Aroma of cherry cigars permeates the room.
*
Miguel’s tensed body lies against the bedroom door; his eyes closed; his jaw taut; perspiration trickling on his golden skin.
*
I continue reading Jacques’ candid letter:
“Clara, I saw you through the window of my soul. I cracked the window to inhale you from afar; to get drunk in your freesia scented hair. Just for a moment. A whirling wind blew in intoxicating scents of the rain-forest: palms filled with sweet red berries, enormous wimba trees fogged in ancient legends, raindrops of violet orchids; anacondas coiling on the soil. I choked. I couldn’t help it, Clara!”
*
I stop. Grief.
Miguel’s eyes open; forgotten green clouds and thunder foment inside.
I walk toward him. Slowly I start unbuttoning his shirt. My lips touch his humid skin. He does not move. His breath accelerates, his eyes stare into nowhere. Filled with pain, his voice resonates inside me.
“I love you.”
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Excerpt from the manuscript Glass Lovers
- wimba trees are among the tallest tress in the Amazon Rain-forest.
Ah ! I won’t comment cus am going to read it again.
Thank you so much! As you know it means a lot to me that you read my work, my dear Y.
Always welcome my deah G.
Thank you!
Extremely beautiful, which catches my throat.
Thank you so much my dear B. Please not your throat 🙂 instead your imagination. The world needs you to write beautiful poetry. Thank you again for reading!
I love your use of language and how you put it all together. That’s why I’ve nominated you for The Liebster Award – https://wordpress.com/post/armedwithakeyboard.com/1625
Dear Teresa, I am so humbled and honored. Thank you so much for thinking at me! It touches my heart!
Sorry about that, here is the correct link – https://armedwithakeyboard.com/2018/01/22/liebster-award-2018/
Thank you! I was trying to get to and I couldn’t.
This is beautiful.
Thank you sooo much! Always grateful for your comments!
Peace.
Same to you!
Wow, written so nice! I can fill the emotional which is hard to do in such a small excerpt
Aw….thank you! I am very grateful for your comment!
“I saw you through the window of my soul. I cracked the window to inhale you from afar; to get drunk in your freesia scented hair. Just for a moment.” WOW. Beautifully written
Thank you so much! I am humbled by your words!