winds are trying
to take them away from me
into the depths of the roiling ocean
i am fighting the winds
i am back with you in that place
palm trees born from violet skies
white drapes covering adrenalized lovers
i am laughing
follies of love
your teeth leave painful marks
on my shoulder
winds funnelled through my heart
push me into the ocean
salty waters corrode my nostrils
stingrays puncture my arteries
a church bell tolls
where are they?
16 thoughts on “love letters #poetry”
My hearts break to see the letter were lost. The most precious treasure for a lover.
Thank you so much for your kind words!
yearning, passion, beauty, bell …. what can more be written out of this magical poem? letter in bottle.
You are so kind to me, dear B! Thank you so much!
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I really appreciate your kind words!
That was a great poem.
Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!
It’s so good
Thank you! I am glad you like it!
Beautiful, and I can relate. I keep mine safe in a hidden box, but I always contemplate throwing them in the fire place because of the heartache. I can never seem to get myself to do it.
Thank you so much for your kind words! The rest is up to you. I do not know what to say more.
Great poem. I have never received a love letter so don’t really know how it must feel to lose one, but I still enjoyed this.
Thank you so much for your kind words! I am sure you will receive love letters. Sooner or later they will come. When they do cherish them!