Summer Fantasy poem by Gabriela Marie Milton/ MasticadoresUSA Update

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Summer Fantasy


poem included in my book Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings (Vita Brevis Press, April 2020) available on Amazon here

my eyes are water wells
mirroring your body
into a time which shrinks
my lips shine on stained glass
windows to the sea
a virgin violin
faints into your lap
sick with jealousy
the summer hangs in trees
seduction
fantasy

MasticadoresUSA Update

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Thank you
Gabriela

@Gabriela Marie Milton

125 thoughts on “Summer Fantasy poem by Gabriela Marie Milton/ MasticadoresUSA Update

    1. Oh, I am humbled by your words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

    1. Thank you so much. I am glad you like it. And thank you for your support. Are you going to write to me? 🙂

      1. I will likely send something along for consideration and trust that our friendship will not color your editorial eye. I did not want to impose on your new venture or our connection without an invitation. Or did you mean, am I going to write you the love letter I have been composing since we met? 🌹💖🌹

      2. Please send a poem. I am all business.

        Oh, the love letter. I’ll read it with you by my side when the Indian summer comes. I love Indian summers up North. 🙂

    1. Thank you so much Ingrid. That really humbles me and touches my heart too. You are a true friend.
      xoxo

    1. Thank you so much Timothy. Sending everyone purrs and treats. Are you going to send me a poem?

      1. Here’s th lyrics to a song I’m working on:

        Canonical Day
        By Timothy Price

        Bombed at Vigil
        kitties in the night
        Martins listens
        Owls
        Hoot under moon’s light

        Lauds wakens Dawn
        Throw off covers
        Colors spread
        Reds, pinks, yellows
        Tugs on sun lights blue skies

        Primetime rise
        Face another day
        Lost in ironic phases
        Teeth comb hair
        Sad and pretty faces

        [Chorus]
        Sacred routines never fail
        Hundreds, ten, thousand times
        Begins each day a blessed right
        Immortality of the whole

        [RAP]
        Terce it all coffee’s cold
        Virtual whistles blow
        Tap on keys, boxes packed,
        Phone music
        Plays on hold

        Sext at last
        Satisfies
        Food fantasy
        Peanut butter tofu chicken
        Thirty minutes of ecstasy

        Nones dear coffee’s gone
        Eyelids weigh a tonne
        Ninth hour sleepy time
        For Heaven’s sake stay awake

        [Chorus]
        Sacred ways never fail
        Hundreds, ten, thousand times
        As each day goes by some insane
        Immortality of the whole

        Vapors rise at vespers
        Dinners hot-cold served
        Debates circles tables
        World made right
        For an instance

        Compline pulls on covers
        Sun tucked in welcomes night
        Bedtime lost videos play
        Medianoche greets another day

        [Chorus]
        Sacred darkness never fails
        Hundreds, ten, thousand times
        Conjures spirits Ether
        Immortality of the whole

      2. Great. Can you send me me the song/video together with the lyrics ? No rush but do send it please.

      3. I have finished the recording the song. I will probably post the song on my blog when I get finish recording it.

      4. Okay. What I meant is that I have not finished recording the song.

      5. That’s ok. When you finish could you please get in touch with me?

      1. Oh, that’s so sweet of you to say 🥰🌹❤️🥰🌹❤️

      2. Indeed, that is mostly true Marty. And your blog is fantastic,

      3. Now I thank you for your gratitude

        We journey on this earth together not in competition

        Took me many years to understand this

      4. I am so glad you said that. My parents taught me so when I was a child.
        xoxoxo

      5. My
        Dad
        Taught me the opposite

        I had to be twice
        As
        Good as every other boy playing sports

        So I realized
        We
        Are
        On this path together in my 60’s

        But I found my way

      6. That last sentence makes me happy. Lots of love to you.
        xoxo

  1. As Brad, I must agree one of my favorites too. Beautiful imagery and provocatively delicious Beautiful Button. Sending love and jasmine in silk lined cans as it is blooming on the land and it’s smell will go lovely with your lovely poem.
    ❤️❤️🌹🌹Honeybun

    1. Hey honeybun, what a beautiful comment. Thank you from the bottom of my heart sweetheart. Sending you love, flowers, and best wishes for this week. And thank you for your support.
      xoxo

      1. You are so welcome Button. It is so beautifully written. Thank you for the gifts. I got the flowers and feel the love. Xoxoxo honeybun 🤗❤️🥰🌹🌹

      2. My pleasure honeybun 🥰❤️🌹🥰❤️🌹

      3. Hello Button checking to make sure I got all my comments and this one doesn’t show a like or that I responded. I certainly did. Thank you again for the lovely gifts and the flowers are lovely. Sending you wishes for a wonderful week as well. Sending back extra love.
        ❤️❤️❤️🤗🥰🥰honeybun

      4. Honeybun, you responded. Thank you again for your kind words and love. Sorry I am so slow on answering to comments but I hurt my right shoulder and it’s very difficult for me to write. I did more writing than I should have yesterday. Please know I read and appreciate everything. Sending love 🌹❤️🥰🌹❤️

      5. Oh I am sorry your shoulder is hurt. Thanks for mentioning it I will pray for quick healing. I know you work so hard I honestly don’t know how you ever keep up and yet you do and continue to create more beauty in the world. Sending you much love and I will be praying your healing is quick. Love you Beautiful Button.
        Honeybun ❤️🤗😘🥰🙏🙏

      1. I am so sorry to hear about your mom. Let’s hope she is going to get better soon. Please keep me posted.
        “There’s always sth, isn’t there?” Are you kidding me? Yesterday I went the first time – after a long time- to the gym. I hurt my right shoulder. I screamed in pain the entire day. I can’t even talk about this. It’s horrible. I type only with my left hand and the pain it’s killings me.

