night-time ecstasy #flash fiction

The lake was hidden in the middle of a secret cherry grove.

For thousand years its face silent; its beauty unknown; its deep desires unspoken.

One night a magic breeze blew above its waters.

The lake and the breeze fell in love.


Waves and tongues of air caressed each other

Flames of passion lit a violet sky

Whispers of occult desires made the cherries blush

Bubbles floated in the air

Murmurs of love filled the universe


The ecstasy from the beginning of the world


In the morning the breeze died. The magic lake shed dark tears.  Inside its heart the breeze’s memory gave birth to spellbinding aquatic flowers.




41 thoughts on “night-time ecstasy #flash fiction

    1. Good morning and thank you so much!! I thought you were already in love 🙂 🙂 🙂

      1. It does not matter if it is a word or not. tell your sweetheart to read what your wrote here. please tell her. you want her happy.

    1. Thank you so much! may you have a day filled with lots of love! and murmurs 🙂

    1. Thank you my dear friend. I am hoping for a happy ending 🙂 by the way, did you post today?

  1. poetry in prose … a fairy tale
    in a magical tale … the crystal lake with its perseverance and the air with its mobility …. the tears give birth to the beautiful lily … violet flower lily …
    the magical pen of a sensitive master !!!

    1. the magical poet pays me compliments! thank you so much,! I am going back to your post to re-read.

      1. ah, a refined answer again! unfortunately my words are weak shadows of my feeling .. the picture in front of my eyes … ah, the lake hidden among the flowering cherries … the pleasure is entirely mine !!!

      2. everything is thanks to your words, these are just reflections, dear G !
        oh, how long is the time for your answers, sometimes after such magical tales!

  2. ‘Waves and tongues of air caressed each other …’ A line that’s doing things to my mind .. a line I’ll always covet … this is writing of the best kind … that makes you feel something inside. Well done G – as always. Eric.


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