one I love you #poem #poetry #poetry collection

my hair touches my shoulders
eyes, disheveled by the desperation of the stars, turn black
chords, those mistresses of love, of adulation, and of ardor
shadows
in the dark my chest wants to explode
psychosis, I hear what others cannot see
fingers, the hurricane of passion plays
a violin
a look
one I love you
that at the end
I knew youโ€™d say

My book, Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings, can be ordered here.
Thank you.
Love
Gabriela

@short-prose-fiction (Gabriela Marie Milton)

“Capriccio Nr. 24” | Niccolรฒ Paganini

104 thoughts on “one I love you #poem #poetry #poetry collection

  1. Enchanting and magnificent poem!!! ๐Ÿ˜ I love so much your poems, I’m totally fascinated!!! โ™ฅ๏ธ
    A very big hug full of affection! ๐Ÿค—
    With love, Ylenia Ely xoxoxo โ™ฅ๏ธ

    1. Oh, my dearest Ylenia, you are so sweet. I am beyond grateful for your praise and for your friendship. Please know I love your work with all my heart.
      Enjoy the rest of your weekend
      Love
      Gabriela

    1. Thank you Timothy. I was so excited to see the aerial map last night! Your doing so much for all of us.
      Maya sends hugs to everyone.

      1. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ™

      2. Spunk, Silver and Loki send you and Maya kitty hugs and kitty kisses. Lola’s purring. Sasha and Marble send their greetings.

  2. Another violin piece! Did you by chance listen to the video I have posted? We are exactly on the SAME page! I am covered in goosebumps!

    Your poem blew me away! How you express yourself and along with this music my heart is just about bursting! xo

    1. Haha! I did listen. I got goosebumps too.
      Thank you for your beautiful words about my poem Amy. you are a blessing. I am honored to have you as a friend sweetheart.
      Huge hugs.
      G.

      1. Thank you so much sweetheart. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒธ

  3. Splendid. Magnificent. Enchanting. Mesmerizing……I could go on and on and on……so so beautiful! The vivid imagery, the beautiful metaphors….. WOWโคโค๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒน

    Lots and lots of love to youโคโคโค๐ŸŒธ

    1. Aw… thank you. You are so kind. I am humbled by your every word.
      Sending you flowers, love, and sunshine.
      xoxoxoxo
      Gabriela

      1. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ™

    1. Thank you so much Diana. You really made me happy. May you have a fabulous rest of the weekend.
      Love.
      G.

    1. Your beautiful words brought sunshine in my morning, sweetheart. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
      Love
      Gabriela

    1. Thank you so much my dearest Olivia. You are a gem. Sending you plenty of love ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’•

  4. โ€œfingers, the hurricane of passion plays the violinโ€ dearest Button your poetry never disappoints.
    Every line gorgeous so sometimes it is hard to pick a favorite line but I did. I decided to watch the video which was magnificent. I always wonder what gives a poet the first line that comes to mind. I donโ€™t know but if your inspiration came from this video I can see why. It explodes in glorious passion. What a masterpiece Button, accompanied by another masterpiece. Have a blessed and relaxing Sabbath. Honeybun sending much love from NC. xoxoxo ๐ŸŒบ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ’

    1. Honeybun, thank you so much. You are so kind to me. I am blessed. I cherish your marvelous words and our friendship more than you can imagine. I am thrilled you liked the video. Music inspires me very often.
      Joni, I am so glad I got your comment. The entire morning I was on a live chat with WP trying to fix a bunch of issues that were wrong with my site ( I was able to read some posts but not more than that). I lost plenty of comments and I lost contact with some of my followers. According to WP everything is fixed now but I cannot recuperate the comments and I do not know from whom I got disconnected. Am I venting? Sorry about this sweetheart.
      I hope I can catch up with everything today including my emails ๐Ÿ™‚ Your words brought beauty back into my life.
      Love you honeybun.
      Thank you for everything
      G (button)

      1. Oh I am sorry about that I know how frustrated I get. Occasionally I donโ€™t get comments until the day after they are written and I feel terrible. Well hopefully things are sorted. I havenโ€™t seen a response yet to my email but I will check again. I really enjoy your love of the violin as well. I hope you get all your comments back as they are precious to you I am sure as are mine to me. We actually went to church so we were gone most of the morning. Wishing you a lovely day beautiful Button. Honeybun ๐ŸŒบ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ˜˜โค๏ธ

      2. Thank you for your understanding Joni. I am glad you guys went to the church.
        I did not write back yet. I will write before midnight or after. You will have my reply by tomorrow morning. Before then I want you to know that I am really happy for you honeybun. You are talented and you deserve the best. You are a blessed soul.
        Love you
        xoxoxoxo

      3. Oh no worries my dear Button. I know how very busy you are. Please donโ€™t worry yourself it is the Sabbath and you should rest. Whenever you have time I will be here. Please donโ€™t rush anything. Your poem was treat enough. So gorgeous. Love you right back, yours honeybun ๐ŸŒบ๐ŸŒธ๐Ÿ˜˜

