I am an external representation
I ask questions about the internality of things
the sweetness of berries on my tongue
the anarchy of flesh during torrid nights
blindfolded by you
I cry
the rustle of fresh ivy
the unspoken
unbound in my blood
mi amor
turn around
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@Gabriela Marie Milton
Hermosa, mi Poetisa!
gracias, mi amor..
I enjoyed your sensual poem. It went with the picture.
Thank you dear.
You know i just love the brains who think like that.
Aw… thank you so much.
Oh wow, Gab, this is gorgeous.
Thank you Bo. It means a lot. I hope you are ok hon.
Too much going on, Gab, but I need to stay positive for everyone’s sake.
I know how it feels Bo. Try. That is what I do. I try.
Take care. Lots of love to you.
Thanks, hon. Love back.
‘the anarchy of flesh during torrid nights’ – I love this! Thank you for sharing your work Gabriela 🙏😊❤️
Ingrid, I am so grateful for your kind words. Glad you enjoy that line. I just read your beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing too.
Huge hugs to everyone.
I enjoyed all of it! I just particularly like the reference to anarchy 😊
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Spicy. Lovely poem, Gabriela. “the anarchy of flesh during torrid nights” so relatable when not in flesh in dreams.
Good morning and thank you so much Timothy. In dreams… Isn’t it everything a dream? 🙂
Inside the matrix.
I was thinking Bitcoin 🙂
Bitcoin once bitten has a bite to. Makes sense within the realm fo fleshly dreams.
Makes sense inside the Matrix too. “Mining” in the Matrix 🙂
Or a bit of masochism in the Matrix? You probably don’t want to go there, and neither do I. We can leave at alliteration and forget the metaphor.
Agree. Let’s forget the metaphor. The kitties are sending purrs and treats.
Give them a hug and a kiss for me. Our kitties send you a kitty clowder collaboration of kisses, purrs, and hugs.
Thank you so much. They are as happy as they can be.
xoxo
Beautiful… 🌹🌹
Thank you so much Francine 🌹🌹🤗🤗
The last four lines are so beautifully crafted. This is an exquisite poem, Gabriela.
Thank you so much sweetheart. I am thrilled you like those lines. I hope you are doing well. Sending love.
I am doing well. Thank you. And you’re most welcome!
I am glad to hear that ❤️🌹
A lovely poem. 🙂
Thank you so much 🌹🤗🌹🤗
You are most welcome.
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YES!
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Gorgeous, Beautiful Button. So lovely each word. My favorites:
“the rustle of fresh ivy
the unspoken
unbound in my blood”
So beautifully enticing your words are always a treat and an experience. I am sending you lots of love packaged in pieces of a rainbow I saved, carried by thousands of monarchs and kissed by the flutter of a hummingbird’s wing.
Love you,
Honeybun 🦋 🦋🦋🦋🌈🌈🌈❤️❤️❤️🌹🌹🌹
Thank you for your beautiful words and the wonderful gifts honeybun. You are a gem. May your day be lovely and serene 🌸🥰🤗🌹❤️
My pleasure always. ❤️🤗🌹🎈
A rose from my heart 🌹
Thank you Button that means a lot. One for you too, from my heart. 🌹
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Opens with such a great line…
Thank you so much Joe.
xoxo
Lovely passionate verse. Epic and glorious.
You are too sweet. Thank you so much 🤗🌹❤️🤗🌹❤️
You are very welcome my dear G♥️😘
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wow, so many beautiful lines in your poem Gabriella 💗💗💓
Can’t choose one❣️
“mi amor
turn around”
Thank you for the praise Cindy. You made me blush. Enjoy the rest of the day 🥰🤗🌹❤️
My delight🌷
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sweet!!!💖🌷💗
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It’s like you feel the poem in your body & heart….and then you put it on paper….lovely poem…it can be felt ❤️💫
Thank you so much my dearest Navin. I am so glad you think so. Sending love and big hugs.
xoxo
You’re welcome dearest Gabriela…..sending you love & big hugs as well ❤️ 🤗
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Ivy and berries juxtapose and offer elements of plant-life in this beautiful and swiftly turning poem! Love it.
