I am the one – poem by Gabriela Marie Milton / MasticadoresUSA update

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I am the one

[poem included in my poetry collection

Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings]

I am the voice of your past loves
resounding in your wildest fantasies
dressed in roses at the altar of your dreams
I am the one you’ve never had
my soul flows from the tears of the Nile
from the hands of children who still beg
through ruins, darkness, and deep pain
through wars which they will never understand
I am the last who will be saved
for I have sinned under the shadow of His cross
when Spanish fountains cry in the sunset
I am the Desdemona who you’ve never met
today Granada’s just the place
in which García Lorca once was killed
I am the feather of a gold macaw bird
and in the city where bells toll
I am the one whose cries you’ve never heard.

MasticadoresUSA Update

A fabulous poem by Tremaine L. Loadholt is up at MasticadoresUSA. Please read it here and please subscribe to MasticadoresUSA.

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Thank you
Gabriela

@Gabriela Marie Milton

146 thoughts on “I am the one – poem by Gabriela Marie Milton / MasticadoresUSA update

  1. I love this gorgeous piece. It is so visceral, so incredibly descriptive bringing such deep emotions one can feel the pain. I am grateful I
    Can read these beautiful poems anytime.

    “I am the one you’ve never had
    my soul flows from the tears of the Nile
    from the hands of children who still beg
    through ruins, darkness, and deep pain”

    Beautiful Button this is such an amazing piece. Sending lots of love. ❤️🤗🥰😘❤️🤗honeybun

    1. Thank you so much honeybun for your breathtaking words. They mean a lot to me. Sending love and blessings. May your day be wonderful 🥰🌹❤️

      1. Aw.. thank you again. You made my day more beautiful. 🤗🥰❤️🌹

    1. Thank you for stoping by and thank you for your wonderful words 🥰🤗🌸

    1. Thank you so much sweetheart. I have to do something about because your posts do not show up in my reader or in my notifications. I will chat with WP and visit your site soon. 🤗🥰❤️❤️

      1. This has happened to me with some sites too and I have no idea why. Don’t worry about it 😊❤️🌺

      2. I do and I will get it fixed. I need WP’s collaboration but I will get it done.

    1. Thank you from the bottom of my heart David.
      All the best to you.
      xoxo

  2. First you write an excellent first line that catches attention immediately, then you surprise me with your images and thoughts, and in the end you write another brilliant line that, for me, complements the first one. Yes, you are the one — you are great!

    1. Thank you from the bottom of my heart Basilike. I am really humbled by your words. I can only hope I deserve them.
      Sending huge hugs hon.

      1. You showered me with compliments today. Thank you again .. and again.. and again 🌹

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    1. Cheryl, I am humbled by your comment. Thank you from the bottom of my heat. Tre’s poem is stunning indeed.
      Have a beautiful afternoon 🌹

    1. Oh, I am so glad you liked it. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
      Huge hugs.

    1. Thank you sweetheart. I am glad you think so.
      Wishing you a wonderful evening.

  4. This is a wonderful piece Gabriella.
    life isn’t fair, we aren’t always honorable.

    “I have sinned under the shadow of His cross
    when Spanish fountains cry in the sunset
    I am the Desdemona who you’ve never met”

    Excellent!❣️❤️❤️💗

    1. Thank you so much Cindy. I should say my wonderful Cindy 🤗🥰❤️🌹

  5. perfect one!!
    loved each and every line… i don’t know how to say… just being a little selfish…. recently i have started working on a poetry blog. i can’t write that beautifully as you do… But one humble request is -kindly visit my blog…. i won’t disappoint you.
    regard,
    Jeet Kaur

  6. Ah, this is lovely. It’s heart aching, almost soul Stirring. But so very eloquent. So very poignant. And yes, so so very beautiful.
    I like the reference to Othello.
    I’m still trying to gather myself after this beautiful read. Have a fantastic day girl. Hope your shoulder’s doing good.

    1. Shanyu, you made my day. Your beautiful comment stole my heart. Thank you for the kind wishes. My shoulder? I cried last night. I may have to have surgery. Only the idea kills me. And it is my right shoulder. I can hardly type now. If I have to have surgery I will be out of commission for a while. I’d better stop talking about because I am going to start crying again.
      Sending you love my dearest friend and I hope you are well.
      xoxo

      1. I am so sorry to hear that Gabriela. Please know that all of us are here with you. I hope for a real speedy recovery. Don’t worry about that surgery, you will be fine. You have all of us here. Just take care.
        Sending you tulips.
        Good day.

