night-time ecstasy #flash fiction

The lake was hidden in the middle of a secret cherry grove.

For thousand years its face silent; its beauty unknown; its deep desires unspoken.

One night a magic breeze blew above its waters.

The lake and the breeze fell in love.

*

Waves and tongues of air caressed each other

Flames of passion lit a violet sky

Whispers of occult desires made the cherries blush

Bubbles floated in the air

Murmurs of love filled the universe

Fire

The ecstasy from the beginning of the world

*

In the morning the breeze died. The magic lake shed dark tears.  Inside its heart the breeze’s memory gave birth to spellbinding aquatic flowers.

 

41 thoughts on “night-time ecstasy #flash fiction

    1. Good morning and thank you so much!! I thought you were already in love 🙂 🙂 🙂

       
      1. It does not matter if it is a word or not. tell your sweetheart to read what your wrote here. please tell her. you want her happy.

         
    1. Thank you so much! may you have a day filled with lots of love! and murmurs 🙂

       
    1. Thank you my dear friend. I am hoping for a happy ending 🙂 by the way, did you post today?

       
  1. poetry in prose … a fairy tale
    in a magical tale … the crystal lake with its perseverance and the air with its mobility …. the tears give birth to the beautiful lily … violet flower lily …
    the magical pen of a sensitive master !!!

     
    1. the magical poet pays me compliments! thank you so much,! I am going back to your post to re-read.

       
      1. ah, a refined answer again! unfortunately my words are weak shadows of my feeling .. the picture in front of my eyes … ah, the lake hidden among the flowering cherries … the pleasure is entirely mine !!!

         
      2. everything is thanks to your words, these are just reflections, dear G !
        oh, how long is the time for your answers, sometimes after such magical tales!

         
  2. ‘Waves and tongues of air caressed each other …’ A line that’s doing things to my mind .. a line I’ll always covet … this is writing of the best kind … that makes you feel something inside. Well done G – as always. Eric.

     

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