      2. yeah, it’s unbelievable. I am going to take a brake soon. I hope your mom gets better.
        xoxo

  2. ,,Gabriella BRAVO, so much fantasy, beauty, my eyes were ancient vacuum cleaners, which sucked out of the page and cleaned all your words into me, thanks, unforgettable cleaning! Great ! ”

    This first occurred to me when I read your poem … it was suddenly in me.

    1. Your comment took my breath away. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your unbelievable comment. I am truly humbled.

    1. Thank you so much sweetheart. I hope you are doing well 🤗🥰❤️🌹

      1. Yes we are doing well, in lockdown. My husband was not well last month but now he is perfectly fine. Thank you so much for asking. How are you doing?

      2. I am so glad he is well now and everyone is safe. Sending you lots of love. I am ok sweetheart thank you for asking. Please stay well.
        xoxoxo

  3. Oh how beautiful. It is so so rich and luxuriant. I really love this piece of poetry Gabriela.
    “my eyes are water wells
    mirroring your body”
    Unbelievably beautiful and exceptionally well thought.
    I love how it narrows down to the two simple words in the end. I am more than speechless. Continue to mesmerise.

    1. You are adorable, thank you very much. Your words are silk. What would I do without you.
      Sending love and please stay safe.
      xoxo

      1. Oh, my ankle is much better thank you. I just hurt my should when I went to the gym yesterday. That’s life. Maya… Did I tell you I have two kitties now? Mr. Churchill is a new addition to the family 🙂

      2. Oh no. How is it now? Better take care of yourself.
        Now that’s wonderful. Is Mr Churchill the same kind as that of Maya?

      3. It’s not good but it’s going to get better. Thank you for asking. Maya is a Tonkinesse cat. He is just a tuxedo cat 😊 😊😊

  4. A beautiful piece by you, Gabriela, of the dreams summer brings in its vibrant colors and aura, mirrored with the need for cool water.
    An equally lovely piece by M. Taggart! Delighted to see you at the helm of a glorious literary venture.

    1. Oh, Java, you are so sweet. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your beautiful words. They mean the world to me 🌹

  5. This is a stunning piece dear Gabriella❣️❣️❣️ I loved every word flowing to the next for pure ectasy❣️💖👏👏👏

    1. Aw.. thank you my dearest Cindy. You made me blush. I hope your afternoon is going well ❤️🥰🌹🥰❤️🌹

      1. My pleasure Cindy and thank you too 🥰❤️🌹

    1. Aw.. Michele, thank you again and again. I am deeply grateful for your praise 🌹🥰

      1. You are showering me with compliments. Thank you again from the bottom of my heart ❤️

    1. My fabulous Rachel is here. Thank you so much sweetheart. Thank you for those words and for your love. You know I missed you and your wonderful poetry. You know I wish you would stay. I am so happy you wrote. It’s morning here and the sun will be brighter than ever. Sending you plenty of warm and love. I made a wish. I am going to wait and see 🤗🥰❤️🌹🥰❤️🌹

      1. I always always hope your wishes come true my darling G. I’m kind of wishing right now I’m a fairy godmother so I can deduce them and grant them xxooxx

      2. Hello my fabulous Rachel.
        “I always always hope your wishes come true my darling G” They better do because I want you to stay and I want to read your beautiful poetry.
        That was my wish Rachel.
        Love from the bottom of my heart.
        xoxoxo

      3. Aw.. thank you sweetheart. You really make me happy. I cannot see any notifications. I know I commented 3 or 4 days ago on a beautiful poem. My comment probably is in your spam folder. Did you post again?

      4. I can’t wait to read. And Rachel… welcome back. The beauty of your poetry and your friendship means the world to me.
        xoxo

      5. Oh honey, and the same to me. With you in the other hemisphere of this world to me, the world feels more balanced, the world feels more right ⚖️😘🌘🌒

      6. Thank you for your words. Now the you are back the world is balanced 🥰❤️🌹🥰❤️❤️

    1. Thank you so much Diana. I hope warm weather comes to you sooner rather than later ❤️🌹

    1. Navin, my dearest, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your breathtaking comment. You make the sun shine in a day that is dark for me. Sending love and plenty of hugs.
      🤗🥰🌹❤️

      1. You’re too kind dear Gabriela….you’re very welcome….have a peaceful day ❤️ ✨ 🤗

      2. Thank you. Have a great week ahead 🥰🤗❤️🌹

    1. Oh, I am so glad you enjoyed those lines. Thank you from the bottom of my heart 🌸

    1. Thank you so much sweetheart 🥰❤️🌹🥰❤️🌹

  6. Wow.most beautiful written.specieally”a virgin violin faints into your lap ;sick with jealousy…”so much beautiful imagination.gorgeous,dear G!!

      1. As I get carried away by yours 🌹❤️

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