The sky rains on my spring the sweet scents of your autumn.
A luxurious paralysis flows through my veins.
My lips nestle in the plenitude of your dreams with their multiple interpretations.
I am so in love with you that I will accept hell provided you are part of it.
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My book Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings featured in San Francisco Book Review and Manhattan Book Review.
@Gabriela Marie Milton
A beautiful heartfelt poem, dear Gabriela ~ thank you for sharing & I wish you a pleasant Wednesday 😊🌹
Phil, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your beautiful words and your kind wishes. Enjoy your Wednesday.
xoxo
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Wow, this was powerfully worded, Gabriela! Very beautiful. Stay blessed my friend🌻❤️🙏
Thank you so much Diana. I am glad you liked it. Enjoy the rest of your day. Sending love 🤗🌹❤️
That might make hell a little more tolerable. A delightful poem, Gabriela.
Thank you so much Timothy 😊 Purrs from Maya and Mr. Churchill.
Give each of them a big kiss for me.
I did. They are elated.
That is good. The kitty clan here sends you, Maya and Mr. Churchill hugs and kisses. How’s your ankle? I hope you are whole again.
Aw.. we thank them from the bottom of our hearts. My ankle is ok. Thank you for asking. I can walk pretty fast. I do not run. But it is still swollen. Not too bad but I think this is it. It will never go down. The doctor says it will but the injury occurred last November. I don’t think I can hope for more. Soon I will be able to run. So I am happy.
Sometimes things just take a really long time. At least you can walk fast.
Thank you Timothy. I guess I have to be patient.
xoxo
It’s hard to be patient in a word with so many things to do and that need to be done. I know how you feel on that account.
Thank you again Timothy. You have a gold heart.
Wow, so powerful. 🥰
Thank you so much John. I am glad you think so.
Absolutely gorgeous poem!!! 😍😍😍🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💞❤️ I send you a very big hug full of affection! 😘😘😘🤗🤗🌹💞🌹❤️🌹❤️🌹
xoxo 😘❤️😘
Aw.. Thank you so much my dearest Ely. Your love and hugs make me happy. Enjoy the rest of your day sweetheart.
xoxoxo…
‘I will accept hell provided you are part of it’ words resonating true love. Thank you for sharing this with us.
My most sincere thanks for such a beautiful comment.
xoxo
It was my pleasure.😊
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This goes straight to the heart Gabriela!
‘A luxurious paralysis flows through my veins.’
– I love this line especially, it reminds me of Keats.
Ingrid, sweetheart, thank you from the bottom of my heart. I was not on WP for about 5 days, so I am sorry I did not visit with you and did not read your beautiful poetry. I will be on your site soon. I hope you are ok. Sending love.
Don’t worry, I am sure you are busy! ❤️
I worry because I care and I want to read beautiful poetry. Yet sometimes I just can’t catch up. I love you most recent piece. It’s gorgeous.
xoxo
Thank you, I enjoyed writing that one. It can be hard to keep up sometimes, especially when you have other commitments!
My pleasure and thank you for your understanding Ingrid 🌹
Paradise would be hell without our loved one, so… You are right.
Thank you Basilike. And it was a pleasure to read you today. I love your post.
And I am happy we read each other today. I look forward to your posts. They always transport me somewhere magical ❤️
So do yours. You speak to my soul Basilike.
I can’t tell you what an honor this is
Thank you, Gab, with all my heart.
Thank you too. It goes both ways.
Best way to go.
Indeed ❤️🌹
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Most of us can only dream of being loved like that. So beautifully rendered, Gabriela!
<3
David
Thank you so much David. Your words mean a lot to me. I hope you and your loved ones are ok.
xoxoxo
we’re all doing well; thank you! how are you?
I am glad you are ok. I am well David, busy but well. Thank you for asking.
Big Hugs
xoxo
🤗 Gabriela 🤗
🥰 David 🥰
Very beautifully penned poem!
Thank you so much Jay 🌹
you are welcome🙋🏽♂️
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Wowww! Friend, really fantastic. Heart felting poem.
Thank you 🤗🌹🥰
You are most welcome friend. 🤗🤗 Hoping you have a blessed day. 😊🤗
Thank you. May you have a blessed day too.
xoxo
You are welcome friend. 😊😊🤗
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Beautiful words, Gabriela! We respond from a depth of soul usually hidden away as we live our everyday lives. <3
Oh, Cheryl, thank you for your beautiful comment. You touched my heart. I hope you are well. Sending love and hugs.
xoxoxo…
Fair enough (I would too).
