I resurrected him.
It was a mischievous act meant to attract the attention of mortals.
Instead I attracted some demons determined to follow me. I locked them….
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Poetry and Prose by Gabriela Marie Milton #1 Amazon Bestselling Poet & Editor, Award Winning Author, Pushcart Prize Nominee
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Another masterpiece 👌
You are very kind. Thank you so much.
Imagery infused, 🎨 thought-provoking, 🤔 soulfully relatable. 🙌 Typical G. 😉 💕
Thank you for your beautiful comment, my dear. It means a lot to me,
Excellent poetry, indeed!
My most sincere thanks. I am glad you think so 🙂
Loved it. Fabulous piece 🙂
Aw.. thank you so much. I am thrilled you enjoyed it.
Any act to attract attention, displaces the truth.
Excellent. You’re an inspiration.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Your words made my day brighter.
Gabriela I love your vision, the images you create, the tension and the spirit within the poems you write is intense and very interesting to read. You are a very gifted artist and I greatly admire your work. Your words are beautiful and I am sure you will find, through your poetry, what you are seeking.
All the best to you,
Thank you so much for the praise and for your kindness. You words humble me. I only can hope I am what you say I am.
Have a marvelous evening, Francisco.
the sockets of time
I like this, Gab, as well as My alter ego hisses like a snake at every word I write.
I don’t know what the truth is either anymore, but I keep searching.
Hey, Bo. Thank you for reading and commenting, As for the truth we can keep searching together 🙂
Beautiful piece, G. Another gift for me!!!
Oh, thank you Ash. You are so kind. I hope everything is well and you are enjoying the holidays.
Thank you and feeling great! Take care
Great for you.
Thank you 😊
😊😊YOU are welcome.😊😊
Ahhh one of my favourites, I am so thrilled to see it’s been published. When I first read this I believe I suggested those demons may need a little starvation
“I feed them through cracks which propagate at the speed of light.”
It seems a good opportunity to ask you how you got on with that 😂.
It’s also a good opportunity to wish my dearest Gabriela a happy happy holiday season. To check in with her that she has been resting, being loved, eating chocolates, and dreaming fragrant beautiful dreams. I wish all of these for you. Love and hugs across that mighty ocean G, from here to there xoxox
My fabulous Rachel,
Thank you for your beautiful words and wishes. The mighty ocean did not stop them. They are here. Filled with gratitude and friendship I arrange them in my heart.
“It seems a good opportunity to ask you how you got on with that 😂. I don’t feed them anymore. I starve them in purpose 🙂 There.
I confess. I eat too much. It got to stop 🙂
May 2020 be a year filled with happiness. May your most beautiful dreams come true. May you inherit an ocean of love. And perhaps you can come just a bit out of those shadows. What do you say my beautiful Rachel?
Love, hugs, and roses.
Thank you, my gorgeous G, you allow me to come out of the shadows with the beautiful light you shine on me. Plus, I am very happy to hear about the starving demons. That’s made my day. Rather you eat and they go hungry. It’s the season for eating really. Have you recovered from your injury? Gosh I hope so. And, are you having a holiday?
I got your love hugs and roses. And your beautiful wishes. I’m so glad you got mine. You are a treasure G, you really are xoxo
I did recover although it took longer than I thought. Thank you for asking.
I am so glad you got got my love hugs and roses. You deserve them.
I am having a good holiday. I hope yours is as wonderful as your soul, Rachel.
I am so pleased you recovered, albeit slowly xoxox
Thank you so much, Rachel.
Beautiful work G! I am glad your work is getting the attention and recognition it deserves! Keep the lovely words coming.
Brad, thank you so much for the praise. You humble me every time you comment on my work.
I wish you a beautiful 2020 filled with happiness.
Excellent poetry, indeed!
Thank you so much, sweetheart 🙏💕🤗
Nice piece and message
Really ,this poem is most amazing and gorgeous.most congratulations,dear G!!
Thank you very much Aruna. I wish you a beautiful 2020, dear.
So much thanks and i too wish you most beautiful Happy New Year 2020🌷🌷🌷
Very nicely written. Congratulations on your writing achievements as well. Thank you for sharing. Love ❤️ Joni
Thank you for the congrats and the kind words, Joni. May you have a fabulous 2020 💕
You too. Love J
Loved the piece, and congrats.
Thank you so much, Paul.
You are so welcome.
A happy 2020,Paul 🙂
Many thanks. Blessings and best wishes for your 2020 Gabriela
Thank you. Blessings and best wishes to you too.
Congratulations! Keep being an inspiration!
Thank you so much Scott. You are very kind. Have a fabulous 2020.