it rained in Nicaragua
last night
inside a cage with fraying ties
a little girl
sat barefoot on the ground
and while you wrote
your poetry in Florence
her tears were flowing
from my eyes
@short-prose-fiction
image: Suriyawut Suriya/ Shutterstock
ahhhhh! Pretty.
Thank you!!!!
Absolutely gorgeous
Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!
Sad, beautiful and amazing
Thank you so much for your kind words! They mean a lot to me!
Heartbreaking 💙
thank you sooo much for reading! yes, it is heartbreaking.
So sad, yet so beautifully expressed. Love it. 😘
Thank you, Simona! I am so glad you liked it!
Great poem! A short, but strong message that stopped my air and gripped my heart. Under the ground I wrote this
https://bogpan.wordpress.com/2018/06/23/land-%d0%b7%d0%b5%d0%bc%d1%8f-%d0%b7%d0%b5%d0%bc%d0%bb%d1%8f/
Thank you so much for your words! What a beautiful poem you wrote! To your site to read it again.
I read this poem again and again … and cry with your tears !!! Thank you for writing it !!!
Love. This.
Thank you so much!
Wow Deep
Thank you so much! And thank you again for your help the other day!
No worries at all my friend. Hope t is all good now
I think it is. thank you!
👍
Deliciously gorgeous. Ah💖! You are poetry perfect, G.
Ah… thank you so much to my marvelous poetess whose verses enchant so many! Much love to you my dear Y!
Ah ! Now I see it. I am sorry I panicked
Are we good now?
Phew! Yes. I am having gremlins on my blog. Hahahahaha
Oh wow this is so powerful
Thank you Kayla!
Very deep and moving especially the last few lines.
Thank you so much for your kind comment! I am thrilled you enjoyed it!
So much meaning in so few lines! One of the best poems I’ve read, I think. The ending is especially biting. The lines “and while you wrote / your poetry in Florence” come across as a strong accusation against those (us) who stay safe and happy while someone else suffers like this, and that accusation is especially poignant since the speaker seems to be the girl in the cage. So thought provoking.
Dear David, thank you for your extremely generous comment! Your interpretation of my poem is very perceptive. I am very grateful to you for taking the time to read and comment.
You are so welcome 🙂
🙂
Beautiful. Absolutely enchanting and haunting.
I am so grateful for your wonderful comment! Thank you!
It’s my honor to read beautiful artistry. Thank you for sharing.
oh, you are so kind! May you have a marvelous day!
Do you have anybody in mind?
I am in awe. This really was so depressingly beautifully done. Congratulations.
Such a high praise! Thank you very much! I am glad you liked it!
Really enjoyed it 🙂
🙂
G … so much more than words … Eric
Thank you, Eric! I am trying.
Beautifully thought provoking
Thank you for sharing
Thank you for reading and for your kind comment!
It was my pleasure ❤
🙏
that was absolutely touching and emotional
Thank you so much!!!!
This broke my heart! So, so beautiful 🙂
Qh,,, Thank you so much for your wonderful words!
my pleasure 🙂
Wow this poem is just incredibly amazing. It’s so deep and meaningful. Love this ❤
Thank you kindly!
My pleasure and keep on writing such amazing poems ❤
so beautiful
Thank you so much!!!!
Such beautiful words
Thank you kindly!
Welcome I also write poems by the way
I tried to get your site but I can’t reach it.
Did that work?
Yes, it’s working. Thank you!
Welcome
I can’t find a way to follow you.
Hmm how come?
Have no idea. I don’t see any following button
Close the app and maybe restart your phone and try again that’s what I always do
we’ll do!
K tell me how it goes
I should be following you now
You are thanks you
beautiful and haunting poem.
Thank you kindly!
It’s stunning
Thank you kindly!
Wondeful.
Thank you so much.
A sad poem which touch the heart,Dear G!!😯
I am glad you liked it. Thank you Aruna.
Wow, powerful!
Thank you so much!
emotionally stirring
Thank you.
Lovely piece of work
Thank you kindly.
You are welcome.😊
😊
So powerful, sad and beautiful 💛.
Thank you so much!!!!
My pleasure 🙂
🤗
Profound and beautiful!❤️
Thank you so much, my dear 🤗❤️🌸
Beautiful yet 😢 sad…
Thank you so much. I know it’s sad.