don’t wait for me #poetry (revised)

don’t wait for me

please find another lover

i’m riding camels with the Bedouins

watching the golden sunset coiling in the desert

i’ll enter Alexandria by morning

the day Mark Anthony committed suicide


don’t wait for me

go find another lover

i’m in the Île de la Cité on Friday the thirteenth

the Friday which forever will be feared

the smell of burning flesh is choking me

the Knights Templar are shedding tears


don’t look for me

until I’m writing you again

past sunsets murmur in gray fumes

and in the night before His resurrection

like Mary Magdalene

i’m looking for a tomb




57 thoughts on “don’t wait for me #poetry (revised)

  1. Ooooh, the power behind this!!!! It’s got a hint of sadness, like a splash of vanilla, but it’s so… strong. Ready to move on. And great metaphors! Loved this one, dear friend!! ❤️

    1. Awww…thank you from the bottom of my heart, my dear K! I am so glad you enjoyed it!
      May you have a lovely day! 🌺🌷💐

  2. Beautifully penned, with historical references you fused together your present state of mind! It is ok sometimes to be riding with Bedouins…

    1. Good afternoon, Drew!
      Mission accomplished. I wanted to leave you speechless😊
      Thank you for the praise!
      I hope you are enjoyed your travels.

      1. Leaving me speechless is not an easy task. Lol. Back in NY getting ready to tour all of Florida with my guests.

        This write was truly marvelous. Loved the repetition. So perfectly done. You are amazing. Do you cook too?

      2. Thank you again, Drew!
        Enjoy Florida!
        Do I cook? Lol
        I would rather not answer this question 😊
        Have a fabulous day!

    1. Thank you for reading my poetry and for showering me with compliments. I am very grateful to you.


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