she is just eyes #collaborative poetry

“she is just eyes,” a poem in collaboration with bogpan. You can find more of his wonderful poetry on his blog.

she is just eyes

tonight
the moon rests on her neck

i write with a black feather her words
fragile lines on my palms

a sibyl prophesizes

a buzzing bee

reaches out like a cat

above the hills of Florence
like Galileo Galilei I exclaim
“And yet it moves”

the bee lands on her shoulder
my eyes are burning blue

 

12 thoughts on “she is just eyes #collaborative poetry

  1. Thanks for the wonderful work together and the perfect performance. I am proud that I have the honor of working with such an exquisite author. A heartfelt thank you!

     
    1. Thank you! As my co-author you should shower me with compliments 🙂 🙂 🙂 It was my pleasure to work with you! Your poetry is marvelous!

       
      1. aww, your aesthetic, exquisite poetry is a great pleasure to read! unfortunately, I’m weak in compliments and I only write what I think and feel! the pleasure of our joint work is absolutely mine !!!

         
      2. To me you are doing more than fine when it comes to compliments! 🙂 🙂 🙂

         

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