trees whisper, cries of cloudy skies
inaudible, unseen, you, Astraea,
you push me on a long-forgotten trail
the ocean…
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my new poem “the lonely poetry of night” published by Indian Periodical #poetry #published
Published
Wow, the last few lines says it all..
Aw.. thank you so much my dear. Glad you like those lines.
My pleasure always for your brilliance
You are too kind, my dear. You made me blush. Hugs to you.
Congratulations for the recognition of your amazing work, Gabriela.
I particularly love the following lines:
“the plight of souls sold for two pennies in slave markets
inside the lonely poetry of night”
Thank you so much. I am really humbled by your comment. I love those lines two. And your vocals. Remember that 🙂
You’re welcome. And thank you for your kind words. You might be the only person on the planet who likes my vocals. 🙂
I don’t believe that at all. I think you are the only person on this planet that doubts your vocals.
I just saw this and have to add my two cents – I love your vocals too Rob.
Now there are two! 🙂 Thank you, Rachel.
Congratulations, dear G! Another one of your great masterpiece. 😍
My dearest Winnie, thank you so much for your kind words and your support. You are a gem. Hugs and love to you.
You’re very much welcome, dear G! Hugs and love to you too!
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Wow! Congratulations, dear G! It is wonderful to see your amazing brilliance being acknowledged! ❤️
Thank you sweetheart. You are so generous with me. I have no words to thank you for that, sending you 🤗
🤗 is more than enough for me! Sending 🤗🤗 back to you. Always a pleasure.
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WOW! Congratulations!👏👏
Thank you so much, sweetheart 🙏
This was lovely!
Thank you so much. I am glad you think so.
I do☺️
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Congratulations! Beautifully crafted!
Aw.. my dear, so grateful to you for your kind words.
My pleasure.
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Great news. Congrats!
Thank you kindly 😊
Welcome!
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congratulations! so very, very happy for you!
Thank you so much, dear. I really appreciate your kind words 🌸
my pleasure! your poem is very good! 🙂
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Congratulations!! G. Indian Periodical is one of my favorite too. Run by a very talented and supportive editor.
Thank you Megha. It means a lot to me. I highly appreciate the talent and support of its editor too. He is great.
Sending you 🤗💕
Loved the poem just read on the website and left comment.Closing lines are so profound.
Thank you Megha. Very grateful to you 🙏
My pleasure.
Oh so much painful poem about the lonely poetry of nights-“the plight of souls sold for two pennies in slave market….”so much heart touching.
Dear G!! Congratulations for publishing your this so much emotional poem.🌹
Thank you my dear. I am glad you liked it💕😊🌸
Most welcome,dear🌹🌹🌹🌹
Congratulations – it’s lovely!
Thank you so much 🌸🙏
Uniquely you and beautiful…
Thank you so much, Eric! Great to hear from you.
Congratulations once again! The entire poem is haunting in its emotion and language, and the ending is so deftly done. The mention of “memories un-lived” particularly grabs my attention. Such a neat little paradox to think over!
Hey there, David. Thank you so much for reading. I love your comment. “Memories un-lived” I am glad it grabbed your attention. Now that I think more about it suits one of your characters. Am I right?
Hi, G! You’re welcome, and as ever the pleasure is mine. Yes, now you mention it, I think the phrase does suit one of my characters. I’m thinking specifically of Isabelle and her attempts to replace the missing sense of heritage with constructed placeholders. Is that who you had in mind?
Hey David. Yes, that’s exactly what I had in mind. Can’t wait to read more from your novel. Not home yet, but when I get there I will be able to comment more on your excerpts.
Great minds think alike!
I wait with anticipation. I hope you are enjoying your travels wherever they take you.
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Boom. Speaking of fireworks, this poem has certainly sparked something in me…. my turn to be beyond words. So much beautiful in here G. I am going to come back to this when I have some more time. But, wow, I love it. And congrats on being published again, you certainly deserve it xoxox
Thank you so much, my dearest R. Send me some fireworks. You promised.
xoxo
I know, fireworks for you 💫⭐️🌟✨💥 – I sent those with a boom and love xox
I got them. Love and hugs right back to you 🙂
Absolutely gorgeous – congratulations- the nature, your words and love –
Thank you Shantanu. You made my day, my dear friend.
My absolute pleasure
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Gabriela, thanks for adding some imaginative moments to the end of another day. Your words take me to a relaxing and peaceful place.
Aw.. I am humbled by your comment and glad I could add some good things to the end of your day.
My most sincere thanks for such a beautiful comment.
Woohoo, congrats.
Thank you Paul!
Most welcome
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Hola G,
Thankfully, I didn’t miss this masterpiece. It was a haunting masterpiece. Resonating deep inside one’s soul with these amazing image you always paint in our minds.
Gorgeous and inspiring.
Hope you are well. Always wishing you the best.
Hola Drew,
Thank you for the read and for your beautiful comment. You comment came in the mist of a hot afternoon in which I’m trying to relax. It was a pleasure to read it.
I am well (except the eyes that are starting to bother me).
Wishing you all the best too 🙂
What a fine pair we make. Two blind poets. lol
Lemonade and central air is your solution.
Thank you.
I am inside in the air conditioning, but I am drinking some kind of kale juice. It’s awful. I will switch to lemonade 🙂
LOL . Why are you drinking something awful?
You make me laugh so hard G.
It’s supposed to be healthy.
Anyway, I already stop drinking it. As I said I’m switching to lemonade so I get get my dose of sugar 🙂
LOL . Want to laugh? It’s scorching here and I just made myself an expresso.
LOl. You know what? I was just thinking to get an espresso. Kid you not. Enjoy yours. It’s already made. I’ll go to Starbucks later 🙂
Enjoy.
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Who can resist such a starlit proposition? Very beautiful!
Haha! Thank you so much, my dear. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Such a magical proposition!
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And kisses!
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