my piece “Attic Melancholy” up at Free Verse Revolution #short prose #poetry #poem

You’ve remained there forbidding my laughter for fear of not forgetting me.
Oh, that loyalty of yours in the mist of all temptations…  

You can read my piece here

@short-prose-fiction

image: Sinisa Botas; Sgutterstock; [link]

 

43 thoughts on “my piece “Attic Melancholy” up at Free Verse Revolution #short prose #poetry #poem

    1. Aw,,, Ash. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. May the sun come out (Canadian accent here) 🙂 and may you have a beautiful day.

       
    1. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, my dear. I miss rainy days. Are there old toys in the attic? Do they whispers? Mine do that all the time.

       
    1. Thank you so much, Winnie. Always grateful to you for being here. Love and hugs to you my dear
      🌻💝🌸💕

       
  1. This is so richly dark, like mahogany. That kind of darkness that’s engulfing, inviting, smooth. The melancholic attic that you can’t resist visiting, full of memories, full of feeling.

    “Oh, that loyalty of yours in the mist of all temptations.   
    The night is blessed with darkness which makes way for light in the morning. 
    I am the night. 
    Nobody escapes me. 
    You knew it.”

    Sigh. So beautiful G, but so sad too. For you today, I wish a room downstairs with a couch in a sunny window, that you can curl up with, perhaps with a great book.
    Xoxo

     
    1. My dearest R,

      Thank you so much for your kind and generous praise. I love your comment. You made my evening. But then you always do that.
      Sending you extra hugs tonight.
      xoxo

       
      1. You are so sweet, my dearest R. Thank you for the flowers and the drink 🙂
        Have a fabulous weekend.
        xoxo

         

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