Crazy in love with you #short prose #flash fiction

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Galleria dell’Accademia, Florence, July 28

“Clara, he needs a haircut.”
“Who?”
Miguel rolls his eyes.
“David.”
“For crying out loud, he is a statue.”
“So? I wonder where the closest barbershop is.”
“Miguel, are you crazy?”
“Yep. Crazy in love with you.”

Excerpt from the manuscript “Glass Lovers”

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image: Marc Little, Shutterstock; [link]

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Published by Gabriela Marie Milton

Gabriela Marie Milton #1 Amazon Best-Selling Author, 2019 Author of the Year at Spillwords Press NYC; internationally published poet; poetry collections Woman: Splendor and Sorrow (Vita Brevis Pres, July 27, 2021); Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings (Vita Brevis Press, April, 2020)

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72 thoughts on “Crazy in love with you #short prose #flash fiction”

  1. Good morning G,

    A beautiful, l.oving excerpt to lighten a mood. Miguel is my kind of guy. Always ready to induce a smile. And apparently, giving one hundred percent of himself for love. What more can a woman want.

    Beautifull done my dear. Made me smile.

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    1. Good morning, Drew. I hope is more than a good one.
      Thank you for your kind words. You made my day.
      “What more can a woman want.” I have no idea. You tell me 🙂

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      1. Haha
        Let me see. To be awaken by a kiss, have a poem written in her heart, the rays of the sun touch her soul, and an orange sunset to close her day.

      2. Aw… what a romantic guy we have here. Actually I suspected that. What about breakfast in bed?

      4. Do your order your Bustelo from Amazon? 🙂
        I changed my mind. What about breakfast at Tiffany’s?

      5. Breakfast at Tiffany’s. An Audrey Hepburn classic on Truman Capote’s wonderful novel.

        Now, that in the sunshine state I get my Bustelo at Publix. My God, those supermarkets are immense. I ciould read War and Peace just walking down one aisle.

        Breakfast at Tiffeny’s would be delightful. I imagine they serve good coffee.

      6. That’s funny because I meant to ask you if you found your way to the grocery store. Lol Yes, Publix is big (in both senses) in Florida. I changed my mind again. No Breakfast at Tiffany’s. I want to go to Publix. I miss that 🙂

      8. That’s sounds great! But, Drew what I really want is a Cuban sandwich. Kid you not.

      2. Thank you again. I have to apologize to you. I did not get around to answer a question you asked. Please contact me again. The answer is yes.

      4. If my memory serves me right :guest post. I got a message from you. I can’t find it anymore. If it was a mistake please let me know.

      6. That’s good to know. Thank you. Now I have do figure out who did.
        Have a wonderful rest of the day 🙂

      2. I went to your site. I read the poem of the day. However, I cannot see a place to comment. Are your comments closed?

  6. No please. There are no comments section for those. Kindly check the blog section you will find everything I have written and the poems section too!

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      2. Oh, that’s so kind of you to say. Hugs 🤗 🤗🤗

      4. Oh. I wish. However, I really hope that you are ready, my dear R. Wishing you a splendid weekend 🙂

      6. That’s ok. my dear. Don’t worry. May you have the most beautiful dreams.

    1. sono perfettamente d’accordo. felice che David sia una statua 🙂 buon fine settimana, Flavio.

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    1. Thank you, Shantanu. I have no idea. Perhaps in ten years 🙂 Will you still be my friend then? Please..

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    1. Thank you sweetheart. I do not know yet. It’s going to take some time. Thank you for asking and thank you for your support 🙂

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