my love,
receive my spade and take my cross
my heart will always be with you
i’m going to the realm of the unknown
remember me from time to time
on torrid nights
when conjured Spanish fountains
softly moan in pain.
my love for you will shine in every star
and it will be in every cloud you see
now time has come to swear to me
my beauty from the lands i’ve never known
that you’ll remember
stars are far
enemies by you
*
@short-prose-fiction
imagine: Elijah Lovkoff/Shutterstock
Wow. Simply beautiful ❤️
Thank you so much! 🙂
My pleasure
This is deeply beautiful
Thank you kindly!
Absolutely gorgeous! You are on fire with the poetry this week!! 🔥❤️🔥❤️
Aw… thank you so much my dear K! Very grateful for your comment! Have a lovely day🌷💐🌺
It’s so so beautiful.
Delighted that you liked it! Thank you my dear! 🙏
Spanish mountains moan in pain. I moan for Enrique eglesias 🌺💖 can you help , Chiquitita ?
Enrique Iglesias? Oh, sweetheart, I am afraid that I can’t help you with that 🙂
Sending you lots love!!!
I am glad to have you and read your fabulous verses. Thank you for writing.
As usual, the queen of poetry is so kind to me. I am glad I’ve found you!
Yippee. Take good care 😊🌸🌈
You too!!!!
Have you seen a live bull fight with those handsome matadors ??
I actually did! 🙂
Oh ! my!!!
🙂
My Penelope Cruiz
😊🌷💐
🌺🌈🦋
What about Fernando Alonso ??🤓
The racing driver? No. 🙂
Lol. Sad
Indeed. LOL
Most lovely n awesome,my dèar friènd!!
💐🌷🌸
So beautiful! ❤️
Thank you!💐
My dear G. The disturbing thought that I never received a reply from you just woke me from my sleep. I have no doubt I was the first person to comment on this breathtaking post.
Since childhood, I have been a great admirer of the sky, thus, the lines of your love shining in the stars and in every cloud you see truly resonated inside me.
This was so beautiful. Erato would be proud.
My dear Drew, I am so sorry, but there was no comment from you on my blog. I told you that WP is conspiring against us 🙂 I thought you did not comment because you were working on your novel.
Now: Good morning! Thank you so much for trying the second time! It means a lot to me!
“breathtaking post” , aw… you are going to convince me that I write beautiful poetry. You are so sweet, and so generous, Drew.
May the sky shower love on you every day! May you have a beautiful day and a night filled with stars!
Can I tell you a secret? I’m drinking coffee this morning 🙂 Guatemala with heavy cream instead of milk 🙂
Are you posting tonight?
Apologies, Good morning. The sudden realization that I never received a reply from my comment actually woke me up from a sound sleep. (Crazy me dreaming of blogging). Thankfully, I didn’t make a babbling fool of myself with comment since I was still half asleep.
Regarding your misconceptions as to why you found no comment from me; my phone and WordPress settings are fixed to immediately alert me when you post. (As you can see, I do have my priorities).
Now: I just read your poem with my morning coffee. It was even better the second time around. Simply wonderful.
Since we are sharing secrets, I will let you in on one. I had my vitamins with a grapefruit.
Not exactly the breakfast of champions.
As for tonight’s post; yes there will be one but I am afraid you will not be totally pleased. Smiling. Have a glorious and inspiring day.
I will have to work on my settings too, so I will not miss any comments or posts from you.
That will be my Saturday! On “lonely Sundays” I scribble words as you know 🙂
As I write I am half asleep, and I have to do something to wake up. The coffee did not do it.
Did you eat the entire grapefruit? LOL
Thank you again for reading my posts and for your wonderful comments!
Can’t wait to read your post tonight!
Have a great day, Drew!
It was a small grapefruit. You too G.
🙂
😊
Profoundly deep and expressively beautiful.
Thank you for your kind words!
Tender and touching words.
Thank you kindly!
Sweet loving words. Thanks for sharing it at dVerse community. Would be great if you can also visit and comment on other poems linked up. Have a great weekend.
Thank you so much for your kind words and for having me at dVerse.
I did visit with other bloggers. Left quite a few likes. It will be my pleasure to comment in the future.
Have a fabulous weekend and thank you once again!
This is wonderful and tender. Love the way you express a love…
Thank you kindly! I am delighted that you liked it!