poetic expression: two published poems

spring’s floral certitude & the miracle of you
at Kashmir Pen Newspaper, Art & Poetry

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  1. Good morning G.

    They were both gorgeuus and as inspiring as a beautiful spring day.

    Spring’s Floral Certitude – Loved the lines of the poet tossing and turning like a flamenco dancer in Seville. Also adored the lines of closing your eyes and seeing him.

    The Miracle of You – I can’t tell you enough about this inspiring opening. The moon pouring soul inside the flesh.
    An enchanting opening that drew us in. This was brilliant from start until that wonderful finish. Truly resonated with me. A divine piece of writing.

    1. Good afternoon, Drew and thank you so much for the praise and for taking the time to comment. It means s lot to me.
      I am really thrilled you enjoyed the poems.

      Hope you are having lots of fun in the Sunshine state. Hope that the honeymoon phase that most of us have when we move in a new place never goes away.
      Be loved and inspired 😊
      Thank you again.

      1. Thank you for your kind wishes dear friend. I believe this honeymoon will last for a long time. I could never go tired of the climate or the palmn trees. Thank you always for your kind words and wishes. I hope they boomerang and multiply themselves in your life.

      2. I am glad you enjoy the place, Drew. I still have to explore it.
        Looking forward to your new post. I may be a little late because I am on the road but I will be there. Can’t wait to read it.
        May the palm tress inspire you forever.
        Oh, I forgot it gets cold during the winter in Orlando β˜ƒοΈ

      3. Laughing so hard. Yes it gets chilly, but nothing like the Big Apple.

        My dear, that you read my poem is enough of a thrill. No need worry about the hour.

        Be careful on the road. One day you may find a lonely poet on the next lane. Lol

      4. Drew, after you leave for a while in Orlando criteria change. All of them πŸ™‚

      5. That is absolutely fine πŸ™‚ I am carefully reading (again) your poem now so my comment will come soon.

    1. Aw…and your comment is so beautiful. Thank you so much, my dear friend πŸ€—πŸŒΈ

      1. Thank you. The fact that you liked the poems means a lot to me 🌸

    1. Thank you so much, my dearest Winnie. I am thrilled you liked them. Sending you lots of love πŸ’•πŸ˜Š and hugs πŸ€—πŸ€—

      1. My pleasure, dear G! I hope you will have a wonderful day when you wake up. Sending you lots of love and hugs too! πŸ˜˜πŸ’•

      2. Thank you Winnie. I woke up to your beautiful comment so it’s going to be a good day ❀️

      3. Yay! You’re welcome, dear G! I have seen your lovely smile and I hope you wear that. πŸ˜‰β€οΈ

    1. Ah, the iPhone. I meant to tell you what a witty and beautiful play of words. Thank you. β€οΈπŸŒΏπŸ’

    1. Hey Charlie, I am thrilled you liked the poem. Thank you.
      You are probably right. At a certain point I used to read Tristan Tzara. I do like surrealism in poetry and my fav painters are surrealists.

      1. Charlie, I am so grateful you think so. Yet, I am not so sure. Surrealism or symbolism? Fantastic imagery or symbols? The intersection of the two? Help me here.

      2. That so well said, Charlie. I love both: surrealism and symbolism.

  2. Oh my dear G!!have you seen my Kashmir?when?i love my Kashmir very much.there’s peoples are most lovely.your both poems are most wonderful like diamond,dear G!!most congratulations for publishing the both poems,dear friend🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

    1. Aruna, I told you I’ve never been to India. One of the editors at the Kashmir Pen liked these two poems. They were already on my blog. He asked my permission to publish them. One day I hope to get there, sweetheart.
      Thank you for the congrats!

      1. Sure.you should go to Kashmir-the heaven of India and love to Chinaar’s leaf.it is symbol of immortal love.you are always welcome in my heart and my Kashmir(India)🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

      2. That is so sweet of you to say. Thank you very much for your wonderful words. 🌸❀️

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