the eye of my heart
cries
lost at sea
ribbons of black
@Gabriela Marie Milton
image: S. Splajn; Shutterstock; [link]
the eye of my heart #poem #micropoetry
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Poetry and Prose by Gabriela Marie Milton #1 Amazon Bestselling Poet & Editor, Award Winning Author, Pushcart Prize Nominee
Nice!
Thank you Jeff.
Gabriela
Beautiful!
Thank you Jason. That’s very kind of you 🙂
So short, yet so evocative. Brava!
Hey David. Thank you so much. I am thrilled you think so.
Funny I was ready to get back to your yesterday post to finish my comment. On my way .
Have a beautiful rest of the day.
You are welcome! I look forward to your thoughts on my piece. Off to read them now.
My pleasure, David.
beautifully sad……..yet not! well done.
Thank you so much, my dearest Wendi.
Hugs and blessings.
you are so welcome, such a pleasure….
Thank you my dear.
xoxo
You’re getting really really good at this, Gab. The shorter, the more challenging, and you did it marvelously.
Thank you so much Bo. That means a lot to me. Sometimes I get that feeling that nothing is good enough. Do you know what I am talking about?
Oh, yes. All the time. Then, when I’m pleased with what I did, I wonder if I can be objective at all, thinking I may be conceited. I must be.
The bottom line is it’s ok to doubt. It makes you strive to do better.
I guess you are right, Bo. Sometimes I am very pleased: “Oh, this piece of mine is exceptional” and the very morning I am like “Did I write this?” Interestingly you think. I mostly react. But perhaps is just semantic.
Hugs. Don’t forget to give B a big hug from me.
Will go. Hugs back.
Hey there!! This is just so inspiring especially for a beginner like me… I’ve started my blog recently and would really appreciate if you could give a follow:)
Thank you my dear. I am glad you found it inspiring. I will visit your blog as soon as I can.
Best
Gabriela
You may want to leave me a link here because for some reason I can’t get to your blog.
So deep, love it👌🏾
You are always so supportive and so kind. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Ohh wowww… I never really thought you will reply but this is so overwhelming… Tysm… MY BLOG ON WORDPRESS- safarrnaamaa.wordpress.com the same site I made the comment from
Yes, I know, but for some reason I couldn’t connect. And still I can’t connect from your name. Let’s see if I can use the site you sent.
http://safarrnaama.wordpress.com
Nope. It just says that you are no longer available. I’ll contact WP later.
http://safarrnaamaa.wordpress.com
Now, it’s working and I am following you.
My eyes love this, Gabriela!
And my soul loves your words, Eric. Thank you.
so gorgeously portrayed – melancholy at its best
You are so kind, my dear friend. Thank you 🙂
My pleasure always
🙂
Touching 😍
Thank you so much, my dear 🌸
😊💕
so beautiful dear poet
Thank you my dear Gina.
Have a beautiful rest of the day.
Gabriela
you too sweet Gabriela, may it be restful and kind to you
🌸🙏🤗
The eye of your heart…. crying black ribbons in the sea. Oh G, you know how to evoke such emotion in just a few lines. You’re an absolute inspiration xoxo
My dearest Rachel, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind comment.
xoxo
Hi ShortProse
I have nominated your blog to Sunshine Blogger award. Details on my blog page.
Keep it up!
MJ
Thank you so much for the nomination, my dear. I am honored.
Well deserved!
🤗💕
😀🤩
All good. You deserve it!
beautiful:)
Thank you so much Misha.
Enjoy the rest of your day.
Gabriela
Nice.
Thank you 🙂
YOU are welcome.
All of the words paint a picture of grief and mourning. Honesty said!
It’s said. I know. Thank you for your comment and many blessings. May you have a wonderful Christmas.
Thought provoking lines,dear G!!
Thank you 🙂
Welcome ,dear!!
Just taking a moment to step back into your world. Beautiful, G.
Thank you so much, Ash. I cherish your words and the moment you took.