never sinned #poem #poetry

amour
your eyes are apple green
my eyes are forged in fire
tears of joy hold hands
the sky is blue
the air is pure
the music blooms
we didn’t sleep
yet why does this morning feel
like we have never sinned?
amour

@short-prose-fiction

image: Maria Bo; Shutterstock; [link]

 

104 thoughts on “never sinned #poem #poetry

  1. Oh my. I read your poems and I have these images of you caressing every word with soft fingers before placing them in your inspiring poetry. Here I imagined a bedroom all white; almost cloud like. Everything about this was tender and warm. As gentle as a first kiss; as beautiful as a garden of love.

    This piece breathed love. There was a sweet tenderness here that was heavenly. Sigh.

    Have gorgeous day my friend. This was gorgeous from title to finish.

     
    1. Thank you so much, Drew. What a magnificent description. I am really humbled by your words: the first kiss; the garden of love; tenderness; heaven. Thank you again for these words.
      I am thrilled you enjoyed the poem.
      Have a beautiful day! May all your wishes come true!

       
  2. For such a short piece this has so much going. One can feel the softness and tenderness with the tears holding hands but also the passion in the eyes of fire, the perfection in the sky of blue but also the ever so subtle tension in the question near the end. There is so much being expressed so precisely in so tight a space that it forces the reader to stop and process it all. Lovely, G!

     
    1. Oh, David. Thank you from the bottom of my heart! Your comment is beautiful and your reading so right. I am grateful to you for each word.
      Have a marvelous day and I’ll get back to you tonight.

       
      1. David, I wrote a comment again. After I posted it disappeared. I also noticed that my comment to your narrative poem is not there either. You may want to check your spam folder. If my comments are not there I think you should contact WP and let then know.

         
      2. G, I checked my spam folder as you suggested, and the comments weren’t there. I also checked my comment settings and nothing appears to have changed. I’ll contact WP tomorrow and try to get to the bottom of what happened. I’m sorry your comments got lost. Thank you for trying multiple times, and for alerting me to the problem. I appreciate you more than you know. Hope you have a pleasant night

         
      3. David, I also remember seeing more comments on your narrative poem. They are not there anymore. So yes, check with WP.

         
  3. Beautiful expression of amour,my dear friend!!I think that pure soul of amour had never sinned .right,my dear soul !!🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌺🍁🍁🍁🍁

     
  4. Most beautiful image of a girl in this poem like a pure soul.that is amazing painting of Maria Bro.wonderful,dear friend!! I am appreciating for that painting with your amazing poem.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

     
  5. The image and poem are really harmonised here. Thanks for sharing! I am a Creative Life Coach and have a poetry blog in case you have time to read? and I am also on Instagram as #coachingcreatively, let’s follow each other if you use this medium? Have a good day? Sam 🙂

     

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