      2. Shanyu, thank you from my heart for your beyond beautiful words. You are really kind. I still hope I don’t need surgery but we will see what the doctor says at the end of the next week.
        I wish you a beautiful weekend. Be happy. Be love. Stay safe 🤗🥰🌹

      3. Aw.. thank you so much for asking my sweet friend. It feels a bit better today so I am hopeful.
        xoxoxo…

  7. This is such a beautiful & tender poem….”I am the one whose cries you’ve never heard.”…..what can I say more, dear Gabriela….you leave me speechless with such beautiful lines….much love ❤️ ✨

    1. Thank you from the bottom of my heart Navin. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
      We are getting close to the weekend so have a fabulous one.
      Much love
      xoxoxo

      1. You’re welcome, Gabriela…..yeah, we’re quite close…thank you for your wishes….you too have a fabulous & peaceful weekend ✨🙏💫

  8. I am the one who missed this post and I really regret. 😥 It has such a powerful, and beautiful lines. You are no wonder an amazing writer. Love and hugs dear Gabriela 😍🥰

    1. Don’t worry about and thank you for the praise. You made me blush.
      Have a beautiful weekend.
      Sending plenty of love
      xoxo

  9. I was pleasantly struck by this poem which brings echoes of legendary love stories and by the harmony with which it opens to feelings. So I translated it in italian to be able to include it in the Gioielli Rubati, a poetry column on May 30, which I edit with Flavio Almerighi.

    Io sono l’unica

    Sono la voce dei tuoi amori passati
    che si fa eco nelle tue fantasie più selvagge
    vestita di rose all’altare dei tuoi sogni
    Sono colei che non hai mai avuto,
    la mia anima scorre dalle lacrime del Nilo
    dalle mani dei bambini che ancora mendicano
    attraverso rovine, oscurità e dolore profondo
    attraverso guerre che non capiranno mai.
    Sono l’ultima che si salverà
    perché ho peccato all’ombra della Sua croce
    quando le fontane spagnole piangono al tramonto
    Sono la Desdemona che non hai mai incontrato,
    oggi Granada è il luogo
    in cui una volta fu ucciso García Lorca.
    Sono la piuma dell’uccello ara dorato
    e nella città dove suonano le campane
    sono la sola di cui non hai mai udito i pianti.

    poesia di Gabriela Marie Milton inclusa nella raccolta “Passioni: poesie d’amore ed altri scritti”

    with many thanks tu you
    Daniela Cerrato

    1. Dear Daniela,
      Thank you from the bottom of my heart for you wonderful words. The translation means the world to me. I am beyond grateful to you for your kindness. Equally I am grateful to Flavio for translating in Italian several poems included in my poetry book. I am familiar with Gioielli Rubati. Flavio included me twice – if my memory serves me right – when I was writing under the name Gabriela M.

      Again, my deepest gratitude and I look forward to May 30th.
      Have a fabulous weekend 🌹
      Gabriela

      1. For me it’s a pleasure have met you and your good poetry, you are more than welcome among my readings. <3
        A nice weekend to you too

      2. I am actually one of your followers so the pleasure is all mine Daniela. Thank you for the kind wishes and I look forward to feature your translation on my blog ❤️

  10. I was pleasantly struck by this poem which brings echoes of legendary love stories and by the harmony with which it opens to feelings. So I translated it to include it in the Jewels Rubati poetry column of May 30, which I edit with Flavio Almerighi.

    Io sono l’unica

    Sono la voce dei tuoi amori passati
    che si fa eco nelle tue fantasie più selvagge
    vestita di rose all’altare dei tuoi sogni
    Sono colei che non hai mai avuto,
    la mia anima scorre dalle lacrime del Nilo
    dalle mani dei bambini che ancora mendicano
    attraverso rovine, oscurità e dolore profondo
    attraverso guerre che non capiranno mai.
    Sono l’ultima che si salverà
    perché ho peccato all’ombra della Sua croce
    quando le fontane spagnole piangono al tramonto
    Sono la Desdemona che non hai mai incontrato,
    oggi Granada è il luogo
    in cui una volta fu ucciso García Lorca.
    Sono la piuma dell’uccello ara dorato
    e nella città dove suonano le campane
    sono la sola di cui non hai mai udito i pianti.

    poesia di Gabriela Marie Milton inclusa nella raccolta “Passioni: poesie d’amore ed altri scritti”

    with many thanks tu you
    Daniela Cerrato

  11. Love the imagery in this. This poem is so easy to visualise and “feel”. In love with the words used. It touches Parts of my soul that were never before touched…

  12. Holy Toledo! I’ll say it like this; this one slam dunked me “Big Time!”

    I need a chill pill in a hurry; or need to take a long walk by the sea!
    That’s a Big Thanks from me!

      1. 🥰🌹❤️ Daniela I left a comment on your blog too. I hope you find it.

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