confession #poem #poetry

nights of passion
mornings of confession
between the ebb and flow
an unreachable love
sounds of cellos
contradict themselves
the silent witness
a pale moon
perhaps I dreamed you


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51 thoughts on “confession #poem #poetry

    1. I am glad you enjoyed the poem, B.
      Thank you for the birthday wishes.
      May you have a lovely evening.

    1. Thank you so much for your appreciation. Indeed it is problematic. I hope it gets solved soon πŸ™‚

  1. I hear these words as though played in long strokes of the bow on the cello, ebbs and flows, contradictions, a dream, a confession. But the moon knows, the moon sees all.

    This has such a musical beauty G.

    And did I see in an earlier comment that it is your birthday?? Wow, you kept that one quiet. Now I will need to whip up a cake and a song πŸŽ‚πŸŽΆπŸŒΊβ€οΈπŸ’‹

    Love and hugs and cake and song xoxoxo

    1. My dearest Rachel, I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I am touched by your lovely words.
      Oh, thank you for the birthday wishes.
      The cake was delicious. I ate it all. Now, where is the song? πŸ™‚

      1. Goodness G, my trouble with a song for you is that I cannot choose. I have whittled it down to 4 –
        1. beautiful, classical, stunning
        2. Uplifting dance inspiring, birthday vibes
        3. An old fave of mine by a NZ artist
        4. Several that just have such beautiful lyrics that I would want to share them all with you!!!

        How can I choose???
        Since it was originally a birthday song, i am going to go with #2 – may not be your style but I find it hard not to want to dance to it. Plus, I find the dance moves in this clip mesmerising
        (Parov Stelar, catgroove)

        Let me know if and when you would like #1, 3 and 4.

      2. Oh, thank you from the bottom of my heart for going through all the trouble, Rachael. Your choice is perfect. I love the clip. I really love it. I cannot thank you enough.
        Here is for you with all my love.

    1. Dear Charlie,

      My most sincere thanks for the praise. You made my day more beautiful.

      Also, thank you from the bottom of my heart for the birthday wishes. They mean a lot to me.

      I am going to catch up with your latest poem tonight. Sorry for being late.

      Lots of blessings and a fabulous day, my friend.

    1. Aw.. I am really humbled by your comment. Thank you very much. Are all my poems like this? I can’t tell. Only my readers can πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you so much for the praise and for the lovely birthday wishes. As always your kindness touches me.

    1. Thank you so much, sweetheart. Love and blessings to you β€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’œπŸ‘Ά

  2. really enjoyed this thoroughly, so beatutifully evocative i could see myself confessing about my sinful nights. i’m a little curious though, what inspired your desire to write such an amazing piece?

    1. Aw.. thank you for your beautiful comment. I am delighted you enjoyed it.
      “i’m a little curious…” πŸ™‚


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