sounds of flutes #poetry #poem

listen to the horses gallop in the water
in the midst of autumn
axes of gold passion
intersect cold laughter
chestnuts crack the time
heaving their fruits

bake my lips with love
born from sounds of flutes

@short-prose-fiction

 

39 thoughts on “sounds of flutes #poetry #poem

    1. Thank you so much for your exquisite words! They warm my heart! The entire world is my muse. I think πŸ™‚

       
    1. “a G more free:, indeed! May the sun shine on you love and happiness! BTW how is the weather? πŸ™‚

       
      1. Weather back to being very English – quite changeable, a bit of this and that – not too much of the other – the hot stuff of recent times that strawed our lawns and warmed the sea enough for pale Englishmen to paddle in…

         
  1. she, where she goes early in the morning
    when the young horses in the waves run
    my ship is sinking with flags
    dust of Great Armada in front of the island

    but someone plays
    the flute
    on the deck

    an associative answer to this full-length poem with the signature of a great artist!

     
    1. Beautiful poem, my dear B! Thank you for calling me a great artist! That’s very generous of you!
      Wait a minute… ayyyy… the dust of the Great Armada.. don’t let your ship sink πŸ™‚ :

       
      1. ah, dear G, the pleasure is mine! but, as with all the old galleons – with wind in the sails and flags in the air …

         
  2. You tint the world in golden hues G, you paint an autumn I can hear and see and feel, and want to live within.
    Oh how I have missed your writing. I know this is an older post but it seriously warms my heart to read your beautiful words. A part of me sighs every time I read your poetry.

    How is the North?? I hope you are feeling nourished and productive. And of course, loved and happy.

    Many many hearts and hugs to you my friend β€οΈπŸ’œπŸ’“πŸ’•πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™β£οΈπŸ’πŸ’ž

     
    1. Oh, sweetheart… you made my day. Your words warmed my cold soul. Thank you so much.
      I got home last night. It was a lot of work. How did I enjoyed the region? Very much. It was gorgeous.
      However, I am sinking in some kind of depression here. Adrenaline let down. I have to come to life quickly because I have lots of other work to catch up with.
      Your beautiful words helped a lot.
      Thank you from the bottom of my heart, Rachel.
      Be well, be loved, be happy.
      xoxo

       
      1. Oh hon, I ache at your ache, you know I do. It is hard when life overwhelms, and feels on top of us. Too much to do, feeling like there is not enough of ourselves left to do it… gosh, I relate to that, sinking, drowning feeling. I have not met you in person, but I feel like I know a little of you, and feel that you have an inner strength, a determination that can not be beaten down by… life, sadness, work. You have a heart and soul full of beauty and light. I am certain of it. But I also hope that you can find the time to nourish that light, nurture yourself and be kind to yourself. You deserve that G. You deserve all the good things, and happy everythings….
        I am sending you love and hugs and chocolates in extra helpings today xoxo

         
      2. Ah, my sweetest R, thank you so much for taking the time to write such beautiful and healing words, You know me probably more than you think, I’ve never known what “to be kind to oneself” means. I don’t think that I deserve anything either.
        However, I receive with open heart your love and hugs.
        Returning them 10 000 times more.
        xoxo

         
      3. β€œI’ve never known what β€œto be kind to oneself” means.” Oh G. I know how kind and compassionate you are to others. Please give this same kindness and compassion to yourself. Please, for me, I know you deserve it. I know it. And I don’t grant myself as having many strengths, but recognising the integrity and genuine spirit in others is one that I do…

        Do you know how much I want to walk through your door right now, wherever you may be and hug you?

        I don’t know what time of day it is there but I don’t care, I’m pouring you a glass of wine and making you a feast xoxo

         
      4. Oh, sweetheart, thank you so much for your heartfelt words. I wish you could walk through my door right now.
        Am I drinking wine? Not without you.
        Thank you again for your kindness. You are great, Rachel. You really are.
        Love and hugs to you.

         
  3. This is a beautiful poem, Gabriela. I’m shown as subscribed to your site, however I don’t appear to have received your lovely poem in my inbox, but found it by going direct to your blog. I guess that its a glitch with WordPress. Best wishes, Kevin

     
    1. You are showering me with compliments today. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
      love and hugs to you.

       

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