Hi Bo. Thank you. Sending love.
xoxo
Woah, this is a gorgeous poem. Would you like to collaborate together? Amber. 🔷️🙏🏻
Dear Amber, thank you so much for your kind words and your invitation to collaborate. That’s really sweet. I am a bit overwhelmed now. I need to finish my second book and I have lots of offers to publish my work that I struggle to honor. I am not really successful. When things calm down we can do a collaboration. That will be fun.
I understand, you’re very welcome. I look forward to it. Cool. Sending you love and best wishes with your endeavors. 🔷️🙏🏻
Thank you so much. Love and best wishes to you too.
Brilliant verse., delicious delightful. ❣️♥️
I clicked on your name and I unfollowed by mistake. Clicking again can’t follow but I will eventually
Thank you for these beautiful words sweetheart. They mean the world to me. Sending you love.
xoxo
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Wow, wow, wow!!!!! What a masterpiece 👏👏👏👏 I am impressed dear Gabriela. Waiting for your poems is really worth and you never disappoint me. I am so in love with this poem! ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
Ay.. thank you from the bottom of my heart. I am deeply humbled by your kind words. Plenty of love and hugs. Take care. Stay safe 🤗🌹❤️🤗🌹❤️🤗🌹❤️
Beautiful imagery crunching the mind into fireworks. Well written
Thank you Joseph. I am thrilled you enjoyed the piece. I hope you found a good editor. If any updates please let me know.
Not yet. I am rewriting the book so it is taking time. I haven’t worked writing in the book in 5 days. I will return to it tomorrow.
Good luck tomorrow.
xoxo
Her spring, his autumn, therein, a story, captured always, by your words…
Thank you my dearest Eric. It’s a pleasure to see you here too. Did I tell you in the morning how much I like your poetry? If I did not I am telling you now. Your poetry, your wonderful romantic soul and … your hat.
I hope everyone is enjoying spring.
xoxo
Good morning, Gabriela – Spring a little weird this year, little rain (until this week!) and odd frost white mornings delaying buds their glory. As for poetry and hat, our feelings mutual, we’ve both know long known that. Take care, and apologies for delayed e-mail, 2nd jab slowed me up a bit last week, all well again now.
Good Afternoon Eric, sorry to hear that the frost id delaying the buds. I am sure they will bloom soon.
No need to apologize Eric. I am glad you are ok now.
xoxo
Gabriela
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A beautifully passionate poem from the heart. Take care dear Gabriela ! ❤️🌼⭐️☀️
Rene, thank you so much Rene for your beautiful words. I am always happy when you read my work. Big hugs and say hello to Florida for me.
xoxo
I love to read your poetry, it’s beyond beautiful and amazing. Sending love! xoxoxo
So is yours 🥰🤗🌹❤️
So appreciated ! ❤️
This is so deeply moving and truly beautiful! ❤️⭐️❤️
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Ahhh! Thank you so much! Be well and safe!
You too sweetheart. Enjoy your afternoon.
xoxo
Beautiful, I loved the last line!
Aw.. thank you so much.
With your love there can exist no hell or none that could keep me from you. A wonderful verse, my friend! Hope you are well and sending my best wishes always…🌹
Brad, your words are so sweet. I am reading them again and again…
Thank you so much my dear friend. I am well. I hope you are well too. It’s spring.
xoxoxo
G.
This kind of love is real and layered with many interpretations! <3
Thank you for your kind comment Java.
Big hugs to you.
xoxo
Lovely poem, I know this feeling well….
Thank you. I am glad you can relate.
What a beautiful poem ! I love the imagery your words bring to life.
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My most sincere thanks Francine 🙏🌹❤️🤗
«Gifts to this world,
like a fine pearl.
Connected fast
attached they curled.»
mesmerizing💕
Beautiful words. Thank you kindly ❤️
I love every contour of your lines….I love different projections of your shine….I’m gazing up at the sky while I’m sighing….this is truly one of my favorite rhymes….
Navin, I am humbled by every word you wrote. I am mesmerized by every word you wrote and deeply grateful to you. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Your words are a poem 🤗🥰🌹🌺
You’re welcome Gabriela….your poem is that beautiful….that I write my comment like this 💫💖✨
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Such beautiful words so lovingly delivered Gabriella❣️💖
Thank you so much Cindy. I hope you are enjoying your afternoon.
You’re so welcome Gabriela❣️
awww thanks so much and I hope you are too❣️🙏🙏🙏🙏
xoxo
xoxo
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The ending line is such a climax “I am so in love with you that I will accept hell provided you are part of it. ” 💚
Thank you hon. I am glad you think so 🌸🌹🤗
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El primer verso es tan rico en matices e interpretaciones, Gabriela. Magistral. Saludos
Alejandro, muchas gracias por tus lindas palabras. Es muy amable de tu parte.
