Dear Readers,
My poem “lovers without love” at Spillwords Press.
you, quest of lovers without love
your unrelenting islands beaten by the wind-blown sand
the sea..
Please continue reading here.
Gabriela
@short-prose-fiction
image: Anna Ismagilova; Shutterstock; [link]
“the sand receives me
in the distance a mast decides to flicker
the quest of lovers without love
on a wicker chair
a lonely glove”
I thought that was a beautiful closing. Reaching the zenith and then wearing a cloak to fade into everything. And my favorite line was also “a bed sighs’.
Thank you Watt. I am thrilled you like those lines.
I always enjoy your lines.
I always enjoy yours 🙂
So a amazing!
Thank you dear 🙂
Congrats on the publication. 🙂
Thank you, my dear. I hope everything is well with you.
Yes it is thank you. And you are most welcome. 😊
🙂
Way to go!
Thank you so much, dear. Have a lovely rest of the day.
congratulations on this poem being published. it is beautifully imaginative evoked such lovely imagery………I could picture myself through and in your words 🙂
Thank you for your beautiful comment. It touched my heart. Wishing you a wonderful rest of the day.
🙂 bless you!
many blessings to you too, Wendi.
thank you so very much!
🙂
Loved it, Gab. Many beautiful lines.
Thank you, Bojana. It means a lot to me.
Congrats!
Thank you, Andrew. I will get back to you soon. Hope everything is well.
You’re welcome. Things are going well.
Glad to hear. Talk to you soon.
Such a beautiful imagery. The lovers without love on a wicker chair…Took my heart away!
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, my dear. I am thrilled you enjoy the poem.
Congratulations!
Thank you so much, my dear.
A pleasure!
🙂
So melancholy, yet beautiful. Congratulations, Gabriela!
My most sincere thanks. Rob. I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope your day is going beautiful.
Congratulations! 🎆🎈💕
Thank you my dear Valerie. Your support means a lot to me.
Dear G. This must be one of my favorites of your poems. The words within it have lingered within me since I read it last. It’s like the words (like the clouds in your poem) are made of silk, they spill with melancholy yearning into the poem, settling into the hearts of your readers. The chair, the bed, the glove, the carnations…. The bed sighs, and so do I. You bring life and emotion to these images.
And not just because of this poem, you know that I am sending extra love and thoughts to you. I will not say any more, in my thoughts I sit quietly beside you. xoxox
My dearest R, oh, thank you so much for your gorgeous comment. You know how much you touch my soul with your words and how much your support means to me. I am grateful for your comment, your extra love and thoughts. I need them.
Wishing you a fabulous week and sending you plenty of love too.
xoxox
I wish I could do more dear friend…. thinking of you 💞💝 xoxo
I know sweetheart. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I am doing the best I can under the circumstances.
Sending you hugs and love.
I’ll write you more when I get a chance.
xoxo
Xoxo
Great poem by a great lady.
Thank you kindly.
You are very graciously welcome kindly.
Many congratulations! You’ve done well.
Thank you so much, Kally.
Such a beautiful imagery!❤️
Thank you so much, my dear. Love and hugs to you.
Dear G,
Many beautiful lines and this one got me:
‘alienation
empty hearts expecting to be slaughtered’
Powerful imagery and I saw this in my mind and its wow!
Congratulations on your publication. I’m always so proud of you. 🙂
You make the world a better place.
Dear Charlie,
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the congrats and the praise. Your kindness and generosity means a lot to me.
Wishing you a beautiful blessed day, my friend.
G.
You are welcome my friend. 🙂
Kindness is from the heart and the world today needs peace and kindness.
It does indeed. Blessings my friend.
🙂
Good evening G.
Congrats on having this gorgeous piece of writing published. This is one of those that touched our souls.
My most sincere thanks, Drew.
Wishing you a fantastic day.
G.
I’m never disappointed when come by to say hello. Beautiful G.
Hey there, Ash. Thank you for your wonderful comment. I hope everything is well with you.
All good G. Wishing the same for you!
Thank you.
That photo is a lie to melancholic faces.
I would rather just be alone.
Spillwords seem to be a good place,
For you and your words.
Scott, I am struggling to understand the phrase “that photo is a lie…”
Your words, your images, the pictures from you camera, they are all just so magical and authentic that it seems like it’s a life.
I know my over exaggeration isn’t doing me and the world much god. Sorry for writing something that could have seemed actually quite offensive at the 1st go.
Hey Scott, I did not think it was offensive. I just did not understand.
Thank you so much for your praise. It means a lot to me.
Wishing you a fabulous day.
Have a wonderful day!
You too 🙂
That’s wonderful 😊
Thank you, dear 🌸
Gabriela, I found myself lost in how your poem starts out. Your words took me to that sea and the wind-blown sand. Thank you for bringing me a beautiful diversion to experience for a few minutes.
I am always humbled by your beautiful comments. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for every word you send my way.
Blessings and a beautiful rest of the day.
Congratulations.
My most sincere thanks Aruna.
You are really amazing poet in the world of verses.welcome like a most shining star,dear!!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟☄☄☄☄
I am humbled by your comment, dear. Thank you.
Most welcome,dear!!🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Congratulations!
Thank you kindly 🙂
Nice one, Gabriela. The imagery really sticks!
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I am really glad you think so.