“Clara, he needs a haircut.”
Miguel rolls his eyes.
“For crying out loud, he is a statue.”
“So? I wonder where the closest barbershop is.”
“Miguel, are you crazy?”
“Yep. Crazy in love with you.”
Gabriela Marie Milton #1 Amazon Best-Selling Author, 2019 Author of the Year at Spillwords Press NYC; internationally published poet; poetry collections Woman: Splendor and Sorrow (Vita Brevis Pres, July 27, 2021); Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings (Vita Brevis Press, April, 2020)
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72 thoughts on “Crazy in love with you #short prose #flash fiction”
Good morning G,
A beautiful, l.oving excerpt to lighten a mood. Miguel is my kind of guy. Always ready to induce a smile. And apparently, giving one hundred percent of himself for love. What more can a woman want.
Beautifull done my dear. Made me smile.
Good morning, Drew. I hope is more than a good one.
Thank you for your kind words. You made my day.
“What more can a woman want.” I have no idea. You tell me 🙂
Let me see. To be awaken by a kiss, have a poem written in her heart, the rays of the sun touch her soul, and an orange sunset to close her day.
Aw… what a romantic guy we have here. Actually I suspected that. What about breakfast in bed?
That would be a good start wouldn’t it?
I would settle for sunshine, my Bustelo, and an inspiring poem from you.
Do your order your Bustelo from Amazon? 🙂
I changed my mind. What about breakfast at Tiffany’s?
Breakfast at Tiffany’s. An Audrey Hepburn classic on Truman Capote’s wonderful novel.
Now, that in the sunshine state I get my Bustelo at Publix. My God, those supermarkets are immense. I ciould read War and Peace just walking down one aisle.
Breakfast at Tiffeny’s would be delightful. I imagine they serve good coffee.
That’s funny because I meant to ask you if you found your way to the grocery store. Lol Yes, Publix is big (in both senses) in Florida. I changed my mind again. No Breakfast at Tiffany’s. I want to go to Publix. I miss that 🙂
Coffee and a crossaint in the fresh produce section?
That’s sounds great! But, Drew what I really want is a Cuban sandwich. Kid you not.
Sigh. You hit hard G.
Ohh! Amazingly well!
Aw.. thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it.
My pleasure always! I really did enjoy reading this!
Thank you again. I have to apologize to you. I did not get around to answer a question you asked. Please contact me again. The answer is yes.
You’re very welcome dear. Could you please elaborate which question you’re talking about? I am actually unable to comprehend it.
If my memory serves me right :guest post. I got a message from you. I can’t find it anymore. If it was a mistake please let me know.
Oh. Sorry, I didn’t message you anything. You must have mistaken me for someone else. 🙂
That’s good to know. Thank you. Now I have do figure out who did.
Have a wonderful rest of the day 🙂
Haha, have a great day doing that!😂
Have a great day!
Wow! Just can’t stop smiling. Good one there
Thank you kindly. I am glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Thank you so much, my dear Jen!
You’re very welcome My friend 💜🌼
I would love it if you could read my work on my page and give me feedback.
We’ll do, dear.
Thank you so much. I would definitely wait for your comment on every thing I post. You are a great writer.
I went to your site. I read the poem of the day. However, I cannot see a place to comment. Are your comments closed?
No please. There are no comments section for those. Kindly check the blog section you will find everything I have written and the poems section too!
Good one 👍😉
Thank you, my dear!
You’re welcome 😉
Loved it so so so much❤️
Aw… thank you 🤗❤️🌸
This is beautifully written!❤️
Thank you so much, dear 🙂
great use of words.
Thank you 🙂
🙂🙂YOU are welcome.🙂🙂
What a gorgeous snippet of your writing. This Miguel – such a charmer!
Thank you so much, my dear. Glad you enjoyed it 💕🤗
Yes, loved it G. It made me want to hear more of their conversations 💜🌸
Oh, that’s so kind of you to say. Hugs 🤗 🤗🤗
Hugs back lonely G. Hope you’re ready to settle into the weekend 🤗🤗🤗
Oh. I wish. However, I really hope that you are ready, my dear R. Wishing you a splendid weekend 🙂
I meant lovely not lonely. I need sleep!
That’s ok. my dear. Don’t worry. May you have the most beautiful dreams.
gli innamorati a volte sono fragili, come vetro, greetings!
sono perfettamente d’accordo. felice che David sia una statua 🙂 buon fine settimana, Flavio.
buon fine settimana a te Gabriela
Loved it Gabriela- when is the book coming out
Thank you, Shantanu. I have no idea. Perhaps in ten years 🙂 Will you still be my friend then? Please..
Friend are not for moments but for lifetime 🌸🌸
Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend, Shantanu 🙂 🙂
My absolute pleasure 🌸🌸
Most lovely lines of your novel.dear G!!when this novel are completed?💕💕💕
Thank you sweetheart. I do not know yet. It’s going to take some time. Thank you for asking and thank you for your support 🙂
Cleverly written story. The ending is definitely crazy with love.
Aw.. thank you so much 🙂
Thank you so much, Luisa 🙂