recite my eyes,
in the glimmer of your eyes
recite my hands
in the tremble of your hands
recite my love
in the abyss of your love
recite me
and i will recite you forever
@short-prose-fiction
image: PinkCat/Shutterstock
recite my eyes,
in the glimmer of your eyes
recite my hands
in the tremble of your hands
recite my love
in the abyss of your love
recite me
and i will recite you forever
@short-prose-fiction
image: PinkCat/Shutterstock
Lovely!
Thank you kindly!
You are welcome.
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Absolutely beautiful. Miss the comments of Drew here. I loved to read his comment as much as I love to read your poems.
Thank you, my dear Jaya.
I am sure Drew will be very happy to hear that.
Have a lovely weekend!
You too π
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Where do I start lol.
I have no idea. Be creative. LOL
hmmmm interesting,
That hmmmm is the beginning of my recitation lol.
Fantastic π Now I am waiting for the guitar to start playing….
for someone who plays (mixes your voice) this is an interesting challenge. Don’t dare me lol π π
im smiling.
are you? π
yup I am lol, thank you, I needed that.
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That’s exactly what I am doing π
challenge accepted π
I am thrilled! What else can I say?
you’ll have to recite you cannot speak. That was the promise.
You know I can speak. LOL. I cannot sing unfortunately. And yes, I will recite, my dear friend! I am going to record this one and send it to you!
when I feel it I’ll write a poetry for this challenge, you can then recite it. fair enough?
You have a deal!
So lovely and so divine..recite me and I’ll recite you forever. Straight from the poet’s heart…another soul-stirring work, I feel so inspired when I read your works!
My dear Tanya, I am really humbled. The thought that I can inspire you is gratifying.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart! π
This is so very beautiful in its simplicity and promise.
Thank you so much, my dear! Your appreciation means a lot to me.
May you have a lovely weekend!
That’s so kind of you to say. Always a pleasure to read your verses. You too have a good weekend.
A pleasure you read yours too!
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I just love reading your poems, they are so reflective and thoughtful π
I love reading yours too. Your poems are beautiful!
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The absolute beauty of romantic poetry at its core; so lovely, my dear!! Your romantic poetry always makes me feel as if Iβm reading something thatβll be around for ages. β€οΈβ€οΈ
Awww.. my dearest K! Thank you so much. Such high praise.
You know what makes me happy, K? Touching the soul of my readers for a few seconds.
May you have a gorgeous weekend, my dear, and thank you so much for being with me at every step!
Touching the souls of readers has to be the best part of being a writer!! So far my weekend is off to a lovely start and I hope yours has been, too! Youβre welcome!
I am glad to hear, enjoy!!!!!
Yes, I am happy that this weekend started much better than the previous one!
Beauty
Thank you, Ash! I am so glad you like it!
You have a special way with words…love it!
Thank you, Ash! I blame that on the fact that I’m not a native speaker of the English language π
Really? Wow, even more kudos to you. Poetry is a lauguage all of its own, therefore, you’re quite fluent. π
Thank you, Ash! I like to think I’m fluent.
You have a great weekend, my friend!
You too
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This was beautiful! I really enjoyed it! π
Thank you kindly!
Very beautiful indeed.
Thank you kindly! May you have a blessed and peaceful weekend!
You as well!
So so beautiful π
Thank you kindly, my dear friend!
love the simplicity and beauty of your poetry! recite me sounds so romantic
Thank you so much, Gina! I am thrilled you enjoyed it!
very much dear!
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Really beautiful.
Thank you kindly!
Wow! Beyond brilliant this one is!
Thank you so much, my dear friend! I really appreciate your kind words!
WOW!!! LOVE all of this SOOOO much! The artwork is magic and how sweet and beautiful are the words!!! Cheers and Thank You! π€πβοΈ
AW… Thank you so much for your kind ! Your support is much appreciated!
My pleasure! π
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What a wonderful way to end the poem! Wonderful poem. π
Thank you kindly! I am glad you enjoyed it π
No problem. I really enjoyed it. π
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