luscious #poem #poetry #short prose

tulips shed their virgin looks
palm trees bend
birds rotate the purple of the clouds
dolphins
luscious skin on luscious skin
I pack an ocean
two flowers
and a dream

@short-prose-fiction

 

80 thoughts on “luscious #poem #poetry #short prose

      1. I get my writing tips from you, sweetheart.
        You are so talented. There is nothing I can teach you. Seriously.

         
  1. G, this poem…. it is so beautiful, luscious, gorgeous. Packed with beauty It speaks to me in ways that soothe my soul, on a day my soul needs soothing. I feel like I want to pack myself up with the flowers and the ocean in this poem, and be carried away in the dream of it. Drift somewhere in it.

    You have done something to my heart here. Like given it a gift. I love this poem.

    πŸŒ·β€οΈπŸ‘œπŸŒŠπŸŒ xox

     
    1. My dearest Rachel, I am so happy this poem speaks to you. For some reason I thought so.
      I like to speak to you πŸ™‚
      Seriously, Rachel, the warmth of your words means a lot to me. This is a day (well it’s evening now) in which my soul needs soothing. Your beautiful comment worked magic. You are magic, Rachel. Thank you for being YOU.
      Have a lovely rest of the week.
      G,

       
      1. Thank you so much, Rachel. Indeed, I am working too hard and I am starting to slip. I am worried about myself too. I have to make it till mid-December and then I will probably rest. On top the death of my father is starting to hit.
        Lots of love and hugs to you sweetheart and thank you for your kindness.
        xoxo

         
      1. YOU can say your poetry.πŸ™‚πŸ™‚ You are very graciously welcome again.πŸ™‚πŸ™‚ Have a great day. Kick off your shoes. Feel the wind on your bare feet. Enjoy!!! You are amazing.

         
      2. I worked the entire day. Probably I need to read your beautiful words twice and then kick off my shoes and enjoy the magic of this evening.
        Wishing you the best and thank you again.
        G.

         

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