      4. Oh, you are a sweetheart, Joni. I am still going to write to you today ๐Ÿ™‚
        xoxoxoxo

  5. Love this, I am guilty of not commenting enough on your wonderful posts and for that I apologise, the line, โ€˜ disheveled by the desperation of the stars,โ€™ just beautiful ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. Hi Charlie, thank you so much for your comment. It makes me very happy.
      Please, comment only if you can or if you feel like. I am humbled and honored you read my posts. That in itself touches my heart, Charlie.
      May you have a beautiful week ahead.
      Yours
      Gabriela

    1. Thank you so much, David. I knew you will catch that line ๐Ÿ™‚
      Have a beautiful rest of the day.
      Gabriela

  6. oh wow! this touches my heart Gabriela, the longing to be seen and heard in the most acute way by someone we love deeply. such carefully chosen words to express a desire only one can fulfill. really fell in love with this one

    1. Gina, sweetheart, thank you so much for finding the time to read and to leave such a beautiful comment. Your comment is more beautiful than my poem.
      Wishing you a wonderful week ahead. I hope everything is well with you.
      xoxoxo

    1. Your comment humbles me Wendi. Thank you from the bottom of my heart dear. I hope everything is well with you. Sending you lots of blessings.
      G.

  7. Ahh Gabriela. Your words and the way youโ€™ve structured this create a fervor that feels like it mirrors the pace and crescendo of the violin – chords, shadows, psychosis, fingers. Passion. So much passion, of the dark and uninhibited kind. Lost in the moment. The song was selected perfectly. The overall effect was bliss.

    Honey, I emailed you. I hope youโ€™ve had a wonderful weekend and are feeling a little better. Iโ€™m sending you a deck of cards, and Iโ€™m stacking them in your favour.

    Lots and lots of love, and some pineapple lumps too. If you donโ€™t know what they are, youโ€™ll have to come here to find out. Or use google, next best thing ๐Ÿ˜‰.
    Hugs xoxox

    1. Oh, my fabulous, Rachel. Thank you so much for your comment. You know how to bring happiness in my life. I am so glad you liked the song.
      I received your email. I am grateful beyond words, Rachel. I can’t tell you how much it means to me that you took the time to write. It touches me profoundly. I feel a little better. Actually I was waiting to feel better before replying. I will reply soon. I know it was your love and the light from the southern cross that made me happier.
      “Iโ€™m sending you a deck of cards, and Iโ€™m stacking them in your favor.” Thank you. Can I get tarot cards? And can I get the Sun, the Star, The High Priestess, and the Wheal of Fortune? ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thank you for the love. “pineapple lumps” I googled. Place of origin: New Zealand. Thank you. I am sure they are wonderful. I am going to check to see if they have them on Amazon. If they do I’ll order them.
      Rachel, thank you again for everything and please take care of yourself. I can’t shake that feeling that you either have a lot to work or something else is going on that drains your energies. It sounds weird, but that’s how I feel.
      Sending you bots of love and flowers.
      Please take care.
      xoxoxoxo

      1. Honey, Iโ€™m so glad you are feeling a little better. I wish I could do more. You donโ€™t have to be feeling better to talk to me. Iโ€™d love to be able to hear how you are, good and bad. You have my heart my friend. Nothing could be too much.

        The tarot cards, I donโ€™t know much about them, but I will do everything I can to ensure these cards you want are yours.

        You are perceptive, I do feel drained. By… I donโ€™t know. Life. But Iโ€™m ok. I wish I could sleep more.

        Gabriela, I hope every wish of yours come true. Lots of love, Rachel xoxoxo

    1. My dearest Brad. You are wonderful. Oh, no, m y world is not more beautiful than yours.
      “breath of fresh and rarified air” That is so humbling. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
      Sending you love a beautiful song from my world.
      Take care and enjoy the rest of the weekend.
      Yours
      G.

  8. Just love this. Every violin related words and poems are like opus in my heart. Is such a beautiful instrument that arouses the warmest feelings inside us.
    This poem is absolutly wonderful Gabriela!

    1. Irina, thank you so much for your beautiful words and for the praise. They warm my heart. I love violins too. Itโ€™s a magical instrument.
      Sending you plenty of hugs
      Gabriela

  9. Your poem is passion! Such a magnificent verse, Gabriela.
    I am sorry I am late but have been busy lately and wanted to savour your luscious words in leisure. โค๏ธ๐ŸŒท๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Thank you. Thank you. I managed to get to your site and comment on your last post. I hope you got the comment. Let me know when you have time.
      xoxo

  10. Hi Gabriela. I thought of going through some of your older posts today and guess what? They are so so beautiful. I actually love the imagery here. The violin played upon by fingers of passion. Ah! Sublime and serene. Beaut. Lovely poem. I wonder if I’ll ever leave the site again.

    1. Hi Shanyu
      Thank you for your beautiful comment.
      “Sublime and serene.” I am thrilled you think so.
      “I wonder if Iโ€™ll ever leave the site again.” I know you will leave. I just hope you will come back.
      Have a beautiful week my dear friend.
      Yours
      G.

      1. Haha. You’ve caught me, but I will keep coming back, always. I have taken this point of reading at least one work of yours a day. Let’s see how long I can go reading just one at a time.
        Yours,
        S.

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