…You’ve remained there forbidding my laughter for fear of not forgetting me.
Oh, that loyalty of yours in the mist of all temptations…
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my piece “Attic Melancholy” up at Free Verse Revolution #short prose #poetry #poem
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Nice read, Gab.
Thank you, Bojana.
Beautiful G. I read this on a very rainy morning, perfect.
Aw,,, Ash. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. May the sun come out (Canadian accent here) 🙂 and may you have a beautiful day.
Thanks G. Wishing you well!!!
Wishing you the same.
Love your flourishing, shrouded imagery.
Thank you, Watt. I am glad you liked it.
I kinda got mummy vibes from the pic 😉
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Great read for a rainy day, especially if you happen to be in an attic, as I am. Old toys always whisper to each other, don’t they?
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, my dear. I miss rainy days. Are there old toys in the attic? Do they whispers? Mine do that all the time.
Not in this attic, unfortunately 🙂 My old toys are kept elsewhere, and I am sure they whisper when nobody is around
Perhaps some time they can talk to mine 🙂
Have a beautiful day
xoxo
You too 🙂
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Congratulations G! This is amazingly beautiful.❤️
Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. 🤗💕🌸
I sure did! You are so welcome! 🤗❤️🌺
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Beautiful poetic lines, dear G! Good choice of the excerpt. I love it. 😊🌺❤️
Thank you so much, Winnie. Always grateful to you for being here. Love and hugs to you my dear
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My pleasure, dear G! Love and hugs too. 🤗❤️🌺
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Such beautiful imagery, Gabriela. It’s lovely!
Thank you, Rob. It means a lot to me.
Touching story!
Thank you very much, Alex. Your words mean a lot to me.
Your welcome, Short-prose-fiction…
Sending you my best wishes, Alex
Gabriela 🙂
That’s sweet of you, thanks. Best wishes to you too 😊
This is so richly dark, like mahogany. That kind of darkness that’s engulfing, inviting, smooth. The melancholic attic that you can’t resist visiting, full of memories, full of feeling.
“Oh, that loyalty of yours in the mist of all temptations.
The night is blessed with darkness which makes way for light in the morning.
I am the night.
Nobody escapes me.
You knew it.”
Sigh. So beautiful G, but so sad too. For you today, I wish a room downstairs with a couch in a sunny window, that you can curl up with, perhaps with a great book.
Xoxo
My dearest R,
Thank you so much for your kind and generous praise. I love your comment. You made my evening. But then you always do that.
Sending you extra hugs tonight.
xoxo
I knew there was a reason I slept so well, must have been the extra hugs 🤗. Thank you G.
Happy Friday 🌸💓🍹
You are so sweet, my dearest R. Thank you for the flowers and the drink 🙂
Have a fabulous weekend.
xoxo
Great piece, and congrats on being recognized again.
Thank you so much.
You are very graciously welcome so much.
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That’s wonderful. As I wrote over there, it’s a whole world in itself. Sooo much. Congratulations and Thank You! ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my dear 🌸🙏🌺
My pleasure!!! 🙂
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