Love in Venice #Excerpt from the manuscript Glass Lovers

“Would you like to remain in Venice forever?”

He looks at me. His eyes green, his hair dark like the depths of the tropical forest in inky nights when the moon never shows.

I bite my lip.

“Oh, no, but someday I would love to live here for an entire winter.”

“And what would you do?”

“I will walk every night in Piazza San Marco, at that very moment when the silence becomes so permeable that my steps can be heard from the moon. I will look for a new love in the heated, mysterious, thrilling nights of the carnival: changing mask after mask, dress after dress, smile after smile, pain after pain. Every morning I will mix secret essences of perfumes, seeking for the one that could revive the mystique of my body, intoxicate my soul, empower my mind. Every twilight I will dive in the coolness of the Adriatic sea; my body shivering, my soul revived. In the night I will go to consult astrologer after astrologer in the less known quarters of the city.”

I stop.

I look at him. His eyes engulfed by passion, his dark hair touched by a mellow breeze.

The sound of a church bell tears apart the moist air.

He whispers:

“Tonight there is party at the Doge’s Palace. Would you like to come with me?”

“I am not going to parties anymore.”

“Why not?”

“I died long time ago, by mistake. Now I am just a Venetian mask.”

For a moment he looks flabbergasted.

His lips try to bite into mine. In a flash, I avoid them.

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44 thoughts on “Love in Venice #Excerpt from the manuscript Glass Lovers

  1. These little excerpts are intriguing. Leaves your readers wanting more.
    The Piazza San Marco dialogue was perfect. Your writing voice never intrudes. For example, your descriptions are subtle and flow smoothly in your work. Can’t wait to read more Amiga.

     
    1. Thank you so much, Drew! Your time and your appreciation mean a lot to me! Can’t wait to read a new piece by you!

       
      1. No, I would not get tired. Your poems are beautiful! Wait… A dozen? Are there a dozen muses? 🙂 🙂 🙂

         
    1. My dear B, thank you so much for your generous comment. I am on the road . Stopped at a gas station. I will get back to you later.

       
      1. Oh you do not have to feel bad! We all have busy lives . Thank you for taking the time to read today! 🌷

         
    1. Thank you my dear Pradita. Glad you enjoyed and also glad to hear from you! I hope everything is well. 🌹

       
      1. I am well too, thank you for asking. I am looking forward to reading more of your posts!

         
      2. I am glad to hear and thank you for your kind words. If you have the time I just posted. 😊

         

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