a bird awakes the moon
a fish turns in my dreams
algae wrap around my wrists
Valencia, I just saw you in his eyes
his skin is madness
made of sandalwood
the smell of autumn paves the way
loves lost on lonely cobbled streets
a shadow dances on the wall
a pen writes on a table by itself
on a deck
a sailor flips a coin
dreams,
dust of desiccated lands
impressions, fingers on the pillow
under a purple sky
dried wounds
Valencia,
this room is loneliness,
alienation,
and smells of sandalwood
@Gabriela Marie Milton
image: Tithi Luadthong; Shutterstock; [link]
So purely expressed. Loved the way you brought about the sandalwood reference in the end. This is another favourite of mine😊
Thank you so much, Niharika. I am happy you enjoyed it. Have a beautiful rest of the day.
Thank you ma’am
My pleasure. And you can call me Gabriela 🙂
Aah, that is exquisite flattery😂 Though I’d rather not, you’re a university professor, and I’m just a student, it would be incorrect of me😅
Oh, no, please do not think like this. We are all a blogging family here. We mostly have common goals. I respect everyone and I hope to make as many friends as I can.
So, are we friends?
Gladly Gabriela😄
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You do too. It was a pleasure to read it
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Love what you did here, Gab. I can almost smell it.
Thank you Bojana. I love the smell of sandalwood.
Me too. Wonderful smell.
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Ah! The smell of sandalwood! Lovely!
Thank you so much, sweetheart. Yesterday I was glad to see you posted. I hope everything is going well.
You are welcome, dear! Everything is fine, my dear. Just too busy on the home front!
Glad to hear everything is fine. Yes, busy is hear for most of us.
Love and hugs.
So sweet of you to be concerned dear! Too many social commitments are keeping me away from blogging right now. Hopefully in a fortnight things will ease. Your love and hugs mean a lot. Hugs to you too!
Even if is busy enjoy every moment.
xoxo
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Bravo! 💜
Thank you soooo much,
xoxo
So many senses touched upon! Lovely.
Aw.. I am so glad you think you. Thank you for your beautiful comment
xoxo
My pleasure!
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So much lovely sound by a pure soul.”..the smell of autumn paves the way,love lost on lonely cobbled streets….”beautiful imagination.”…this room is lonellieness,alienation and smell of sandalwood”.remarkable piece like a soliloqy in amazing metaphorical way with lovely Valencia.gorgeous.dear G!! Last four lines are most favourite for me🌷
Thank you very much, Aruna. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Really,its sound is so much thought provoking.you are most welcome,dear G!!
Thank you again.
Welcome again,dear!!
Fantastic 👍👍👍
Aw…Victoria, thank you so much 🌸💝❤️🌻
the sadness can be felt and the sandlewood could be smelled. bravo for making my senses come alive.
Thank you, my dearest Wendi. I am so grateful for your support.
Sending you lots of love and blessings.
my pleasure always.
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Sandalwood ❤
Beautifully written.
Thank you so much sweetheart ❤️ Are you on IG? I am thinking about going on IG in January so if you are can you let me know what you IG is?
I am not on IG currently. If I start using it again. Will let you know 🤗
Thank you so much, dear.
Truly and wonderfully beautiful poetry.
Thank you Nico 🙏
Gabriela – what can I say – excuse me as I read, again, again, again…
Eric, you are so kind. Thank you very much.
I still don’t know what’s the mystery of an English gentlemen? 🙂
Perhaps there’s no mystery other than being who we are…
“being who we are” is the mystery, Eric 🙂
I love the way you write ♥️
Thank you so much, my dear 💕
I am transported to this room, of loneliness, alienation, the smell of sandalwood , the madness of his skin. A room where everything is so filled with emotion, so tangible, but out of reach, the overall effect of longing magnified and heart wrenching.
“A shadow dances on the wall”
I sighed
“A pen writes on a table by itself”
I sighed again.
This is a poem I wish to inhale, breathe in the air of the words, and physically touch the beauty of them. The wounds may be dried, but the imprints of fingers on a pillow remain.
You have filled me with emotion. Breathtaking poetry dear friend. 😘🌸🌟💝❤️
My Dearest Rachel,
I am so sorry for my late reply. I did not see your beautiful comments until now.
“This is a poem I wish to inhale, breathe in the air of the words, and physically touch the beauty of them.” Your words touch my heat deeply. I am so humbled by them. I am grateful to you beyond words.
“You have filled me with emotion.” So did you, Rachel. And it goes deeper than that.
I hope your are having a marvelous week.
Love, chocolates, hugs and plenty of gratitude.
xoxo
“And it goes deeper than that.” it does G, from my side too. Xoxox
From my side too.
xoxo
Ah, so lovely!❤️
Aw.. my dear, thank you so much.
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Oh how I love your words..they are infused with the fragrance of sandlewood, G.
