fated cravings #poetry

i was born under the salty light of underwater stars

the air was filled with songs of yellow chrysanthemums

when autumn leaves were burning

the neurotic passions of forgotten lovers

three fates surrounded silently my rosewood cradle

the Spinner threaded all my life from purple silk

her fingers soft like autumnal blisses

her lips a nest of loving birds

the Allotter gave me the sensuality of painted nudes

which interrupt the sanctity of times when church bells toll

the Inevitable fated me with your aquatic soul

and since then I have been craving for your body

liked wisdom craves for ancient scrolls

 

46 thoughts on “fated cravings #poetry

  1. I’ve sea in my veins, too, and this really speaks to me. I love the image of autumn’s leaves burning the neurotic passions of forgotten lovers – summer being lost to fall. Brilliant writing!

     
    1. Thank you so much, my dear friend! Such high praise! How is everything going? Any new post?

       
      1. You deserve more my friend.
        No new post for me, Im working with the our collab. It is half done, I’ll need to find the icing for my cake, I said half but recording and mixing takes some time. Once im done I’ll send it you. Im always hoping that you will like it. lol.

         
      2. Thank you, you are so kind to me. I am so grateful for your work! Can’t wait!

         
      3. I thought I repiled, I’ll do it again, I really think you deserve more. I’m working with the music, writing process is almost done. Now I’ll need to record it and mix it, while doing that I need to find those sweet notes. I can’t wait to see your recation on that. I hope you will like it. 🙂

         
      4. Oh, I have no words to thank you. my friend! I am sure I will love it! You are very talented!

         
  2. Amazing ! It’s fabulous , the way you write. My sweet sweet poetess, there is not one like you here. I fav this. Want to frame this and hang it up on a wall where I can read it always 😊

     
    1. Thank you soooo much! I am really humbled by your words. There is a marvelous poetess much better than me, and that is you, my dearest Y!!!! Lots of love!

       
  3. A wonderful piece. Several great lines here, for example; neurotic passions, three fates, and Spinner, Great imagery in these lines. Then, the cheery on top with those last two beautiful lines in the finale. Magnifique.

     
    1. Ayyyy…. gracias a un amigo maravilloso! Thank you for taking the time to write such a thoughtful and beautiful comment! I am going to a Brazilian place tonight 🙂 so, obrigado a um amigo maravilhoso! Wait.. magnifique is in French, isn’t it? 🙂 🙂 🙂 Have a wonderful afternoon!

       
      1. Lol. Yeah it is French. Enjoy the Brazilian. Always a pleasure reading you. I won’t be posting until the new theme is set up properly, but I will read you and a few others. Have a gorgeous afternoon.

         
      2. Thank you! You have a good afternoon too! Let me know when you post. Sometimes your posts do not show in my reader.

         
  4. like velaskes painting
    in the endless autumn
    the thin thread of air
    fatally bound
    Arachne

    my heart is not wise
    my body locked
    in autumn leaves
    forever

     
      1. ah, no, no! this is just a comment, dear G! I just can not write my admiration of your verse in another way!

         
      2. My deepest thanks to a great poet! I am really humbled. Mend my heart with your verses! Russia beat Spain.. I am not well right now 🙂 Can I get another poem? 🙂 Kidding! Thank you again from the bottom of my heart!

         

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