Thank you so much Java. I love the way you look at this piece. It’s beautiful. Thank you again.
xoxo
Ahhhhh! I’m lost for words this is so awesome! G, your gift of poetry takes my breath away! xoxo
Rene, thank you from the bottom of my heart. You took my breath away with your words of praise. What else can I say? Thank you again. Have a splendid afternoon 🥰🌹❤️🥰🌹❤️
No need to say anything, I am always at a lost for words, your poetry is so outstanding and remarkable and beautiful ✨
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I cannot comment on your blog from my phone. That’s strange. Your post is lovely. I hope you are enjoying this day 🥰🌹🤗🌹🥰🌹
I have the same problem with some posts. Thank you so much Gabriela! ❤️🌹
My pleasure. I have to check your posts from my computer 🥰
Same here! I often get out ! Sigh ❤️
Beautiful poem 👍
I am very glad you liked it. Thank you 🌸
Beautiful and sensual
Thank you so much 🌹
I am an external representation
I ask questions about the internality of things
the sweetness of berries on my tongue
👏👏 I could relate these lines, a beautiful work as always dear Gabriela ❣️❣️
Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. I am so glad you can relate. Besides I needed a little sunshine today in my life. You just brought it. Sending love.
xoxo
Your poetry is sublime, Gabriela, passionate and full of wonderful imagery. A beautiful piece. <3
Aw.. Diana, I am humbled by your comment. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
xoxo
I say this with “the sweetness of berries on my tongue”, this is some sensually phenomenal piece of poetry. It is very much an ode to the phases of love, each word hitting a little bit harder. It is truly verily magnificently beautiful.
I am so sorry to only comment now. Hope you are doing very well. Good day.
Aw.. my dearest friend, that is so nice of you to say. I am so grateful for your beautiful words and your support Shanyu. You are wonderful.
xoxo
My absolute pleasure dear friend. Have a wonderful weekend.
Thank you so much Shanyu. May you have a fabulous one 🌹❤️🥰
That was powerful. As always, a beautiful poem to ponder on passion.
Tu poesía posee lo mejor del minimalismo: Breve pero muy, muy intenso, seductor. Nota aparte: Me he enterado, con sumo agrado, de tu labor como editora de MasticadoresUSA. Sin duda, enriquecerá muchísimo al blog con tu talento. Ojalá te guste lo que hacemos en MasticadoresMEX: https://masticadoresmexico.wordpress.com/2021/04/19/a-la-mesa-del-castillo-por-alejandro-rabelo-garcia/ Saludos y felicitaciones.
Muchas gracias por tus hermosas palabras, Alejandro. Estoy encantada de ser parte del equipo. Tu apoyo significa mucho para mí.
Que pases una buena noche
Gabriela
This is awesome!
Its sooo soo beautifully written.. I had tears in my eyes. Your poem is so special to me because this is the first poem i had read in WordPress
Oh, thank you from the bottom of my heart and welcome to my blog. That was very sweet of you to say 🌹
I wish you all the best ❤️❤️
All the best to you too 🥰❤️🌹
your words are such an experience when I read your poem! all of them have meaning & it felt as if I were in a dream. I also blog about poetry if you’re interested & I loved reading this ! Have a great day !
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I will explore your site soon 🥰
The poem truly touches your soul it’s inspiring ☺
Thank you so much Karolina. That’s so sweet of you.
I’m also a poet I started today on the app but I wrote unknown facts to get people’s eyes opened and be diverse
Where are you located? Because if you are in the US I may be able to help.
I am in South Africa unfortunately you have to know how the system works because in politics here people are silenced . There is no freedom of speech and it’s hard cause I’m 15
I am sorry to hear you feel like this sweetheart. Keep writing.
Thank you
I love the way you portrait the things into words
Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
xoxo
I’m inspired already❤️🔥✨!!!
That’s wonderful 🌸🌹
I also want to write my own poetry but I have issues with self doubt.
I think after reading your poems, I’ll find motivation and inspiration to show mine to the world😊❤️🔥🌍
Please do not self doubt yourself. Don’t think about. Write and let your muse quite you 🥰
Thank you❤️😊👍
I’m kinda new here and I needed a platform to showcase my love for poetry.
I think I came to the right place😊❤️
My pleasure 🤗🥰❤️🌹
Thank you very much for your very nice paying attention on my little blog and your lovely like! 💗
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My pleasure 🌸🌹❤️
Well penned!!
Thank you 🌸
Very nice poem
Thank you so much.
I am captivated by the seeking of the deeper inner you, the touching of the genuine person and heart; the conversing of souls!
Thank you again Gabriela!
Peace and blessings.
Oh, thank you ten thousand times.
Hugs and blessings
xoxo
You’re very welcome and I’m more than glad to offer something; that I hope is helpful!
All the best to you.
God bless.
xoxo
It’s very helpful. Same to you Lawrence.
xoxo
Good to know and you take care!
So vibrant, good job on the writing xx
Thank you dear 🌸
This is beautiful poetry of the soul. Wonderfully done.
Thank you so much 🌸
Brilliant and passionate, I really enjoyed this poem 👏
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment.
Really great poem, philosophical yet highly evocative, with crisp descriptions and a poignant use of words. Well done!
Thank you so much dear.
xoxo
Hi Gabriela, Would you be interested in doing one of our Fevers of the Mind Quick-9 interview? If so send us an interview request at feversofthemind@gmail.com and I will send you the questions. Thanks.
loved this piece!
Thank you dear