summer fantasy #poetry

my eyes are water wells

mirroring your body

into a time which shrinks

my lips shine on stained glass

windows to the sea

a virgin violin

faints into your lap

sick with jealousy

the summer hangs in trees

seduction

fantasy

 

57 thoughts on “summer fantasy #poetry

    1. Thank you so much! I hope you know I love your poetry, and your appreciation means a lot to me!

       
  1. For some reason it appears as if my messages aren’t successfully going through.
    Good morning. You have the wonderful talent for injecting emotion, scents, and senses
    in your exquisite poetry. This piece was vivid and beautiful. The brush strokes of your laptop are always so perfect. Some write poetry. Some write beautiful poetry. You and a few other poets, have the ability to inspire and mesmerize.

     
    1. Good morning, Drew! I think somebody is conspiring against us 🙂 Seriously most of the time your posts do not appear in my reader. I have to go to your site to read them. I complained to WP once. I might have to do it again.

      As for the praise, my dear fried thank you soooooo much! Your words are more exquisite than my poem. You are so sweet. No sugar 🙂

      Laptop? How do you know I have a laptop?
      Haha! Enjoy your morning!

       
      1. Laughing so hard. You once mentioned you liked a poem on your iPhone but didn’t want to respond until you reached your laptop.
        (I often do the same, but I am an Android guy).
        Many people tell me they don’t see me in their reader. (Are you following me? LOL)
        As for the praise, it is very deserving. I often read your work two or three times. So Ms. Academic, you indirectly are teaching me poetry. I hope you will see that in some of my future work.

        Thanks. Going to sweat things out in the gym. I hope your day is wonderful and inspiring.

         
      2. Haha! I know I said that, but I did not think you will remember. Yet, you did 🙂

        Ouch! I thought I was a muse not Ms. Academic (are these two mutually exclusive?) LOL
        I am honored that I can inspire you. It really warms my heart, Drew. I can’t wait to read your Thursday post.
        Cheers to a great friend!

         
      3. Bullet points

        – Funny muse. Please get that right.
        – I have been told “eres muy detallista.” I
        wear that compliment with pride.
        – You do inspire. You deserve to have my
        following (although most of them are of
        your same gender).
        – Thursday…Ay. I must have about 25 or 30
        to choose from. Not sure which. I have
        been very inspired of late.

        Cheers to a wonderful lady.

         
      4. Thank you! Will you please send the bullet points in PowerPoint next time? LOL

        I can’t wait to see what you choose!

        Have a great day at the gym! I am going to my flamenco lessons 🙂 🙂 🙂

         
    1. I am humbled by your words. Thank you so much! Yes, the artwork is beautiful. I love it too.

       
      1. I see, I have a proposal, lets have a mutual exchange, I’ll teach you music and you can teach me to write something like this. hehe, just kidding. Wait a minute, old poetry??? hah, now I see, A solitary reaper by William Wordsworth, Home they brought her warrior dead by Lord Alfred Tennyson, just naming a few here, that would be old poetry according to me. I like this so much this is worth Deciphering and my time. I wonder what the writer means by Summer hangs in trees seduction fantasy, maybe she can’t live the summer life, summer love she just fantasizes.

         
      2. My parents tried to teach me music when I was a kid. It did not work. I have no talent. No need to teach you how to write. Your writing is beautiful, my dear friend!
        Oh, those are big names! I am so glad you like their work.
        Indeed 🙂 you know me by now.

         
      3. You are kidding me, This poetry right here is a fine example of your talent my dear friend, I envy you in a positive and motivating way.
        Oh I’m a fan of such poetry and lyrics.
        and wow looks like I nailed it. 🙂

         
      4. Thank you so much! Let’s hope our next project will be a good one too 🙂

         
      5. Talking about It, I’m just working with it, I have already made two short pieces ( yet to record) and I have mailed you my new piece. And for reference I am thinking of sharing you a similar piece by my fav artist.

         
      1. Most welcome my friend!! I will read your new three post n reply you tomorrow.dis time i have most tiered coz of preparation of cultural programmes for Independece Day of India.plz wait for me n don’t go anywhere.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

         

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