Que tengas una buena noche.
Gabriela
I shall try again Beautiful Button. I love the image you chose so lovely. The beginning of this piece is so beautiful:
“The sky rains on my spring the sweet scents of your autumn”
The beginning line draws us in while the second line sets the provocative mood. Such gorgeous writing as always.
I am enjoying your beautiful work on Instagram as well. Saying so much with a handful of perfectly picked words.
Hope you are having a great week. Sorry about the snafu earlier. I am sending buckets of blue lilies outlined with dancing fireflies laying on a bed of silk. It is holding lots of love. Be careful and blessed my friend.
Love,
Honeybun 🤗❤️🥰😘
Good Morning My Dearest Joni,
I am delighted you like the poem and very grateful to you for your kind words and for the praise. You are a sweetheart. Thank you for the gifts. They are beautiful. Sending you plenty of love and hugs.
Have a wonderful and inspiring day honeybun
G (Button)
Beautiful Button you are staying so inspired despite your crazy busy schedule. I love your micro poetry on Instagram. Not that easy to do and yet you make the words feel like silk on ones body. Your work is very personal to me, it speaks to me like the trees. It’s uniquely beautiful style and visuals are uncanny. When I discovered Tori Amos, her early work like “Little Earthquakes” (musician) I felt such a connection with her. The connection I feel with you is so much stronger. I seriously can not wait for your new book to be released. I hope the Vita Brevis “Brought to Sight and Swept Away,” continues its great success.
Everyone aspires to work toward someone’s else’s work they hear, smell, touch and even taste at times. Not to try and duplicate ones literal uniqueness but to strive to evoke such strong feelings with your own poetry. For me, that person is you Button. However, there are many poets I follow that I am in awe of and cherish their work. So many others that teach me so much. Sending you love that spills over and into great admiration for your poetry. May your day be a wonderfully blessed one and know you are in my prayers.
Love you,
Honeybun
In love with the poem.
Thank you so much.
You are very graciously welcome so much.
Like it.
Thank you so much.
Such elegance! The second line has my heart!❤️ Beautifully done, Gabriela!
Thank you so much Dishita 🌹
😍😍😍😍
great piece 💛💛
Thank you.
Lovely words
Thank you so much.
Relatable 💜💜
Wonderfully intense. The first line is my favorite, but what an ending.
Thank you Diana. It means a lot to me you like it.
Amazing prose… You literally described the words of loved heart 👏👏
My most sincere thanks for your beautiful comment.
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Hi Gabriela, thank you for stopping by my tiny corner of the world of words, pleased to read you 🙂
That final line: “I am so in love with you that I will accept hell provided you are part of it.” is heartbreaking!
Best, and stay creative always,
Ford
Hi Ford, it was my pleasure and thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me. A rose for you to soften the effect of the last line 🌹
Enjoy the rest of your day
Gabriela
Thank you Gabriela, a rose received with much pleasure and delight.
Enjoy the rest of your day too! 😊
Ford
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Ahhh you wanton romantic Gabriela!!! I think I already “suspected” it from reading your love poems…Even hell is more than acceptable. If your love comes with it, it’s a private gazebo of romance and possibilities. even hell has hope, if your love is standing in its burning gates…Wow!! I love your passion and your certainty! The image is gorgeous…perfect…slightly steampunk and virtual, I was drawn to it immediately!! Your poem of total declaration to your love!! Ahhhh!
Aw.. Karima, thank you from the bottom of my heart. You took my breath away. I am grateful to you beyond words. You are my morning star.
Sending you love and hugs. Plenty of love and hugs.
xoxoxo…
‘I am so in love with you that I will accept hell provided you are part of it.’ 😀
Love the way you weave romance always. Cute.
Thank you sweetheart. You are a gem.
My pleasure always 🙂
In love with you is perfectly suited for this time and era we need some love all over the world. Beautiful poem indeed worth sharing👏👏👏
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I am glad you think so 🌹
So dramatic and such deeply intense passion! This girl has her mind made up!
And really; this is very lovely indeed, brings back memories, and instills a thought, to perhaps ignite a spark, which begins a dream; which leads to a gift from God.
Thank you so much for your beautiful words. They mean a lot to me.
You’re welcome! Proof is in the pudding as the old adage goes; and you’ve got some Mighty-Fine Pudding! Good word and God bless.
Thank you. Lots of blessings to you too 🙏
🙏 Thank you very much Gabriela! 🙏🕊✝️🕊🙏
I love that last line in particular!
Thank you hon.
xoxo