Thank you so much for your beautiful words Megha. I just got up. I am getting ready to read everyone’s post 🙂
Have a fabulous week.
You too G. I got up with fever today so I’m taking easy.Have an awesome week!!
I am sorry to hear, Megha. Get well soon.
xoxo
Yes I will.Started medication today.Thanks G
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Don’t I just love your mind. Your poems are everything Short prose!
My most sincere thanks for the praise. It means a lot to me.
I like your poem. And I love this illustration, your last few lines describe that room for me.
Thank you for your comment. I am glad you liked the picture and the last part.
Beautiful 🙂 I could almost smell it.
I nominated you for the sunshine blogger award by the way.
https://auroraborealys.wordpress.com/2019/11/11/sunshine-blogger-award/
Feel free to participate!
Thank you so much 🙂
Nice.
Thank you 😊
This is awesome, dear G! I missed a lot of your amazing poems and everyone too.
Thank you for your reading and for your beautiful words. I thought you probably spent more time on IG. I will join in January. That’s my plan 🙂
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I join the Nano to continue my novel I started last July, dear G. I sacrificed social media for now. I am not spending much time on IG.
OK. Good luck with your novel. Please keep me updated.
xoxo
Thank you, dear G. I stopped writing it because I got burned out. I’m back on track but a little slow. The good thing is I’m writing every day.
I am glad you are writing every day, Winnie. That is fabulous. I am so burned out that probably I have to stop now.
Good luck with everything sweetheart. And as I said please keep me posted.
xoxo
I hope you take a break, dear G. You deserved it. Thank you again and good luck too. ❤️🌺
Thank you Winnie 💝
You’re welcome, dear G! 🌺
P.s. That’s great! I cn’t wait to connect with you on IG. 😍🌺
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Great read
Thank you from my heart.
My pleasure reading it
Such lovely words 🌷
Thank you do much 🙂
I love the imagery, the sensuality of it.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. It means a lot to me.
Just found this jewel of a poem! How can I not love a poem so intense and which conjures such vivid images and that takes you to the smells of sandalwood…these verses are incredibly beautiful:
“…loves lost on lonely cobbled streets
a shadow dances on the wall…”
The ancient cobbled streets of Ciutat Vella, where so many shadows pass before me,
some dance under the glow of candlelight,
others seek the darkness of the night…
Gabriela you write beautiful things in such a beautiful way…
Love it!
A big hug from my Valencia,
F.
Really? I do not remember if I followed you first or you followed me. I do not remember who found whom first but I remember thinking it must have been that poem that brought you to my site. How wrong I was. How wrong our perceptions are. At least mine 🙂
Francisco, I am glad you found the poem and you liked it. I am actually thrilled. However, it needs work. it’s just a draft. I plan to work on and really make it beautiful.
“The ancient cobbled streets of Ciutat Vella, where so many shadows pass before me,
some dance under the glow of candlelight,
others seek the darkness of the night…” Gorgeous.
Do you want to give it a shot? Rewrite the poem when you have time or you feel inspired. Make it really passionate and beautiful. If you do that inspiration is my gift to you matador. If you don’t you are still one on my best friends.
Gracias de todo corazón. Eres un buen amigo.
Gabriela
Really, I found the poem to be quite beautiful and did not think of it as a draft to be worked on but you are the poet and I respect that one hundred percent and I learn from your words and from your work. While reading your line those little lines came to my head and sort of forced my fingers on the keyboard of the portable to write them. That is what I mean about inspiration! Yes, I would love to give it a shot as you have suggested…and you are one of my best friends too!
Dos besos, uno por mejilla, como hacemos en Espanya,
F.
“But you are the poet” You’re sweet. You’re darling. You made me smile. I am not The Poet. I don’t think I am even a poet, Francisco, I have no idea what I am doing. I love poetry, I love arts, I let myself feel, and sometimes if I am lucky I even now how I feel. I surprise myself from time to time 🙂
” I learn from your words and from your work.” I am so grateful for your words but there is nothing you can learn from me. You are way ahead of me. You are a true artist.
“While reading your line those little lines came to my head and sort of forced my fingers on the keyboard of the portable to write them. That is what I mean about inspiration!” I’ll take the credit for that. That makes me really happy 🙂
“Yes, I would love to give it a shot as you have suggested” My happiness will know no limits. Do it when you have time. Do it when you feel like. Do it if you feel like.
un beso para tu alma
Thank you for everything.
G.
Thank you! We all have “sensibilidad artística” but not all develop it or express it the same. You are an artist, a poet and a person with great “sensibilidad” and the beauty of your soul is seen in your lovely words. Thank you for your words, as I always tell you, they mean very much to me because I know they are true. I am very happy, thrilled to have met you!!!
Que disfrutes de este bello día, y que te sientas llena de pasión y creatividad,
Un gran abrazo 💚,
Francisco
Wow
Thank you!
Nice blog you havee
Thank you.