my love,
dawns are breaking in your eyes
virgins with unplaited hair
climb the mountains to the cave
where your songs
the fortunes tell
ah,
how your fingers touch the chords
how my heart swells at your sight
how your kisses burn my neck
how the mountain splits
the sky
walk the roads with your guitar
spread your fingers on my skin
I’m the part you’ve never played
I’m the one you’ve never had
find me
in the solstice of the lovers
in the breaking of the bread
lock me
deep into your body’s scent
melt me
in your tears of despair
and our love will never end
@short-prose-fiction
image: Ben Roman/Shutterstock
This is special.
If you say so, Ankit! Thank you 🙂
What do I say… :😶😶😶
You already know what I like the most about it.
I know, my friend! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Such a beautiful love drenched poem
Thank you so much, Shantanu!
My pleasure
🙂
How I have missed reading such beautiful writing,
Good morning, This was as special as the woman who wrote it, Simply magical.
Do hope you are well dear G.
Good morning, Drew and thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind words!
I hope too that you are well enjoying your day!
Arrived in New York last last night. Explored the entire state of Florida. Exhausted, but happy to be home.
My morning coffee hasn’t been the same without you.
Knowing how much your morning coffee means to you that was such a nice thing to say! Thank you! 🙂
I am glad you are home save and I hope you enjoyed your trip 🙂
Yes, all went well. Over the weekend, I will catch up with any posts I may have missed.
Please have a most gorgeous day. And don’t forget to smell the roses.
Mostly grass here. I am allergic to grass too 🙂
Relax and enjoy the magic of the weekend!
Laughing. Thanks. You too.
🙂
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I always want to drop to my knees when I read one of your beautiful poems! Oh my gosh how romantic your words are! 💕❤️
Aw, Christine you are melting my heart!Thank you so much!
This is very powerful
Thank you so much, my dear!
Absolutely magical! Very well written!❤
Aw…Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it 🌺
“Dawns are breaking in yours eyes/virgins with unplaited hair” how breathtaking was this section… the whole poem, really. Thank you for sharing! ❤️🌸
Thank you so much for your kindness, my lovely K! I am so happy you liked the poem 🌷🌺🌸
Wonderful lines”
Lock me…….will never end.marvellous dear!!🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
Thank you kindly, my dear 🌸
Most welcome,dear!!
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This is beautiful…wow I always admire romantic poetries. I also wrote poetries on my instagram’s blog.
Thank you so much! I am delighted you liked it.
Unfortunately my instagram account was hacked. I may open another one soon 😊
Gosh! How do you do it every time! Love it. ❤️
Aww… many thanks, my dear 🙏
Always a pleasure, my friend. 🌸
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Nice lines: “melt me
in your tears of despair”
Thank you, Frank!
magical and mystical it takes me to a beautiful realm of reading
Thank you so much for your wonderful words, Gina. You made my evening 🌸
you are welcome! it was very good!
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Hit me in the feels!!!! Bravo
Aw… Thank you so much, Ash!
wink wink as always
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epic
Thank you kindly!
What a fantastic love poem, you’ve penned my friend. Brilliant!
Thank you so much, my dear Tanya!
My pleasure the wonderful poems you pen are an inspiration!
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The wonderful poems you pen my friend are an inspiration!
Magical moments. Lovely..
Thank you so much, my dear!
It truly melted me.. Lovely it is
Your kindness always touches me 🌺🌷🌸
This is truly beautiful!
Thank you so much, Eugenia!
😉
wow!
Crazy beautiful! 💖
Thank you so much, dear. 💕
My pleasure. 🙂
🌷🌸💐
bell’esempio di buon gusto in poesia, erotismo soffuso e mai invadente
Grazie mille Flavio. I have no words to express how grateful I am for your support and how much it means to me.
Ti auguro una buona e magica serata.
I agree with all of the other comments, and will just add – Captivating.
Thank you. I am thrilled you think so.