delusion #poem #poetry

lurking at the margins of your love
my mind
does not expand and does not shrink
delusion
the lake reflects the light of a dead star
a seagull heavesย upward
an aching call
dissonance
the cosmic Adam does not care
that I was set on his left side

@short-prose-fiction

image: Eisfrei: Shutterstock; [link]

 

72 thoughts on “delusion #poem #poetry

      1. You are so good to me. Know that I enjoyed your Visual Verse’ piece. I left a comment on your blog ๐Ÿ™‚ I hope you got it.

         
  1. So beautiful dear G. From start to finish, the cosmic Adam, oblivious to the cosmic Eden beside him, and this… โ€œlurking at the margins of your loveโ€จmy mindโ€
    Wow.
    I would love to lurk in the margins of your mind, all the beautiful verse I might find! (That was an accidental rhyme ๐Ÿ˜‚).

     
    1. Thank you so much, my dear. Your every word warms my heart. And a beautiful fall dances in front of my eyes. Your fall… your verses, R.

       
      1. AW.. my dearest R. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I am hanging on it. It means a lot to me. Hugs to you ๐Ÿ™‚

         
  2. Good morning G,

    First read this while on a treadmill. Just so you know, your poetry reads just as beautifully in a sweaty gym.

    What a gorgeous opening line. To explore the frontiers of another’s heart and soul. Is there anything more beautiful? The beauty of your verse continues with touching images
    that you always do so well.

    Bravo G. Your poetry is a gift to the world.

     
    1. Good evening, Drew.

      I hope you had a great workout and a fabulous day. I didn’t really think you are going to like this one. Yet,you are kind as usual. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. As for the frontiers of my heart.. right now there is only one thought there: dinner ๐Ÿ™‚

      Have an in inspiring evening. Looking forward to you next post ๐Ÿ™‚

       
      1. Thank you, Drew. I am certainly going to enjoy my dinner.
        I am not telling you why. LOL.
        May the magic of this evening be with you!
        Thank you again for your kind words.

         
    1. Thank you so much, my dearest Winnie. I am glad you liked the poem. Flowers and hugs to you.

       
      1. Thank you gain, Jazakallah .
        Have a wonderful day.
        Gabriela

         
    1. Thank you so much, Hรฉlรจne. Your appreciation means a lot to me.
      Have a fabulous rest of the day.
      G.

       
    1. That is so true my dear. What an astute comment. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Sen ding you lots of love!

       
    1. Hey Charlie,
      Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I am glad you like that line ๐Ÿ™‚

       
  3. A unique poem.”a cosmic Adam dose not care that i set his left side.”most lovely image as your poem,dear!!๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

     
    1. Thank you so much. I am really grateful for your comment and happy you enjoyed the poem.

       

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